Desiderius Price

Backstory is tough, to some degree, because it's also needed for the story. I rehashed the various approaches, rewriting quite a few times, in the end, these episodes were about the best way to do it. Even the next several episodes will get a tidbit of backstory, but less of it. As I don't have a beta reader, it goes out "raw". Just word smith it until it sounds right, in most cases. So, that's more likely a subconscious thing. I do try to vary the wording around a bit, to avoid excessive repetition unless it's desired. That came to the backstory thing, how much to delve into. Several wars have occurred, between now and the S*R era, where the US is, by treaty, allowed to launch a fixed number of flights, from various vehicles, per month. (ie, one for the atlas) So, when the head of the US weather satellite program was caught, in a motel, with the project manager of the prime contractor (a gay affair, mind you, with a religiously conservative government), a review was done of the entire project, and it was determined that the program was behind schedule, very behind schedule. Now, the US could ask the Kremlin/Beijing for waivers, to reschedule the launches, but that'd indicate weakness--can't do that. - DP

This is the spot for discussing my fiction (StarRebels), whether it’s reviews, or anything else related. Oneshot Links Mistletoe Hanging: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108028&chapter=4 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46801807 The Phone: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107953&chapter=6 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46804996 The Phone, Part II: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108028&chapter=7 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46805248 Sweater: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108385&chapter=2 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46801081 Baby Shark: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108443&chapter=2 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46794628 Bones: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108780&chapter=6 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46803511 Jump: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108835&chapter=5 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46803994 Adam the Altar Boy: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109141&chapter=3 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46794034 Jello: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109191&chapter=3 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46801684 Santa’s Sleigh: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109191&chapter=7 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/46728448 Demon: https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110164&chapter=4 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/44851300 Story Links Jefferey 1: (WIP) http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108225 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/32513446 Dolbourne Chronicles: (WIP) http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108050 Dale’s Game: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108463 Alaska Trekkers: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107812 [AO3]: https://archiveofourown.org/works/23612113 Fiends: (WIP) http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108097 The Repair Guy: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108774 (Note, the lack of WIP just means the story is more or less complete, it’s still liable to being edited/revised.)

Looks like a one-stop-affair in the making!

3. Transporter accident?

Put a powerful sedative into the shot, knock her out while this is happening. (Which, if you're trying to have the girls recover from anything, bedrest is typical in medical advice.)

Title: Star Rebels: Fiends Summary: Trapped on a Theocratic Earth, Jaimie leads a group to design and build an ark for leaving the planet. Spoilers: This story will have major spoilers to the previous part, SR: Alaska Trekkers Warnings (anticipated): Abuse, Angst, Bi, Bigotry, Contro, Exhib, F/F, Fet, Fingering, HJ, Humil, M/F, M/M, MCD, MiCD, Minor1, Minor2, Oral, Preg, Rape, Scat, Solo, UST, Violence, Voy, WD, WIP, WS Solo vs Chaptered: Chaptered (WIP) URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108097 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/