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Well, I heard that he was injected with nanites and while fleeing a black-ops group was intangled in a friend's science experiment and dropped into an alternate universe. Oh wait that was another author's story. :Sigh: Like most I too am starting to worry as he had mentioned serious health problems. If it is that then my thoughts & prayers go out to him and his family. I know that if he had changed sites he would have dropped all his readers here a note.

magus left sexstories because of the admin's continuous changes of the rules without telling anyone what they were. The admin told the mods to start deleting his stories after magus, like quite a few of us, decided to move his tales. Unfortunately for them he got to complete BITG and I amongst others emailed copies to those that missed it. I too hope that he is okay and not just because it would be nice to see at least GITG brought to a close, but also because I am at an age where I've lost a lot of friends, family and most of all my heart. Unless he has asked a family/friend to advise this forum that he is no longer capable of posting for what ever reason. So hopefully he is convalescing and healthy enough to write more chapters for us to post when he can but mainly I hope that he is alive & well and holidaying at the cottage with very little modern conveniences. Be well and Take care guy.

Hey, seriously fangface has a great story going and like most talented writers his characters dictate where it goes, not him. Suggesting things is a form of review that lets an author understand what his readers think and maybe even feeds his muse. We all know that Max loves everyone, well maybe not everyone, and has continually stated that all he kneeds is Emma. So no he won't kick anyone out and he will feel happy for his momma, Madge, Suzi & Rick, maybe even relieved that he gets a break from servicing the ladies. Remember Alice does not have the authority to over ride Max and as May is June then she is the only one that could ever over ride Max or supercede his directives. Now M when & where are the latest chapters? Some of us don't have that long to be able to wait.

Why should Max move out, it's his house. Remember June is legally dead and thus everything went to Max if it hadn't already done so in his father's will. Have you noticed that it has not been explained who May is suppose to be? Is she his father's sister, seeing as she has his last name, yet she looks similar to his mother who would have a different maiden name than her husband. These guys need friends that don't know everything about them just like in real life. I just don't think that magus can write this without the girls diddling poor Max. Already they have again put their selfishness a head of him. It does not seem that Max will ever be first with any of these people, Rick should have said no way until we at least speak to Max first, the twins had promised to behave and yet here they are in slut attire preying on Daddy and all of his other harem mates are taking advantage of him again. Buying out the stores in a Hotel Mall yet. Max needs to find a great girl, maybe the hotel store clerk as she picked up on his angst, and boot everyone else to the curb; let them go live on their own salaries. Let Alice and May continue to function but remind them: bug me and I push the kill button. As for the church he should tell the old priest that I will help but as I am not a member of your church what the Pope wants means no more to me than what the Garbage Collector wants. Probably followed him home on the Papal satellite and then asked RCs to spy on him. Oh well, we shall see what we shall see.

As a widower and brother of widows/widowers let me assure you that when you lose your heart you do not want a replacement, but as a few of my family have in fact found new loves and are moving on. They did not go looking, Life just happens. So Marge's & Mays change of attitude is not an unusual change of mind, remember that both had said that accepting Max was because they felt that they needed a man. There are some things in BITG that were stated as facts that have fallen by the wayside but then again as stated it is fang face's story he who gets the muse gets to screw around with her the way they want. I like how Tang was involved with the young Suzy so maybe we will have a few more revelations from the four horsemen. So now for the Big Question, when are the next chapters coming?

I too do not like the road this has taken, the twins should have been left as Max's daughters who realised that their Daddy was not going to do anything and finally accept that with Nadi's encouragement but not above teasing him a la Amy. You should have gotten into the action part again and explained the church aspect. For something that supposedly took a lot of research, etc. it sure doesn't come across that way. It seems that you got tired of the bitching and moaning about delays and banged this one out. It actually broke my habit for the series and now this site, c'est la vie. TC!

He finished it and started twins in the grass. Max and the girls went off to fight a holee war only to find out that it was a trap by ultra right lefties who wanted his nanabites for their bubbies. The girls had their minds wiped and his android sister, cousin, girlfriend-lover was turned into the first terminator. The twins not hearing from Max became so incensed that they went into feral mode and took down the Luminaughties with the help of all the other children Max had saved only to find that Max had been sold into sex slavery himself. Marge's' daughter now with her sisters own the company and runs the world as dominatrix for life. Now did I leave anything out fang face? Remember a mime is a good thing to waste.

I'm sorry but I wanted to know more about the priest or maybe how Max & the boys get along. I will take a break from all of this and now move on ...

Now lets see, he admits to having multiple women so I guess it all depends on what your term of having fun is. I mean multiple women that's Heaven & Hell rolled all up into one experience, What ever you do man Do Not run out of Rum. Now get chapters 11 & 12 posted saying you were high will not be accepted for only one of 2, "Ain't I a stinker?".

He's a pusher see, holding out on us like that, next he'll be demanding more out of us. Nadi's love is also suspect as it states that she sees Max mainly as her Master not her lover, so just like the others she is using him for what he can give her. You even have to suspect the twins a bit. It would be an interesting twist to finally have Max wake up to this fact and react in a way maybe by putting them all on a allowance/budget. Do not marry da bitch, she ain't going to change. Do a new will & leave it all to moi.

I was not too impressed with this chapter as it came across as a place holder. jmhop.

Did you sign in as Bankers Trust, If not then the site sees you as a Guest. One of the thing that can help writer's block is having more than one story to work on at the same time. As long as you don't get your cast of characters mixed up . Dragon, like most of the talk to write proggies, always screws up on words; especially the they're vs their, etc. type words. Now Magus stop typing here and type there or is that thar.

Kenneth left that other site, again, when they changed the rules ... again. A couple of the mods resigned over all the drama. He does have another site that he posts on but I've forgotten which, Google him under both names it should pop up. Almost is only good in horse shoes & hand grenades, so stop teasing us and get on with it or the pitch forks and torches come out. ed itor

Hey at least you got a review/comment, cherish it.

It's The Yankee National Holiday Weekend, yes you got that fellow non yanks they do it right with a whole weekend even when their holiday is on a Thursday/Tuesday they get that extra day to celebrate. Now that's how you show patriotism, eh.

Blue for boys, pink for girls. We know Max turns green from his deposit in the garbage pail. Good chapter, now enjoy the long weekend with your girls and take up the key board next week.

Now that he knows that he can be traced Max starts to create Gorts to protect the compound and those that live/visit there. This starts the girls to do a more thorough search of his father's, David, past. Only to discover that he is the son of an alien that visited Earth in 1951. They also find out that The Gov. had David killed when he refused to share his alien DNA for a super soldier formula. This new information along with the help of Rev. Moon's Church of Turkish Delight almost brings about the destruction of our universe which is only saved by an Irish ginger girl in a flying pink police box. Max answers the guys when they ask why he never gets mad by saying: "You wouldn't like me when I get angry."

How dare you take some time for R&R like you need it or something. I agree that the stoned version could be fun, maybe even a contest to see who comes closest to what was actually meant.