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Eris Night

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  1. HarryGinny4eva 7/9/13 Lol i know right, Hermione had it all thought out until he took that tie off ;} And of course, our Malfoy is not an asshole but he's still the sarcastic and arrogant man we all know and love. He couldn't help it haha. Although you'll find that he's quite capable of getting his confidence bashed in when he's going after someone he likes. He'll learn that it's not so easy to win her over and will have to do some growing before he gets the prize! Also thank you! I felt it was time to get a Harry all riled up. Your observation of Luna is a good one, she's kind of a mystery so we won't ever know what shes thinking unless we're graced with viewing the story from her POV. It kind of adds to her charms i think! And seriously, I threw a coin for which weasley it would be, because this was a point in time where stuff could have happened either way. But i tied in a plot line that i had kinda hinted at in an earlier chapter and so i think the ending result was pretty ok if i do say so myself:) I'm glad you're still reading it even though its kinda clear Harry and Ginny won't be together 4eva (LOL) I really appreciate the time you took to write such a thorough review!!!
  2. Rachel 7/8/13 I really truely appreciate that! I'm so happy you feel that way! Characterization is important to me and I spend a lot of time thinking about how they would react to certain situations! Hopefully i continue doing these characters justice in the future! Moodysavage 7/9/13 As always you crack me up! Reading your reviews is like the best thing ever in the morning! I think the answer to your desires are coming soon. I'm seeing very single characters in the nearby future! Keep an eye out for the chapter spoilers coming!!
  3. Morning Snow 7/8/13 LOL! I try to refrain from cliffhangers when I can but when I run out of space in a chapter I'm forced to resort to them haha. I personally hate cliffhangers when reading WIP's but am very hypocritical because i'll use them in a heartbeat haha! Also I think the main point that I wanted to express is that Draco is a dashingly clever and good guy. I'm team Draco Malfoy all the way and by the end of this fiction everyone will be in love with him and hopefully converted Muahahaha (My evil plot revealed!) Remember that Harry is not the romeo that Malfoy is, so IF he ends up with Luna, it won't be a smooth ride lol. But i've got some ideas that just may shock you! My biggest concern these days are doing Luna justice lol. I am obsessed with her lately and absolutely want to get her characterization correct. But either way we'll see:) Also Ginny is really preoccupied with living the glamourous A-list lifestyle but that's something she developed later in life once she realized that she was with THE Harry Potter. Ron however has always wanted to stand out so his "fame hounding" is a little less than his sisters. Honestly Ronald is just in a place where he resents everyone that has what he wants and lashes out because he doesnt know how to achieve it. There might be a little redemption with him, but its gonna get a whole lot worse before it gets better lol. Ginny however (I hated her character) will not be treated to some sort of magical turn around lol. As always thank you for reading! I adore you! Eris:) Anon 7/8/13 All in good time! I really think you should read the chapter spoiler I'm going to post after replying to the reviews! I think you'll be pleased! ;} Colao 7/8/13 Lol you may be the only one not cursing me for the cliffhanger haha! Stay tuned for tomorrow update!!
  4. Woo chapter 12 is posted and chapter 14 is complete!! Cue the FF7 victory music!!

  5. HarryGinny4eva Honestly, your review is like a weight being lifted off my shoulders haha. I was so worried people wouldn't understand that Harry might not have had the easiest time after the war. But woo Chapter 12 is up today and i'm writing more all day long! Thank you for your review!
  6. Moodysavage 6/6/13 LOL, we are almost there!! 2 more chapters and then sweet success! Hermione will be set free!
  7. I love posting here and writing my stories with this site!!

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      We're always glad to hear that. :D

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  8. OMG... so I noticed you had a forum for story and was coming here to gush even more about how I just power read it lol and the first thing I read is about my story and you've even promoted it in your own space. I have no clue who you are in the world but can I just say you are the best and that is the nicest thing you could have ever done for a new author:) I really appreciate your amazing writing, your good team work (with being a supportive author to new authors) and the fact that you are doing your best to help me out! Morning Snow, my name is Chantal and I am beyond honored that you are reading my story. I really truly hope to get to read more of your amazing work in the future and eventually be able to get as good as you are. Thank you for being so damnned Wonderful!!!
  9. Siona Thank you! Haha could you imagine if that happened to us! XxJessicaxX 6/6/13 I will try and break the paragraphs up. I will not be using a beta for my work but am open to any other suggestions you ever have :-)
  10. Also third times the charm. I will try and break up the paragraphs more. Bear with me as its a learning process but I'm willing to try whatever makes reading the story easier for you. A new paragraph every time someone speaks seems excessive to me, so no promises it will be as often as that but I will definitely 86 super long paragraphs. Thank you for being honest!
  11. I promise to update today haha. I have been having a hard time making chapters 11 and 12 perfect because they are the main two transitional chapters before things speed up and we get to the good stuff. There is A Lot of foundational information I need to incorporate and it has to be perfect lol. So update today I promise as soon as I get home from work! Also exactly! River song is amazing. Haha doctor who is my second favorite fantom to HP lol so you see the correlation thank you for writing though! I'll stop being a perfectionist now haha
  12. Moody Savage 7/1/13 !! I know! I swear writing this is like the sexiest guilty pleasure of all time. I keep thinking of all the scenarios I can get my lovely Hermione into and just you wait! The upcoming chapters will be quite something! Don't forget some of the detail from the previous chapters! There are actually alot of spoilers laid out that most wouldn't notice:) Thank you for sticking with it this long! I really appreciate you! Heather 7/1/13 Thank you for reading it:) Let's hope i can continue to make you feel that way:) Tiachutis 7/1/13 AHHHH your comment made me so excited because there is this show called Doctor Who that is my second favorite thing to Harry Potter, so when you said that I like died! Draco is a Time Lord! It's awesome! I never thought of it like that haha! I really appreciate your review, it makes everything so fun to write! Thank you for reading!!! Sheila 7/1/13 Haha Thank you!! I'm writing until my fingers get too numb to continue! I'll keep it coming! Dracos Ari 7/2/13 Thank you! I'm so glad and truly appreciative that you took the time to review! I'll do my best to keep it coming!!!
  13. Victoria 6/30/13 Interesting observation, I'm going to leave the chapter as it is, please point out the spelling mistakes so that I can understand what you mean. From the sound of the review it would seem as though they are often throughout my fiction. I apologize if I've been missing them. Is it possible that I'm misspelling homophones? To be honest I first write the story in Microsoft word and then just copy and paste it over, so i'm not seeing the spelling errors because my document isn't showing any. If there are one or two that's kinda normal, I mean i can live with that. But if it's impairing my audiences ability to read and appreciate the work than I DEFINITELY want to know how I'm messing up. Is it the spelling of words or rather the misuse of one word when I meant another? Please be a bit more specific, I definitely do that on occasion and while I read the chapters fully before I post them. I'm prone to make mistakes. Unfortunately I will not be using a beta for any of my writing, so if there are any future problems of this nature please leave me examples so that i can improve on them in the future. I anxiously await your reply, thank you for your review! P.S. I really totally mean this lol! I want to know everythingI do wrong 100% so that I do better in the future! Also I aim to please haha, I'll keep trying to update as soon as possible!!
  14. Vicky 6/30/13 Ah shoot Well all I can say in Draco's defense is that he's an attractive multimillionaire bachelor that has women throwing themselves at him more often than not. He's never had to work for a GF and can't even identify what it feels like to be uncertain about a womans affections. Plus we haven't had a lot of dialogue from him, so he's not some magical saint that is just kind and understanding lol. No no no, he's still our quick witted arrogant Malfoy but he's slightly more mature. Granted he baits Hermione a lot but it's his nature. It's interesting to read your review though because I'm 4 chapters ahead and so it all makes sense to me lol. It will get better once he get's his head on straight. As you can see from this chapter, he's clearly in denial and unable to handle his intense attraction to Hermione:) I think it would have been weird if he answered all her questions nicely and was forthcoming with information haha, but no worries! Once they get to know eachother it will get better! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
  15. HarryGinny4eva 6/30/13 Lol! you are a doll! I swear I'm always laughing after reading your reviews haha! It will only get better! I just cant rush it too much!
  16. Morning Snow 6/29/13 No worries, I don't shy away from any critiques! However that is truly interesting! This is something, I did not know. I 100% believe you when you say that this is the correct format and i will do my best to implement it in the future. I can't say that i'll follow it for remainder of the story, only out of sheer laziness with having to edit the other chapters to match. But I will definitely remember this writing rule! Thank you for showing me an example, it actually was really helpful to see the correct format as opposed to just reading about it:)
  17. Magic Words 6/28/13 Magic Words is no exaggeration! I'm glad that somebody feels exactly how I do haha:) That's quite literally exactly how I feel through this process and despite all, I will continue to do this story my way haha. I mean you literally said exactly how I feel about my writing process, the story kind of writes itself and everything happens in it's own time. I am truly grateful that you recognized this and spoke on it! You're amazing and I appreciate you more than you know! Eris
  18. Lolo 6/28/13 Lol that's the plan, I just have to be careful though because doing Luna justice is hard! I can't just throw her in there and have her be completely normal. So i've got to work on her lol! But thank you for reading and reviewing! Victoria 6/28/13 That is incredibly sweet of you and I take that as amazingly high praise! That's my entire intent. I want to create a world that immerses my readers and so i'm proud that you feel that way! I'm working on the story as we speak and i will update as soon as I can:) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me such an awesome review!!
  19. Victoria Cox 6/27/13 I agree, however this story writes itself and everything will happen in it's own time. I can tell you however that the split and the reason for it is coming in the next 4 chapters so by chapter 13. You should be thoroughly happy with the situation. SPOILERS* Keep an eye out for "Love Makes You Crazy and Thunder Thunder in the Night"
  20. Moodysavage 6/26/13 Lol you'll just have to wait to find out;)! Kit 6/27/13 Haha, I haven't really done a cliffhanger before so instead of trying to jam it all in one chapter, I split this encounter into two haha! Thank you for reading haha and until next time! Thegirl191 6/27/13 Haha, I thought so too, but i'll try to make up for it in future chapters lol!
  21. I got 1 Like!!! Booyah! haha!

  22. Lol discussing my work in the forum, doing my best not to argue but really wanting to spend the entire time saying "Write your own story then and show me how its done" lol. I love it! Peope don't understand that while I value their opinions, they will NOT get me to change my own work

  23. Thank you to everyone who is reading!
  24. Atlantean Diva 6/26/13 On second thought, thank you for your opinions. Considering you didn't receive a warning about the Weasley bashing, I'll let you know as a warning, all the things you take issue with probably won't change. Draco and Hermione WILL keep holding eachothers interest in the more obvious of ways, Ronald is prone to do something worse before he get's better and I will keep writing the way I have been allowing my reader to use their imagnation to fill in the blanks. The whole keeping your interest thing is your own prerogative, doesn't affect me either way. But rather continuing a discussion on issues I'm positive we won't agree on or rather will ensue in a long repetitive dialogue that won't satisfy your opinions, or help me grow as an author. I'm thanking you for your time and your reviews:)
  25. HarryGinny4eva 6/26/13 You clever girl haha! Yes it was slightly obvious but I wasn't sure if people would catch on to that fact or even remember the things that he could do! When i read your review I fist pumped the air like "yes!! somebody got it" haha! What good is time magic if our not so bad, bad boy never uses it to his advantage!! And it's only chapter 9!! just you wait!! Thank you for constantly reading and reviewing! You're continued support makes me feel like we're fanfiction comrades! Once I get through with this, I look forward to reading what you write as well!!
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