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Now I have to writers to keep checking on releases. You and Angeldust. You are both good writers and I am now hooked on your and his stories. Like I told him keep up the good work and as I stated before can not wait to see the third books release. HA HA. No rush on it. Now I am waiting for the next chapter of Northstar to come out. Like one of your fans stated that we all know how Northstar ends because of the beginning, but knowing you when you get back to the beginning i am sure we will be all surprised by the final ending you come up with. Maybe a second book. HA HA again. Keep the fingers limber and the girls bringing you more beer.

Just finished the newest chapter. Really enjoyed it. Really liked the way the spiders took care of the intruders and the remark of the spiders disarming the sheriff and he thought that Max meant his gun until Max stated that it would not be the gun that the spiders would take when he disarmed him. Come on you need to take down the sheriff and turn the info over to the police commissioner. I just hope the funeral is not Petra's mother. Also like the way that you did not take the lovely wedding away for Max and Emma by including Rick, Suzy, Jeeves and the professor in the ceremony. Keep up the good job. Will be awaiting the next chapter of GITG and Northstar. Until later. Keep safe and do not let the people you train to shot and blow things up do it to you. Keep the fingers limber and typing.

Sorry, it just that I never saw anything until today about the feelings about the girls activity. I have been with him also since the first chapter of BITG. I just looked and it says that I joined here on 14 August. Seems that the pages prior to 12 August did not appear on my computer. Finally got them all back and reread them and did notice that some people did voice their feelings about the way the story was going. Again I am sorry if I came off wrong. It was statements like that that got him and other writers banned from the other site and I just did not want to see it happen to him here. Again I am sorry if I offended anyone with my remarks. I really enjoy the stories that he writes and like I told him I am looking forward to more chapters.

Really people. You mean after reading all the chapters in the series BITG and Northstar and this one GITG you are upset about the girls making out with each other and the young girls that have been rescued by Max and the girls to get upset because they come onto Max and Rick and any other members in the family or house. Get off it. Remember these children have been conditioned to be used by adults for their pleasure. I have not seen any of the adults in these stories go after the girls or children first. In fact they tell the girls that it is not right and that the girls do not have to do this at all. in fact it was Suzy that told Rick to go ahead treat Tess with kindness. Remember Suzy, Becca, Cat, Jazz and Taji and Nadi were all abused by their captives and Max and the family have treated them with love and showing them nothing but love. If you are trying to get Magus in trouble with this site to have him banned by doing a witch hunt on him i suggest that you stop know was banned from one nameless site do to the holier than thou people. Remember this is and Adult site that only allows people 18 year and older on it. We are all adults and I for one like to stories on this site. Sure hate to see Magus banned from this site because now people don't like his writing or you really never read all his stories and are just reviewing this one to start trouble. Magus keep up the good work and I will be waiting for the newer chapters as they are released. The only problem is that I read them so fast that I start reading more stories on this site and other sites waiting for your next chapters. None on the nameless site though.

Great chapters Just finished both and am looking forward to the next ones. Hope the funeral is not any of the main characters. Already had one for Max's mom. Also hope the Suzy is not to mad at Sissy for getting hurt.

Great chapter. Will be awaiting the next chapter. Can not wait for the new school to open. Can not wait to see if the twins or the girls get to help Max out. If would be really nice to have the word spread around that a 6 year old kicked the butt of a gang member. Need to find out what the sheriff is hiding in his background. Keep up the great work. I am waiting for book 3.

got you there. I remember you stating that also before they shut you down.

I know that this is Magus site but I have read both of your stories and the only way to leave you anything about your stories to to review them which I did. My question is when is the next chapters coming out. I keep checking your site each day with no luck on newer chapters. But like the stories we are following on this site I will keep looking on your site for updates. Thanks again for the good stories.

Finished 22. Enjoyed it. Also a little concerned about the priest. About Jeeves and the Professor getting together, so what. You have two Androds with women and no one ever said anything about Alice with Amy or May with Marge so I do not see anything wrong with the new match up. Either completely change the priest's thinking about Max and the family or kill him off because I see him trying to bring down the house and everyone in it and then the children will be back were they were before. Being controlled by the evil forces of the world and everything that Max and the girls have done will be for nothing. Nice reference to boy wizard as it we did not know who you were talking about. And I agree with you. Can do magic but not fix eye sight. Will be waiting for the next chapters of this story and Northstar. Also will still be waiting for the Going Home story to be completed. Bring on the third book also. More to read. You are good.

No don't delay them any longer. I just pointed out the mix up of the names do that you know that when I post that I read the chapter. To me it is a minor error and was just to let you know that if you were saving the story to be released to another site if this site becomes another nameless site that they will be correct. Do not delay the chapters by doing more proofreading then is needed as that could cause more errors.

When will the next chapter of Northstar come out. I running out of things on this site to read. I am looking at some of the older stories on this site to read.

Sorry meant to post this under my name and did not know that I wasn't signed in on my phone. I am signed in now on the phone so that I can continue to post under my name.

Just finished reading your story and am waiting for more chapters. Have you written any more. Love your style of writing. keep up the good work.

But their comm links can tie into any communication satalite in the area. Alice did it in Chapter 63 of BITG to see the battle at the orpange. Also the Nanites are designed to protect their host so if they read the body as losing too much heat they will keep the body at correct operating conditions. Also if I remember for the original story wasn't he working on three or four bodies. And since the nanites inn the twins talk to them what is to say that they would not be able to reproduce to make new bodies. Quess we will just have to wait for the next chapters and hopefully not to long. Good going about their built in comm links being useful for only a hundred yards. They talked to each other over their chips across town in some of the stories.

I like the going home even if there is little or no sex in it. I would like to see more chapters. I lived his life trying to my life back after getting out of the service and no longer working for the letter companies. Keep up the good work. I notice that you used Marge in both Northstar and BITG and GITG stories and Marge in Northstar lost her lover named MAX. Was that just a slip or are you trying to tie two stories together. Like them all and keep the chapters coming.

Great chapter. Can not wait for the next one. Just remember that if you rebuild RED to include puncture resistant tires on it. That way the whole car will be bullet proof. Kick ass in the next chapter. Can not wait to see what type of aircraft he has designed to take him and the girls to Canada in. Will be waiting the newer chapters of the other two stories also. Well until the next chapter is released I will go back to reading other stories on this site. There are some good writers on this site. I try to ready stories that have more than one chapter to them because it gives me more iinsight of the writer. One chapter written years ago and nothing more from the writer means they got put off by the reviews. I sorry agree with you about not leaving a story unfinished. I have read stories on other site that are good but all of a sudden they just end and never completed. Like some of the stories on this sight that are tagged WIP and nothing has been done to the story since 2009. That is not a WIP that is an uncompleted story. Well I vented enough. Will keep waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

My thing about this chapter is that he built the car to be bullet proof (kefva armor in the body bullet proof glass) and then only puts standard tires on the car. If you remember from the BITG story the car could start itself, drive by itself and can go stelth. SO has was a van suppose to get so close to a car that could disable the van by sending a computer signal to the van's engine to shut it down. Also standard tires can blow out at high speed. I am sorry but I would have made sure that the tires were puncture proof. They do make than for cars to protect the passengers. Also at the end it never said that Max died. It just said that he hear light popping sounds and then it got dark..Guess we will have to wait for the next chapter. Also how were they going to get to school that morning. If you had read the other chapters he was at least one or two hundred miles away for their home. Remember he passed the van doing 100 miles per hour and laid the bike down into the two shooters. Also why take on the girls. No one know they were with Max except the family and I do not believe that they would do any harm to the girls or Max.

How about if he is just pulling our leg and he really has no intention of killing off any of the main players. Look at how much action he has gotten from all of us with just the statement that someone was going to die.

Thank you. Will be waiting for more. I like your stories and am glad to see you back. Keep up the good work. Thought for a minute that the censors got to you on this page also like the other link.

I have just finished reading the two new chapters and am now waiting for the next ones. I have just one question. Are you every going to finish Going Home or are you just going to let it go away unfinished. Love all three of your stories.