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Read it backwards. it says The next chapter will be posted on Wednesday. Now was that last Wednesday or will it be this Wednesday the 17th of December. Since he posted it yesterday I am assuming it is this coming Wednesday.

Another great chapter. Nice lead in into the attack. Also hope that the three of the have really great fun with Evan's mother and father in the vr world. Now about the zombies, please not in this story. I like sci-fi but if you put zombies into this story you will turn it into what the video games are all about today. Examples are Wolfenstein, Call of Duty Black Ops. Love playing these games until the zombies come out and they never die no matter what you hit them with. Also how are you going to protect the gang from becoming one when they get infected by the blood of the zombies. Also who are the going to be, the children that he is saving or adults that have been kidnapped and turned into zombies. Then you have Max ending up having to take the children or adults out and you lose the essence of the story. So if you what zombies do it in another story not in these stories. Please.

Yes they are expensive but worth it. Bringing her out of the hell hole she was in and getting her a better life makes all the expenses worth it. You have got to listen to your medic and family members now. Your doctor said walk or work your chose. Guess right now it is work until you get some of your past cleaned up. Keep safe and love all your girls and friends. Keep it safe and we will be hearing from you.

Hope that they show the new person the love that they show you. Also hope that they still don't do to much harm to your body unless they do it while giving you the outstanding love they have for you. Welcome back. But next time tell them what you are going to do. They are really worried about you and are worried that you might not return to them one day and then they will be really upset and hurt over losing you. Keep up the great work, both writing and training the newbees how to do their jobs and survive so that they can return to their love ones. Like I said welcome back.

Was the stray a four legged kind or two legged kind that Max and his girls bring home. Which ever one I am sure that the girls will like it. Good luck and hope that they do not hurt you to much.

I thought that you retired from having to go away on secret missions. If it was a mission be honest with her or begin sleeping again with one eye open. Or was it a training exercise to see what the newbees were learning. If it was a training exercise you should have told her and the girls that you had to go away for a while. Believe me that when they get you back they are probably going to put knots and bruises on your 50 something body for leaving them in the dark again. When you do get back we hope they do not hurt your hands to much so that it does not affect your writing. Wait a minute that is right you do not have to use your hands to type with because that have programs that will do the typing for you with just your voice. That is if they do not smack you in the mouth when you get back instead of kissing you on the mouth. Good luck and we will hear from you one way or the other. Will be awaiting the next chapters to read and review for you.

Ok. Found the link to your forum. Great story. Love cliffhangers. Need to see next chapter to see if she makes it or not. You are learning from the master cliffhanger (Magus) in leaving your readers wanting more. Just do not leave us hanging to long or we will move on to other writers on this site. To many stories are left undone or listed as completed and the story had no ending to it when it was stopped. Please continue the story so we know what happens to her sister.

How do you get to your forum. Your profile page does not have the link.

But we do not make it look like we had anything to do with the newbies getting their little bodies or feeling hurt. It was like they fell down ten or more times. Also remember the one did call him an old man. That is enough to try to teach them manners. But enough of me having flash back or is that flash bang memories. Oh great one I am waiting for you to lay some more wisdom on this scarred up old warrior.

That is a good lead in into book number 3. Maybe it will also be explained how he joined the Marines but became a Navy Seal. The only way to do that is to get out of the Marines and exlist in the Navy. Seals are Navy personnel only. Also maybe Rick and Nick met up in the past and this way Rick can recontact Nick to help Max and him with the Slavers/abusers. Only a hint. But I like the way that you throw items oout there for us to discuss and then either you use them or coimpletely blow us away by coming out of left field with a angle we never would have thought of. That is way you are the great writer and we just wait to see what other bait you dangle in front of us with the next chapters. Keep up the great work. See you. Alsao have fun with the newbies in your classes. Do not huirt them to much.

That is my feelings also. She can't be Max's sister because he would have also noticed the similarities between her and him and also Alice. Also how would she not remember her brother. Oh yeah that is right she had a concussion from the accident. She did not died only her father did and she was disfigured in the accident that plastic surgery had to be done to her face and body. That could explain it but I do not think so but only Magus knows and he will let us peons known in his good time.

Oh no here we go again. The master is at the helm. Now the new twist is Rick's daughter. Who is she. Another hiccup is that Rick joined the Marines yet he is a Seal. When did he change services, because Seals are Navy and he would have gone through the Recon part if the Marines. Do not believe that we ever had Marines in Buds training. Other than that it is a neat way to lead into book 3. The background of Max's parents. Keep up the good work. Also glad to see Max and Amy having alone time together. Will be waiting for more on all your stories. Still think that maybe a tie in between Rick and Nick to get each group to help each other in fighting the bad guys. Maybe the same group that is treating Carol is part if the group that Max and gang us fighting.

I will explain for those who do not know. An LZ is a landing Zone and a hot one is one that you are being shot at while trying to land or take off. It is really very hairy if you have not been through one and I was through at least two or three. Not a fun thing to go throough..

i have read ones by Angeldust and some others on this site. I haven't read anything by BW or pak40. I might start them today. I have also read some stories by other writers on this site and there are really some good writers here. Magus rest over the weekend. I know that you have toget ready for woring with the young pepople who think that they know it all. Those are the ones who have not been through the grinder yet (not shot at or jumping into hot LZ's), but they will learn in the future. They will survive due to the training that you and other instructors give them. Live long and prosper. Will see the next chapters up and running when you are ready to release them. Enjoy the rest of the weekend and give the little ones your love and attention. Remember the spider monkeys crawl on you because of their love for you.

How was your first day at your new job. Hopefully the students did not try to hurt you to much or was it the other way around. You did not hurt them to much.

Never tought of that. Woould make a very neat hands on training aid. And since it is the teachers he doesn't have to request it through channels to use and destory. Just think of the Shock and Awl the class will have of destorying the evil computer that let Magus down in our and his time of need. Hope he was able to recover the stories from the Hard Drive before it broke down. Was Alice able to download the memory before it died. We will only have to wait and see what the great Magus says.

Will he give it a 21 gun salute or drop a smart bomb on it an send it to its maker in bits and pieces when he buries it. Only Magus knows for sure and I am betting on a very loud explosion and possibly a mushroom cloud.

I thought that the name of this story sounded familiar. I remember that I started reading it on the nameless site and all of a sudden it was missing. Glad that you came to this site and I will pick up the story where I left off reading it. Do not mind cliffhangers as some say that they do not like. Most of us follow some of the greatest cliffhangers of all time here (Magusfang and Angeldust to name two of them). Just keep up the good work and welcome to this site.

I agree, maybe just certain members crossing over in the stories. That way you do not have to have everyone meeting up. Maybe Rick or Early meeting with Nick or Elliott would work or even TK meeting with Max after coming back from Russia.

The easiest way is to face it head on. They will love you for the man that you are. You can still do both (work and walk) just not the dangerous work job of jumping and getting shot at, unless you are guarding a shopping mall that is attached by deranged holiday shoppers and then you have to release the spiders and flyers on them. But listen to your doctor and family. The girls will love you for your choice. After awhile you will be so smothered by their love that all you want to do is get up each day and see what you can do for them to make their day very enjoyible. Like I said, get well soon and think of the family. Keep writing. You are good at it. Am waiting for the crossover books between GITG and Northstar.

Hope it isn't anything that will react with your pain meds. You know booze and drugs do not mix well. Good luck though and will be waiting for the next chapters.

Well knowing your twisted mind we can only think that it is Mike. Could be someone behind him holding a weapon on him. If not then Mike will be dead before he can take another breath. Alice or Amy will kill him without even thinking about it. May also will kill him because of Carol. Only you know the answer to that and you will tell us in your own time. My only question is how was Hind gunships get into the US without setting off every early warning systems we have without connections with the military. Oh yes that is right the letter companies would be the ones behind the two attacks. Let us know soon.

Great chapter. Can not wait until the poop hits the fan when Max gets back. True where is this great security that Max has around the house and who is shooting at them. Will they be able to breech the house and if so what will the body count be. You told us that the count ws going to be high. Hope that Carol is able to save Stella. Will she become another June/May. Her brain pattern uploaded to the house mainframe to be put into another robot body. Only you know and you will let us know in your evil wicked timeframe. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Figure out how Rick and Nick knows each other to tie in the two stories.

Who knows what lurks in the evil mind of Magus. Maybe Alice was programed to tell Max and June that they died. Would not be to hard to have bodies that looked like them too be buried. And if the bodies were to mangled up they would have been a closed casket so no viewing. Could be that the government took the father and daughter and put them into statis until needed at a later time and Max and the family will come across them on one of their raids and find out that they were giving the government and bad people the info against their will. Max blows the prison sky high and brings home the father and daughter. Never know. Only the wicked mind of Magus knows and he is keeping it away from us. Lets get the truth serium out and shot him up. He has let the premise of the third book out, maybe we can have him slip up with more info.

What David and Cynthia did not die and they are the moles. They are hacking the system because he built it and knows all about the bat cave and the spiders. HA HA the plot thickens. Only you the evil one knows and you are not going to tell us. Maybe we can get your wife to put truth sirem in your oatmeal the next time. You know we have the means to get you to talk. We just hint at something and you let it slip out in your drug induced mind.