Desiderius Price

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You’re likely damned if you do, damned if you don’t, write it generically, bit watered down, for a wider audience. Throw in kinks, triggers? That’ll attract some folks, and discourage others. Suppose if you do it scientifically, put out multiple stories, see which one attracts the most hits/engagement.

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Decided to give this a pass through, a fast(er) light rewrite/edit, clean it up a bit. I reposted chapter 9 this morning, will leave the other (later) chapters in-place until revised.

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