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It could just be some people are waiting for the finished product, and I know that as long as the person my stories are intended for enjoyed them, public opinion doesnāt matter. I also realize Iām posting fics for a fandom thatās probably long since gone, but Iām a bit sad my story with sex is still getting way more hits than my story withoutĀ sex.Ā Ā Again, it could just be because some people are waiting for the finished product. I dunno āĀ itās a conflicted feeling. Again, the people the stories are dedicated for: only their opinion really matters.
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I fear the omens are true. A large number of AFF users are truly colossal perverts.
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I wear that badge with pride!Ā
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Wow! Itās been a while! So the second installment to my Saiyuki (fanfic) series is 98% finished. The person the story was gifted for gave me some additional feedback so I just gotta quick make some changes to the ending. Until then, 8 chapters are posted on AFFĀ with 7 more to go. Iām glad she liked it despite it being way different than she originally requested.Ā
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That feeling when beta reader 1 says the stuff you have sounds good because she goes wherever the author wants toĀ their readers but beta reader 2 says thereās too much information being thrown all at once and everything is difficult to follow. TT-TT
Time for some (hopefully) quick edits!
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@Kei0523 Thatās a very interested reader, cherish them!Ā Ā
For me and my stories, Iād definitely pay attention to a ātoo muchā comment.Ā Itās *way* too easy to write an information overload, because you know your story, you know your details, your style, and so it makes sense to you, and perhaps a faithful reader.Ā Ā Unless words are at a premium, Iād be considering breaking that apart, either in multiple scenes, or simply shifting some of the less important details to later in that scene (or even other scenes).Ā And the beginning of a story is much more susceptible to this.Ā Thatās my two cents.
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Haha valid points all around! ^^
I tend to be unnecessarily descriptive and provide too much detail or information all at once. That was one of the hardest challenges with the first fic I posted on AFF. That roadblock is what ended up fueling my hiatus because I knew exactly what I wanted for the climax of this one scene,Ā didnāt want to give up a single detail, and in the end I had to accept the fact that it just didnāt mesh well with how I wanted to present the ending of the story.
Many thanks, both of you! This truly does help!
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Hmm...my muse does not care for the character created for her. But if i write her with all the characteristics she wants, she'd be this Mary Sue i've read so much about.Ā
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HAHAHA YES
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I really don't think you have to worry about writing a Mary sue. If it feels right going in that direction, go with it. Trust your instincts. Some of my favorite characters in best sellers would technically be Mary sues according to the typical criteria, but were so interesting and believable that they don't feel like Mary sues.Ā
Don't fret. Listen to your muse. You can worry about any mary sueness once it's done and the editing begins.Ā
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That awkward moment your search history for your story becomes questionable.Ā
..... now i understand this fear.Ā
And one thing i didn't consider when starting my second story was just how much background i'd have to breathe into my OC. And again, giftfic, but i'm choosing to post it publicly which means, friend aside, i need to give this character enough of a foundation that the reader would be enticed to read more about her since the story will not contain sexual content like the succubus story.Ā
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Auto-correct, especially on my new tablet, has been the bane of my existence!!Ā