Desiderius Price

I find that while writing both versions simultaneously can be challenging, it also hones both of them. Sometimes I write something in the explicit and realize it’d be good (with light cleanup) in the cleaner version. Other times, it flows back – definitely does when it comes to an extra proofreading step, because I have to check both versions. As to how I do this… made a bit of software to make the whole process way easier, I annotate what’s explicit and what’s not, when there’s a difference.

I’ve been back and forth primarily due to another website that had decided to axe mature content (thereby leading rise to this one) a short while before I had started into fanfic, and some comments I had gotten over there suggesting less would be better. As a result, the disasterous edit also included some cleanup of that smut. On this rewrite, given an avenue where I *could* post an explicit version, I decided to write both more or less at the same time, which is working BTW. Of course, by excluding elements from the “cleaner” version, it’s compounding where I have to omit even more elements due to logical inconsistencies otherwise, so it’s now around a 3:1 word count ratio between the two.

PWPs are to plot bunnies like blood is to sharks (IMO) Some readers like lots of sex (something that’s fine on this website), others want it plot-justified and masked (which is what those other websites cater to), or even more want none at all. For my potter fanfic, the explicit version is for those who desire (or at least don’t mind) multiple orgasms per chapter, while the “cleaner” version keeps it to the essential/masked variety; and the explicit version is way, way richer IMO for it.

It’s time for Kirksey, KY 42054!

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Yep. And mentally I make PWP out to be “plot, what plot?” more than “porn w/o plot”, though both apply. So, technically, the little unreleased tale makes everything I’ve posted so far… BACKSTORY. Yep, though the group of one allows for some interesting context too.

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Certainly are in my potter fanfic (the explicit version… the “cleaner” version is a bit more implied). Even got Hermione, plus Harry’s girl on the magical “pill”… so zero chance of pregnancy BUT with the caveat that when stopped, any unprotected sex in the first month or so is basically a guaranteed pregnancy. (See where I’m going with this? )

Never belittle the PWP. It’s how my original universe started, I tried a PWP and my brain rebelled, go “how did they get here?” Voila, an original universe was born. Bouncy, full of life! (and nudity and sex)

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As a writer, I *always* like the magical stuff to have consequences, you know. For instance, slip somebody a love potion and you’ll never be 100% certain they really like you, or it was the love potion tricking ‘em. (*cough* *cough* HBP *cough* *cough*) Another thing I created, a sensitizing ointment, good for treating sunburns, but also makes the skin super sensitive, so you can see the sexual use Medicinal grade will add a bit of stinging nettle to help thwart addiction. However, abuse it and it’ll trigger puberty (good if you need somebody to be capable of producing an heir...this week). Of course, being the author I am, I happily provided it to first years.

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I do have fun with my potter fanfic… even had a toffee that turned hair jet-black (that was it). Poor Ron when Ginny thought she was giving a midnight blow-job to Harry…. Potions to elongate the todger (Harry didn’t read the label, took the WHOLE package, ended up with one towering up to 40’ high). Oh, and the magical condom, a spell that’ll allow for perfect sex, only price is losing your magical abilities for the next 48 hours.

I once set loose a rogue enchanted dildo inside Hogwarts, it’d randomly go from person to person (uninvited).

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My thoughts when I read the article years ago… why didn’t they let it go a tad longer and cut themselves out of the gene pool? (Not fatally, mind you… just enough to serve Darwin )

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Well, the dildo on the sawzall went about as well as you’d expect… life-flight to the local trauma center.

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