Krulos

It says that this story’s missing, sorry to say, Sir.

I get it, Sally, I really do; and hey, not really a problem… I have been reading it, don’t worry, and yes, thank you for your patience. I also noticed that in those works of yours, it appears that Faith wanted to become Joyce’s wife- the wedlock sealed that deal as far as what she wanted, but her wanting to marry a mom, means effectively she wants to become “mom” to that other woman’s children; I do like the touch of that, and yes, there’re a few stories wherein she seems to become her High School Rival’s stepmom- I know, and yes, they are *OODLES* of fun to write… I’ve even played around with that arc, and have had immense fun doing so; in writing, that is. I remember you said you wanted to *BE* Faith in your story, well, in part, you’ve made her want to become a mom via marriage. I do plan on reading more of it, right now I’m bouncing around in it, and reading chapters as I’m able, disadvantage I have is the time limits allowable, I’ve found it a very good idea to set time limits for each activity and keeping to them, but with everything there’s a downside; I do understand where you’re coming from, however, Sally, so don’t worry… I do sympathize with your position of views on the need for people to read the entire story, also, I really do enjoy the touch of it being a massive crossover (you have a lot of characters from a lot of other stories in it, something I also value), so this’s, as a romp through stories, a lot of fun to read for me too… don’t worry, I shall. Beauty of things being available is that I can read them when I’m good and ready, when time allows. I also like the way Faith and her best buddy, Kendra (and I rather enjoy the portrayal of her that you’ve got going on in your work, don’t worry, I like it, a lot) wound up sisters-in-law… entertaining idea, and having Kendra becoming Buffy’s aunt; that’s sheer brilliance! I think you’re one brilliant writer overall.

Well, Sally, I hope you haven’t forgotten your login data. But I skimmed through some of it, and I thoroughally enjoyed what I read of it, the drama, and I did see how Faith is turning out to be a very feminine woman… interesting plotlines and touches, Ma’am; you know me, I’m being polite.

I know what you mean, I think, Salamandaslash, regarding how it ends up with us slogging through chapters; just keep at it till you’re content that you’re happy with the chapter, and then post it as soon as you’re able afterward… that’s what I do. I’d like to read those shorter stories/spinoffs, if I may, Miss, I would really enjoy reading them, same with reading more about Kendra’s adventures in your work… I like the translation between “vampire slayer” and “athlete or fitness fanatic”, or a bit thereof- they’d be like that in personality, and seem to be in the show! Oh, okay, thank you for the permission to write stories inspired by your work, but limiting it to inspiration, Miss, if I read your wording correctly, and sorry about not really being able to explain, aside from readers yelling and screaming at you for “doing that” in the storyline (whatever *that* is!)- I don’t know if that statement will help, but I hope it does. The other term is basically making jerks and meanies of themselves to the author by berating the person for writing something that they hate. Best of luck with your job; oh, and if I may, what do you do for a living? Sorry I didn’t write back before now, been busy and I guess I sort of forgot in the school matters I’ve had to deal with in a vocational school; Krulos., a fan of yours.

I hope for more of this story, additional stories set into this universe, and more chapters to this story and its sequel as well… granted, we do not agree on some details in this being acceptable; but that’s for dealing with in discussions to find out what’s what and why what’s what is what’s what in everything involved. Still, I love the character dynamics in this love story (as you made perfectly clear to me, it is a love story). I’ll check back from time to time as my schedule allows, I’m enrolled in a vocational school these days, so my attendance may indeed be spotty, but the dynamics are fun to read; and your observation of Kendra Young as a black woman is something I’m grateful to you for… hadn’t really noticed that as I watched the show, actually. I really saw her as a person, not a member of a set ethnic/racial group, but as a young lady; and I’m thankful for that element, and yes, she’s both: her DNA is that of a “black female”, but that’s what her DNA was written to have her as- and that’s all race really means: what your ancestry is. I rather like this rendition of her, minus the seeming adulteress she is in this series (stealing somebody else’s wife and such), but that *orientation* itself is a touch that really “fleshes her character out” in some ways, same deal with her being athletic in your story, a bartender in your story, and apparently also a heavy reader (she reads a lot, in the series canon that is), hence: a bit of a mix of athlete and nerd (both are excellent traits). Now, referencing your comments to readers: I *guess*, and I need your verification on this matter as you’re the author, Salamdaslash, but did you merely mean that you don’t want to be harrassed and hence you want the readers to take it as it is, rather than barrelling down your throat for something in your story that they might not agree with? If so, I heartily agree with you on *that* detail, Miss, but that’s that… more precisely, I understand where you’re coming from, hence: sympathize, but *we* did get along, despite disagreeing on the issue of same-sex marriage (which is in your story); hence: I’m puzzled. If you mean “don’t “ramrod a bayonet down my throat for posting something you might disagree with”” I’m with you on *that* detail. It *seems* the most logical understanding that I’ve just posted, but I want to get inside your head to see this statement from *your* point of view, so as to avoid any hurt feelings. I hope you understand; and whether or not you do, I plan on remaining your fan. Sincerely one of your fans; Krulos.

I personally look forward to more too!

Miss, do you have a problem with me writing a story based on the Kennedy and Tara as girlfriends/lovers arc in your work? I just want to get public permission before I risk getting in trouble due to misunderstandings… I’m sure you understand. You can get some of my ideas from our conversations on this site; I’m trying to be a gentleman here and upgrade my politeness in the process of concocting a story- I plan it to be mostly romance between them, but the “wild romance” common, or *reputed* to be common in such a community… not much sex, but genuine caring between those two females. I also plan it be *within* the BtVS/AtS universe, so things like magic, and preternatural monsters and warriors, like in the television series and books, would be the case, but it’s mostly the two of them attending classes together and glancing towards eachother and things like winking- while thinking about how they plan to act up together in their dorm-room and the like- as a “coded message”, remember how Kennedy said that dealing with girls is like “flirting in code”, well, there’d be a lot of that between them. It’d also be a crossover between BtVS/AtS and Earth Final Conflict, but a bit of one, as Kennedy Sandoval would be the niece of Ronald Sandoval, the FBI agent in that series who went bad, so she might be emailing him and the like; mostly genuine daily life between those two, but they would at times pick up girls at lesbian bars and take them to their bedroom to “bed them” (I’m pretty sure you know what I mean), especially if the girl’s pretty in a physical sense… Kenny might even get them drunk to see if they come on to her (a form of sexual assault- she might not have realized that by the way, as that conduct is disgusting, or she might’ve been boasting to Willow, she’s got her shady side- I’m talking legal sense, here, but that *is* the typical tactic of a rapist: get the victim drunk and then they’re unlikely to resist, so that’s scary if it’s in her personality… I love her, but I don’t blame those who don’t like her for that reason as a result.), a common misbehavior in college-age youngsters… and the two of them are pretty rebellious, that’s another touch I plan on putting in the story, if you’ll agree to let me help you by “sounding out” how they’d interact… I also plan on making more chaste loving encounters between the two of them, such as discussions on deep topics- and the basis of this in the show is that both Kennedy and Tara are somewhat nerdy in their personalities, they’re perfectionists, a touch proud as far as arrogance goes, and at least somewhat athletic (Tara rides horses, and I assume that Kennedy is involved in things like track and field- that kind of athletics and the sort)- a good mix of personality all in all. What do you think of my overall idea, Miss? Sincerely one of your hopefully many fans; Krulos.

Good; skimmed it in its entirety, enjoyed what I read of it by and large… currently eager for part four, Miss. I'm most eager, and I reviewed it, too! Mind you, my review (and the site's system doesn't record chapters- a trait that kind of bugs me, by the way!) isn't in as far as I've gotten… but I *did* love how Joyce moved Dayna into thinking of herself as a mistress; hey, what about this idea? Dayna forces Buffy to call her “Mistress Dayna”, or “Mistress Penshaw”, or, failing those, simply “Mistress”, but, for her own protection- as well as her ownership of Buffy (whom she sometimes addresses simply as “Bitch!”) that'd apply to when they're alone, or with Dayna's trusted friends. How's that bit of additional feedback sound to you, Miss? Hope to hear back from you soon. Sincerely one of your hopefully many fans; Krulos

I’d love to help you out, but I haven’t any experience with being a co-writer… it might, and that’s *might* be a good expereince, and I’d sure like to read what you’ve got in mind; feel free to send me a message and I’ll see what I can advise you on… I’m already working on a number of long stories, so best advice I can send you prior to any messages discussing it: break it up into manageable chapters, or make it a novella series, you know, short stories that weave together into one long tale. I’m really eager to read your idea and to see if I can help you out on this dark storyline you’re suggesting, Saladied. By the way, Merry Christmas to the both of you, albeit a very belated one, sorry, but this is the first time I’ve ran across this post, sorry about the late pleasant wishes, that is. Sincerely eager to help you out on this, when and if time allows, as well as conditions; Krulos.

Okay, Ma’am; I welcome whatever elements you elect to put in, but in your series you’re writing that includes these women, is Buffy also going to be her sister’s mother-in-law? If so, that’s one peculiar family as far as how people are related to oneanother! From your replies to me; I guessed that Dayna would marry Buffy, making Buffy Janice’s stepmom, and hence, if Dawn and Janice wed (which is likely in your story- from the context you’ve said you plan to have in it, and it being a love story- and believe me, I’m *NOT* against that detail!), the logically, Buffy’s her sister’s mother-in-law; which is completely kooky to begin with and would generate multiple double-takes, and several repeated blinks, both of which are fun to watch happen, as well as a lot of “Huh?”’s going on there. That quirkiness is definitely something I’m hoping goes on there; and now that I think it over, would Kendra be Dawn’s aunt or great-aunt, due to the confusing family bond going on there? I loved the story ideas to your series, and really do hope for more, as well as having taken great delight in having Buffy and Satsu being friends but Buffy being on too short a leash to allow her to bed Satsu, but does Buffy’s mistress wed her, like the ways that Buffy’s mom and aunt were wedded to their mistresses? If so, that’s going to make for a most interesting little story to put it mildly! To put it bluntly; this is a far more baffling family relationship than the one in OUAT, which has Henry being the stepson to his adopted great-grandmother; a baffling family relationship to put it simply. Hey, don’t get me wrong, I love your story ideas, but I just need to understand them better, and you’ve been helping in the “PM Conversation” we’ve been writing back and forth to eachother, so lets keep up both means, if at all possible. Sincerely your fan; Krulos.

I’m liking it; mostly the drama of having Faith wind up Buffy’s stepmom- just a little weakness of mine you might say with regard to how this leads to massive, and I do mean *massive* amounts of drama… then it appears that she gives her away to someone else to be that woman’s personal slave, or so it seems; that’s something else that I enjoy. I also love the way Miss Summers’s rival from school is now her other mother… this is, all in all, one truly kooky set of relationships, and one that I’m completely loving reading. Not the *behavior* mind you for what I love, but rather the *drama* that results from the behavior going on here; I hope this doesn’t offend you, Ma’am (again, being polite- I don’t see any reason to be rude to a neighbor- I could address you as “Miss” if that suits you better in your preferences of title, it’s up to you, or I could address you by your first name, but that doesn’t seem secure in this forum aside from the private messages, so I’m unlikely to do that.), but you did say you wanted people to review and to be gentle, which I’m trying to do both here. In conclusion of this statement prior to your reply, I want to say that I do not want to fight at all, I’m loving this little universe you’ve made here, and don’t want to lose it or discourage it- the behavior is a totally different story, but the story itself is what I want to take delight in. Sincerely your fan; Krulos.

Yes it is, Oric13 and I have been emailing to one-another over a period of time, and he told me that he’s planning on continuing, but tends to get caught up in real life, apparently. (I’m going to protect his privacy too, as I don’t want to be rude, so that’s why I left out a lot of the reasons why he’s not been updating as much recently) But he did say that he wants to continue writing his stories- and loves to hear from fans what they think about his ideas! Please, folks, keep on telling him what you think of his works!

Story title is up to the writer, just please do write to me with the title and pairing, and allow me to read it and tell you what I think.Ideas/questions/comments: feel free to ask write to me and ask.Challenger wants: Weirdness.Challenger doesn't want: excessive cursing/rude language- fighting: okay (as this would be a fallen family situation). Especially since Faith is basically bullying Buffy in a lot of ways now, so she'd likely push Buffy until Buffy fights back successfully + consistantly, but that's unlikely, as Faith would now have some magic aids on her side. The reason Joyce doesn’t stand up for Buffy is because she loves and believes her wife, Faith Lehane-Summers. Favoritism abounds here in this storyline- and that’s the “big bad” involved in this!Requested Length: 8 to 10 chapters inclusive of good length- a novella, or better yet, more.Here it is:Faith winds up Buffy's stepmom during Season 3 by her marrying Joyce Summers after Joyce and Hank divorced.This would not be a happy relationship; this is Season 3 Faith, and she's jealous of Buffy, so she proceeds to steal Buffy's friends and make them *her* friends, she has already become the disciplinarian of the home, and helps Dawn to rise up while acting to "hold Buffy down" (due to her jealousy), and patrols are *WEIRD*!Sometimes, Faith sleeps with her wife, Joyce, in Buffy's bed while Buffy's out.This rendition of Faith would be tender with Joyce and Dawn and Buffy's friends (partly to isolate Buffy from her circle of friends and to replace her in their hearts), but rather rough with Buffy, figuring that "she can take it", partly also to help to isolate her from them as well, so by the end Buffy feels like an outsider in her own family, while her stepmom, who just moved into the family, has virtually taken over!This would not be to advocate *for* this kind of behavior, but to advocate *against* it, by showing it as dark and perverse indeed! There would be also some of Faith working with Principal Snyder, she meets with him and promises him that she'll keep her stepdaughter Buffy (who's also her classmate as well) in line intending to do dark and twistedly painful things to her as punishment). Faith would wind up pretty popular, and aim to bump Buffy out, literally, as the blonde puts it: "Single white femaling me", only literally here: she's making her a social outcast.Simple idea, when Buffy's 18 in her senior year of High School, at that time Faith's 21, but since Faith's just back in High School after dropping out, she's her classmate- she also charms Buffy's friends.One possible scene is that she shows Xander her wedding ring when Xander doubts that she's married to Joyce Summers, this is after she's told her stepdaugther Buffy "You just wait till we get home, then you're going to get it." to the laughter of her newly stolen friends, including Willow and Xander, who she stole by making Buffy out to be the bad girl- due to Buffy objecting to her mom marrying another woman, who just happens to be her classmate!Faith maneuvered Buffy into yelling at Willow, so that the two would fight, and by that she ruined their friendship, then she approached and comforted Willow- this is also before "Consequences" definitely and likely before "Bad Girls", so she was able to keep Xander as her biggest fan- she didn't sexually assault him in this storyline, but they stayed friends, and then she proceeds to isolate Buffy from her friends- she's kind of bullying her elder stepdaughter while befriending her younger one, so as to isolate Buffy from even her own little sister!The way Faith maneuvered Buffy into yelling at Willow and Willow into yelling at Buffy was that she made certain that Buffy knew that Faith is Mrs. Summers' wife now- so then she managed to get Willow into asking Buffy what's wrong, and Buffy issues some kind of, as Willow puts it "homophobic comment" and that sets Willow off, and before you know it; Buffy's best friend isn't speaking to her! Faith also moves to isolate Buffy from her frenemy, Cordelia Chase, by befriending Miss Chase. This is the general gist of it, and I'd very much like to see what you can do with this.Final requirement: have fun! Not worth doing if you don't have fun- I really want to see what people can make of this odd pairing story!

Does she also kiss her in that scene? I am intensely curious.

I think one such story is titled "Mistress" on AO3. That one has a very naughty Dawnie, based on what she's doing to her fellow students, mother, and sister. Sincerely: Krulos.

This sounds intreguing and fun to read, I hope somebody takes it up. Perhaps Buffy enslaves Dawn as a punishment for crossing the line about her chores. I myself am working on a story of a similar nature: Slayer Sorceress, involving the idea of "how much of a Slayer is a demon, I mean really?" and the idea of "What if Buffy was also magickally gifted- and started abusing Dawn (amongst others)." I do enjoy a good story involving "older sister bullying younger sister" and when "older sister brings in her friend to help her pick on her younger sister" for some odd reason- this looks right up my alley: Buffy and possibly Willow bully Dawn together! Ooh, Bad Buffy as a premise to a story- this ought ot be fun! Sincerely: Krulos.

Do you take up your own challenges, DG? I know that I often make a habit thereof.

I am guessing that this is a challenge, so why not write it yourself, Ariel 8? That's a good idea for an evil Buffy paired with Dawn.

Basically, Buffy goes evil and rapes Dawn, possibly in the home!

Well, thanks, and please do keep it up...

I get the matter about the numbers of stories, I really do, but the number of such stories may well be more than you people think there are... I know if you open the topic up for settings, it may well open up the writings for fans to write into- psychologically, and I don't really understand that, but it's a phenominon about human minds. Thanks for explaining that little rule you people have, and no, I am not asking you to violate your own rules. DG, Satsu is a slayer in season 8 and after, an Oriental (Japanese, I think she's of the Samurai class), and she is frankly in love with Buffy- they wind up girlfriends... something that would help open the door to the First Evil in their lives! NOTE: It takes evil Deeds, not evil Desires (not willingly acted upon) to open that door in your soul, but once open, addiction frankly takes hold Very quickly! I am not saying that Orientation makes wickedness, but that Deeds do, and orientation Inclines one to various brands of wickedness! Ladies; frankly, in the real world, I hate sex! This is a connundrum because I love children! Actually; the mere concept of sticking some part of me into somebody else repulses me!- but, I do understand that such things are necessary for humanity to increase in number- hence my ideological trap... I told you this to clairify my attitude on 'physical intimacy' (regardless of genders involved- far worse intra-gender, but for some people: that's a blind-spot, actually!), understanding is required- no? Thank you. Signed: Krulos.

Hi, I have some sub-catagory requests for Buffy the Vampire Slayer fanfiction in the archive, they are: 1.) Buffy/Satsu 2.) Faith/Willow (or Willow/Faith) 3.) Tara/Cordelia Thank you for your time and effort and attention, it sure would help make writing fanfic and publishing it clearly here a lot more easy, both to find and to catagorize. Signed: Krulos.

I gotta say, I like the way he (assuming Oric is male) has Buffy get 'infected' with lust from a demon's slime, and turn that on Cordelia, seemingly in an attempt to 'put her in her place' as it were. However, it does seem to me that Buffy would more likely hold Cordy down when she's doing these things to her that she does in that story... as well as the "kissing scenes" between those two women! One of my favorite scenes in it is when Buffy traps Cordy in the hallway and kisses her in front of everybody!- That's 'weird "mistress Buffy", as Cordelia takes to calling her! (weird being my term, she calls her "mistress Buffy" in that story.) I did enjoy the scene in which Buffy gets over the electrified fence and is sitting in the lawn chair that Cordy was seated in, then she takes Cordy's drink- consums it herself, then kisses her. I also liked the situation when Buffy carries Cordelia into the pool, then, jumping into the pool with her new slave in her arms, she yells "Geronimo!", and yep, Cordelia is, in effect, Buffy's slave in this one. Yep, Buffy {Elizabeth, if we are using her real name} is a criminal here!- entertianing story. First time publically discussing a story, so please, be understanding- Ever. Signed: Krulos.

In a nutshell, Tara enslaves Cordelia. Doesn't have to be BDSM, but since Tara is a gay gal, (and assuming that Cordelia isn't), this Could well include molestation: Tara groping Cordelia, and insisting that Cordelia look Tara in the eyes meekly when she's Touching her inappropriately. The idea is that Tara wants to humiliate Cordelia, because she found out that Cordelia was bullying Willow, whom Tara loves... it's "defend my girl's honor" that's passing through Tara's mind, but in a corrupt method, so she's likely to grope Cordelia in Cordelia's bedroom with one hand (let's say her right hand is grabbing Cordelia's left breast) and when Cordy looks away, begging her to stop touching her, Tara slaps Cordelia with her left hand while continuing to molest Cordelia with her right hand, when Tara slaps Cordelia full on the face, she says to her "Look your mistress in the eyes, b*tch!" it's like she's telling her "look me in the eyes when I molest you.", or something like that., but she Has to make perfectly clear to Cordelia that she owns her!)... or she gets in bed with Cordelia, without Cordelia's permission, and proceeds to kiss her, lying on top of the brunette. Could well involve Tara sitting on Cordelia and forcing the brunette to make the blonde beautiful, then Tara takes Cordelia out for a date (because Tara is a lesbian and wants to enjoy her slave, and to humiliate Cordelia for making fun of Willow, and she wants to have a good time). Another scene is where Tara makes Cordelia prepare Tara's breakfast, (possibly in the all-together, though not necessarily- this story Should be disturbing) then, when Tara is eating, she's also sitting on Cordelia's lap, with Cordelia very hungry too., should be an amount of anger on Tara's part, developing into hatred for Cordelia! This challenge is inspired by CallistoLexx's story "who's my bitch?", involving a vengeful Tara trying to get back at Cordelia for hurting Willow's feelings; so, that's the inspirtation for this idea. And I do hope CallistoLexx reads this and continues with that series! Note: I know well that not every homosexual is vengeful, but, people are people, and some are vengeful, especially if someone that they are fond of is oppressed, people like that are only off on one Major detail, and I am saying it's possible that Tara WOULD get vengeful about someone hurting Willow for years- and demand to settle accounts with the bully! Length: recommended; 8-10 chapters of good length. Pairing: Tara/Cordelia Recommended warnings/tags: Nonconsensual, control (possibly mind control), abuse, (possibly also sexual abuse) Advice: have Tara come to her senses by the end Final requirements: Have Fun Writing it! Basic Concept: Tara gets angry at Cordelia's bullying of Willow and takes her frustrations out on her, possibly involving wrestling with her to show dominance over her! Should have Tara picking on Cordelia, and forcing her to take weeks off at a time from her job, so she can abuse her! Note: I do not hate Cordelia, for this, she's just a convieniant victim in this story.