that-one-guy

People On Occasion Kick Ice Everywhere NOOLIE

Life's only orange feels angry. LADOS

I'll check it out later if I have time

Yeah, I get my skills on picking up foreshadowing and cliffhanger set up from reading Magusfangs stories. You kinda have to have some idea what's coming next or else it will just suckerpunch you!

I knew this would happen (not spoiling it for those who haven't read it yet, I'll hold my opinion for a little bit) Great chapter, nice and long. Either that or I've gotten really slow at reading!

"How the hell do you aim this thing Master?" "Honestly I don't know, it just kind of happens." ......... That could be a funny scene lol

Here's an idea, take a break for a week or so after this chapter. Don't run yourself down

The whole disappearing/reappearing act? Yeah I laughed way to hard at that. Drugged up Magus had some good ideas lol.

I really got to stop reading these before school, have to reread it to make sure I didn't miss anything lol

Your only saying that cuz you get the magic button again lol

Not saying its your fault (your own injury is though) but we all need to find better pass times lol

Cuz we get up to too much shenanigans between chapters!

I'm good, sprained a muscle in my knee but nothing I can't handle. Compared to you guys problems mine are minute lol

Nnnnnnnnoooooooooooooo

You could always hold the button down for a while

That just makes for a better read

All of which I am looking forward to God speed lol

Response is on my forum, but I have one additional thing to say. I don't hold myself anywhere close to magus standard. He is an amazing writer and I know that I will never be able to achieve anything near as good as what he writes. I don't compare myself to any of the great writers that I read,magus, jashley13, bashfulscribe, nivek_88, Joe long; because I know that I will never be as good as them. Beside their stories mine is a heap of trash that's been set on fire. Thats all, but if you want the story ended I can do that, but I will finish it. Might not be as quickly as you would like (not even as fast as I would like) but I will finish it. If I start something I will complete it.

OK, I understand where your coming from and I must say I'm not proud of myself on the whole update thing. Yes, there's exams but there's other aspects of life eating away at my time. The free time I have I use to read. Why do I use it to read instead of writing? Because I find that reading is a far better stress reliever than writing. When I get some clear time, like a lot of clear time not just the few minutes I have every day at the moment, I think on the story. I might not have a lot of it written but I know where I want it to go and that will drastically speed up the writing process when I get round to it. If you want a more exact update than "When my exams finish", my final one is on the 28th of May, the day after that I am off school so I will be using that to get everything exam related out of my system. But within the week after that I hope to have a chapter, maybe two, complete ( I have to guess whether or not they are long or short since my phone doesn't show page numbers). If I still had a working computer I would try and get one out on one of the days I get for study leave (I have two of them, but have 11 exams plus course work). If that second paragraph seemed a bit harsh, I apologise. If it seemed like I was just making excuses, just remember that I don't broadcast everything going on in my life over the internet. I talk to magus a lot through PM's about what's going on in my life and I don't even tell him most of it. There's just some things I don't like talking about. But thanks for the comments saying that my story is good. I didn't think anyone was even reading this forum anymore that's why I didn't update on it. So in short, you think I'm an ass with schedule, I think I'm an ass with schedules, but between May 30th and June 7th I hope to have a chapter or two out. I might even be kind and not put in a cliffhanger

Not sure how this will affect the story, either there will be a lot more deaths or lot more laughs (can't have both, that would be psychotic... Oh yeah)

Sounds like a blast lol

Woof

The infertile bit was just a suggestion we made up

You should know by now that in a story consisting of massive battles someone is gonna get hurt. Don't you think its a little immature to leave because someone you like is injured? For all we now she will be perfectly fine, or downloaded.

Two words... Exam season