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Well he is supposed to be a bad guy, he needs to be a royal jack ass in some levels relative to his position and abilities, but I want him to be more than that, calculating and kind of the sleazy lawyer type that is 100% unethical but not breaking the law. Historically, people in power tend to be royal jack asses, power corrupts after all. Kings and others would tend to use women as a statement of power and toss them aside just as quick as a used condom. I want you to hate this guy, typical white privilege, entitled rich boy, deserves anything and everything he wants and when his guts are spilling on the floor you get a feeling of just deserved and kind of wish you did it your self. I guess I could instead use hypnosis combined with ……. a loyalty spell? ….. eh just doesnt feel jackass enough to me, I will figure it out.

ok good, now thats out of the way. still need to figure out how this exactly would work in a logical way, something that a reader would understand. my thoughts are that, what he does (no idea what exactly) could either increase hormone production of a type, that way its not mind control. I wouldnt want to use a pheromones system because any women would be effected, unless its after they have been …. infected? any ideas?

as I said, this character is a “not a villain” but more like a …….. that rude jack ass have at work that always finds a way to get a head but does the least amount of work, tricks people into doing his for him, charms the bosses daughter/wife into thinking hes the best employee etc etc etc. He isnt trying to take over the world, he just has his own goals and who gives a fuck if some girls/women get hurt, they should have been better sorceresses/witches etc The MC has to deal with this guy, at some points needs his help but later turns on him and frees the girls from his manipulation. Think someone like in the saw movies, he tells you not to open the door to that room, you did it any ways and something cuts your head off, he warned you, you didnt listen. the girls can leave at any time, they are not prisoners, they just have an addiction to a drug/spell that he used his DNA in so only he could make them feel better, but they need to keep coming back for more. did that make any sense to you?

Kind of, he is supposed to be a manipulative jack ass and all, he is just using the women to get what he wants and will toss them aside when he doesnt need them. they cant/wont expose him because he didnt “FORCE” anyone into anything, its that he just used X ways to make them very VERY horny, and only his stuff could/would be able to trigger a release for them. The girls/women could fuck an entire football team but not get the actual …….. fulfilment? from it but would eventually recover after about a month of non contact with him kind of like a drug withdrawal.

So this yet to be named ass hole, his ego is more about having multiple ways to do the same things. I dont call him a villain only because he isnt using “love potions” but more of ……… E without the mind altering effects, but only his DNA (sweat, spit, cum etc) will trigger the proper release. Its kind of a power trip thing, because he didnt FORCE anyone into anything, they can say no, but will not have a fun time without his “cure” at least every day. for the story he is just a minor bad guy that is kind of = to Malfoy. Its like that typical head cheerleader that manipulates all the boys, flirts with the teachers etc etc to get what she wants, best way I can describe it and I still dont think it worked out too well.

SO I am working on an original story, something that I want to actually try to publish. There is a mage school, the “bad guy” is another student who is using magic, potions etc to manipulate female students and staff to not only help him with his goals, But occasionally influence them into performing “favors” for him. using X he makes them sexually aroused, offers to “help” them. What I need to know, is what could be used to sexually arouse the women and what part of the brain/hormones etc that would effect. whos got a PHD

good question. I ask because I have seen a number of “different” types of vaginas as a husband, parent and art student. some I can see 100% ….. spreading open, but I often wondered about the other ones. will they just open like …. taking a small breath/sigh or is it full on opera singer and you can see her tonsils sort to speak.

If a woman squats to pick up something, like a box or clean the bottom of a shelf ….. what ever, does her vaginal lips open up/expose more of her inner lips? I really dont know how to ask this one.

lol you guys always crack me up Thinking on both the sides of real world and real ish movie etc world, this has been a topic that always interested me on a number of levels. There is a Indie movie (dont know the name) where an alien race had invaded earth and was using women as incubators for different breeds of alien troops etc. Though it did not say in what way, if it was just an embryo implanted like a normal pregnancy or if it was a kind of egg that just needed a warm place to sit. It also got me thinking, if this method could be used to increase populations of X species and bring them back from the brink of extinction or what have you.

So using movies etc as an example, women are sometimes used as incubators/surrogate for the offspring of X monster/alien. For some reason I am now thinking about the actual possibility of it. COULD! a female of a mammal species incubate the offspring of a different one? (with in reason) For example, could a Human woman incubate/surrogate lets say kittens/puppies, meaning of course artificial insemination of the correct eggs that are then implanted inside the woman. Or would the body see it as something strange and attack them, would they even connect to the uterus or simply die out. I am 99.9% sure it would not work at all, its more just an odd thought and I would like to see what other people think.

indeed, its just how to articulate it so that what you are seeing in your mind is what they see too..

Ive referenced that page a lot for the world lore, but I was thinking on a more personal level for this character. (still developing her) her home could be a granny smith tree, because she puts on that she is every ones grandmother because she is more than old enough to be and likes to give the kids apples. (Irish folklore says apples are for health, youthfulness and rebirth) just trying to figure out how do I articulate that the “house” is X size but its a tree to.

lol thanks BW. I still have to work out the process, but my thinking is that a special seedling or something would be planted in the ground, if a specific tree type was desired, they would add the seed of that tree (Apple, Maple etc) then combined with the mind of the “owner” they would communicate what the desired type of home is, it would also be unwise if you were an uninvited guest like a thief as doors and walls etc could move and increase or decrease in size kind of like a haunted house but any ways, I need a home for an elder elven sage, something that would say not a witch but still dont fuck with her if that makes any sense.

its more like as the tree grows, it branches out, splitting the trunk etc and weaving the vines here and there to make the shapes of the house. if it needs to grow bigger, like if there are children etc, it sprouts more branches and other things. It can take on house like features, im just not sure how doors and windows would work. My elves are normal sized, all fairy tale creatures are going to be the standard sizes as depicted in most myths and or fiction. Magic is used to grow named tree to X size and …… weave it? but the trees are not exactly “normal” but more like I think there called treants or etens……. kind of like Grout only stationary.

So I am working on a actual original story, in my world the elves make houses/buildings by growing trees, they dont use nails and boards etc. I need to describe a simple home made from an apple tree but not make it sound like a small tree = a normal sized one, anyone got any ideas?

humm guess I will have to play with it a bit more, but over all I think you guys have given me some good suggestions, thanks. What about Mage Lord (Name ) Here come the Mage Lords. Oh look kids, its Mage Lord (Name again)

lol. The twelve were once a team ….. justice league ish but not. I am thinking a title that could be used singular for one or collectively for all of them.

So I have 12 mages, ATM I am calling them Grand Mages title wise. But it feels too low grade for these mages, there supposed to be almost on the level of Gods, their all over a thousand years old, even the demons of the 9 realms dont want a direct conflict with any one of them, let alone all 12. Does anyone have an idea of what could be a title for a mage of that level?

yeah unless someone can come up with a better name, im going with a Hamlet

my thought was something like a …... not a town, there is maybe 5-6 farms, 1-2 shops but nothing too major, if you didnt know it was there you would walk right past it kind of place.

this world is a kind of alternate Earth, 90% of the life here is there and then some extra ones (dragons etc)

in this other story im working on, a thought has come to mind. does a planet need an abundance of salt water to create life like our planet, or could a planet exist that has very little salt water, sort of an inversion of earths salt and fresh water

lol the setting idea is that these Goblins use all these methods, depending on their needs. if they want to capture you, my thinking is either darts or gas bombs. if they want to kill you, depending on the how, either something in your food (threw something over everyone's head and into the pot it went) or its on standard weapons. could also be on a dart to kill a really powerful enemy. the Kill poisons would have to be ok to eat the “target” after its been killed. (traveling trader has guard with him, guard goes down, goblins eat guard (cooked or not) while trader runs off) in some ways its kind of like the Manga “Goblin Slayer” just different…… kind of

any kind of toxin (google told me the ones used are types of toxins and its how they work) though im not going to be picky about it, i just need some used on darts, a gas one and one that can be placed in foods

So I am working on a story in a LOTR type setting, I need a paralyzing, knock out, sleep poisons that Goblins could use. Used in darts, gas bombs or put in food. If real ones exist that would be great, if not …. well meh. anyone have any in mind that would work for any of these settings?