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yeah but what would they be called? just a "Famiresu shop" or what? i mean if i said Mc donnalds every one would more or less know what im refering to, or burger king. how would i convey what that is to people that wouldnt know the meaning of the word?

well the naruto univers is kind of ..... odd, they have some what modern tech like cameras, TV, trains etc but also a more feudal japan style at the same time. like i said its odd, so im just looking for a general restaurant type that would have food and be ok with having a child of 1 year in there eating or some thing

i need a type of restaurant that would fit in the Naruto universe that would allow a child to eat there, some thing that would have enough types of food for almost any one. what kind would it be?

got it now and updated my fic. bit of a pain to have to do this, oh well, thanks for the help people

i didnt get any thing in my email, but i will try again or some thing

oh no worries, im very paitent, i was just wondering because that link i was given ........ it said im not regestered @_@ i think the AFF gremlins have it in for me or some thing

any idea when this will be changed to the proper links or any thing? what is the best way to got to where i want?

i was going to add another chapter to a story im working on. i clicked on the "members tools" and from there to the "author panel" like i have in the past. the box on the right hand side that would have had all the options is empty, i even checked to see if they were just invisable but they are out right gone. i refreshed the page, reloaded the site and still no change. i am using the current version of IE as i have had little or no problmes with it. here is an image of what i see

I think that for him, he would really enjoy messing with the Aray/relay station, there isnt one on his ship like that so its a new toy for him really. hes in the military because thats where all the fun toys are, not to mention the chance to maybe encounter an ailen race and compair notes, technology etc, then see what he could do with it. thats more or less his reason. as for the troops ..... eh you do have a point, but i dont see them having much of a conversation, there just there to make sure nothing stops him from doing his job and the like. the station is just there to give any signals a boost to reach their destination, it would recive what ever mesages from what ever ships or other stations, then relay them to another or to the targeted ship/station/planet. other than that, there is nothing on the planet of real interest ........ so far, still thinking about it

Hes one of many on a starship, think Star trek/wars/babylon 5/Halo ish type of setting. on his ship, hes one of ..... 100? or so engineers, they all more or less do all the jobs, helps to keep them fresh in what ever should the need come, what happens if Bob is killed and hes the only one that knew how to fix the ..... ARS X 73 atomic pulse mega cannon. also, it would be part of the protocal for every one to be on an away mission every so often, its more or less his turn, but hes also the best one for what this mission is SUPPOSED to be, he has the most skills with things like this, if he cant find the problem, he will over power the system to fix the problem if he can or do what ever it takes. so really, he does do it all, but hes not the only one. his reaction, i kind of pharaphrased it, his reaction would be clear, hes yelling things like "Oh my FUCKING GOD, what the hell happend here, how the HELL did they .... WHAT?" the troops arnt really the focus right now really, there just the every day, faceless troops with helmets on, like you would see in games and the like.

i would think that hes mostly detatched from every one, bit of a loner, he has no problems wiht any one really, and would you really want to bully some one that fixes, upgrades and over all keeps your weapons in working order when returned to an armory? im thinking that his reaction would mostly be OMG WTF? WTH? WHAT? because he didnt hear any thing and they were probably killed fiarly fast and there is no sign of any enemy bodies/blood. if it wasnt for this guys attitude, he could have been chief engineer of any ship HE wanted to be, give him a wrench and a broken warp drive, he could fix it, just wouldnt be pritty. most of his friends would be all over the ship, they ask for HIM to fix things, like the engines of a pilots fighter, a Drs spictral scanner or what ever, a ship with him on it, run at 120% as to 100% i would think that most of the troops would be ok with the job because, frst off, its protocal, you dont send any one alone unless they are commando, and orders are orders.

sorry for not replying, was thinking it over. im not too sure about it, i would like a name thats actually understandable i think. like bone archer, skull mage and skeletan warrior, all are skeletons and called some thing slightly different ish. or knight, black knight, death knight, paladin, templar, all being a type of knight ish style. eh i dont know, its hard i think.

ok the story is about him, his team was just sent to fix the array, there is nothing actually wrong with it, its just being jammed by some thing. i think the planet its self would be kind of like mars in most ways, some vegatation here and there, some animals etc, nothing too appealing really, at the moment, there is no war or any thing, this is first contact. i wouldnt call him a perfectionist, he has no problems making some thing look ugly but better, like crossing wires to bypass a fused junction to make the ships weapons more effective or some thing. he doesnt see his job as work, its more like a child with a new toy (sweet i get to take this thing appart, i wonder how fast i can do it) fun toys would be some thing like, putting a pasma grenade as a 2nd warhead for a rocket/missile, giving it an extra boom. unless your asking for special toys for personal use ^_- he has friends, it just takes time to become a friend of his, he doesnt want to deal with narrowminded BS from people that dont understand him, if you want to be his friend then you can be, it will just take you time to actually realy become friends. his inability to actually fight is because for him, hes a nervous shaking hand soldier, but hes also more interested in the workings of the weapons than actually using them, how can i make it a better weapon etc, besides hes an engeneer, the soldiers do the fighting there is an AI aid that he works with, for now i will just call him Bob, and hes very helpful and every thing but in a very smart assed way. "wow look at that, there must be 30 guys standing in your way ...... you know if you were to die, i would to so you better be careful and keep your head down" "Careful not to cross the wrong wires, or you might get more than a little shock" kind of acts like an older brother to him, helping but still being a pain in the ass.

well the implants in some cases are literal, like an actual cyborg arm that opens up into ..... 3? multi tooled arms or standard of a claw like arm. other think would be connected to his suit, if you ever played Diablo 2 and had a socketed any thing, its some what like that in, there would be different levels of tech, like a lvl 1 power shield, cloak etc all of this would some what slow him down in some ways i would think. Nick name ...... didnt think about that actually,... tweek? because hes always tweeking things and making modifications to .... every thing. Habits, during his off time hes working on some thing new, upgrading the pulse rifles to fire with a 10% reduction in energy waste from the battery/powercell. Mannerism, i would say very witty, he knows what hes talking about, knows you dont know 1/2 of it, give him attitude and he gives it right back, want to mess with him, he can make your console explode and make it look like an accidental overload nice to him, he will make SPECIAL toys just for you because he likes you. hes not superman, a spartan from halo or sam from metroid, though i did use them in ways for reference. hes a pro as an engeneer/technition, loves working on new things, like a relay station that has mysteriously stopped working, sounds like some thing fun to rip appart and make it better. his ability to fight, better off giving a gun to a 12 yr old thinking hes going to save the universe than him. when using weapons hes very nervous, would hit the brawd side of a barn with 500 rounds when hes supposed to just fire 1. some of the upgrades that he finds would assist him, like a targeting assistant device of some kind. his upgrades to weapons would just make them work better, fire more rounds for 1/2 the cost of the battery, do more damage, have an extra function the reaction i think would be some think like this. As he exited the duct that lead him into the depths of the station, he turned expecting to see at least a few of the soldiers playing cards or some thing, what he saw dumbfounded him. sitting in pools of their own blood, all 12 soldiers were all dead. "You have got to be FUCKING KIDDING ME!!!, i was gone no more than an hour and look at what happens, what the fuck?" Taking a closer look at the bodies, it was clear they were killed by weapons not unlike the standard Earth Core weapons, ether plasma or laser based, but they were then mutilated, gutted in a most horrific way that displaid every thing or would have if it was not missing. but why do some thing like this? was it some kind of ritual? for trophies? food? or worse, pleasure? having annalized the data, his implanted AI assistant expressed his opinion. "Well now look at that, these hardened fully trained and very well armed soldiers really bit the big one didnt they, what chance do you have? your fucked." some thing like that.

i need some 2nd thoughts on a character and the world hes in, its still all up in the air so any help would be appresheated. Character: Privet george Samsong (name is up for change) combat engeneer with minor cybornetic implants designed to make him a more effective engeneer, doing tasks at 2X the speed and able to analize components or technology that is of alien nature. not suited for actual combat, skills are meak at best, engeneering skills are surpassed by none, one of a kind. attitude is smart ass, sarcastic, friendly, good natured, foul mouthed, does not have problem offending commanders or telling them things they dont want to hear. Story: year 2346, character is fixing a relay station and while he is in the depths of the inner workings of the station, his squad/guards of 12 marines are killed leaving him alone on the un inhabited world. both sides use weapons of simular nature, laser/phaser types that are ether full auto or beam weapons and plasma based weapons that are burst fire or single shot. difference between weapons is how its made and what it looks like, all in all they do the same things. the character is able to ..... scan? the alien weapons and back engeneer them and combine a simular weapon into it as long as they are of the same type (human plasma weapon X alien plasma weapon) he is also able to salvage armor and armor components from dead human and alien units and combine them into his space/enviroment suit and make it more effective, salvaging alien shield generator, cloaking field, night vision, jet pack etc. this is all done so that he can get to a location to contact his ship for extraction and other things. any thoughts on this?

would any one else be interested in becoming a beta for my naruto fic?

for an example, there are high elf, wood elf, dark elf etc the names and every thing mean some thing. so im looking for some thing like that for vampires.

im working on a project and i need a ..... classification? for 3 kinds of vampires. 1: demon/ic vamps, the original ones that would look some thing like in the movies blade 3 and vanhelsing (dracula) 2: the turned vamps, a vampire that was human, elf or what ever race and was turned into one.(still kind of alive) 3: undead vamp that is of some one that was killed while being turned or some thing and there .... almost ghoul ish? i need some thing to seperate them by names so that if Character A is refering to X Vampires he would be talking about the demonic ones as to the other ones. any ides would be apresheated.

i want to see if this translates properly. The next morning Ino was laying in a warm bath, taking her sweet time as she washed her body. Her thoughts soon began to wonder about another young blond, Naruto had become a very powerful ninja, he was a hero not only to Konoha but several other countries and villages as well. He was brave, strong and had become very handsome over the years, she had seen him a few times with out his shirt on and in shorts, the very thoughts of him were getting her really hot. She could feel her pussy starting to twitch and burn with need, she quickly placed one hand between her legs and dipped a finger gently inside while she began rubbing her clit with her thumb. Her other hand went to one of her breasts as she began rubbing at her nipple and giving it a light pinch and pull. She was so hot and needed release so badly, her thoughts turned more and more towards Naruto fucking her relentlessly, pounding his hard dick inside her, making her scream out as he ravaged her in every way she liked. His big strong arms holding her to his very well defined body, his mouth taking in one of her nipples to bite and suck on, switching back and forth between them. She was getting close, really close that she was having a hard time keeping her self quiet as she pumped her fingers in her pussy thinking about his dick.

so far your the only one that is interested so why not. here is the link to 3 chapters that WERE edited with help of an old beta, she had to quit because of life related reasons. any ways, this can help give you an idea of what diretion im going in. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481

I need a Beta for a Naruto fic i am working on. i need some one that can read my story and fix my spelling and or grammer, the typical stuff. its not needed but it could help alot if you know some thing about Japanese culture, including how to use the honor fics (kun, chan, nee-chan, nii-chan etc) if your interested, we can talk about it and figure out where to go from here.

no one interested in being a beta for a Naruto fic?

Im looking for a Beta that knows the show/manga and has some understanidng of the Japanese culture to help me with my stories. my issues are run on sentences, gramer and punctuation as i am a minor Dsylexic. im very easy going with my story, my old beta had a really easy time with me but had to quit for personal reasons. If any one is interested, we can have a trial run using one of my chapters. the story is here http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481 and the 3 chapters have been worked on by my old beta.

yes thats more what im looking for. i dont know how to visiually describe what the outfit looks like from the perspective of some one else. the one thats giving me the most problems is the chest pice thats in that one picture, i see it as leather ish type of armor or some thing, its ether that or rubber o.0 unless some one has a better idea of what it would be.

Im not sure if i am in the right fourms as i am asking for writing help. Im working on a ninja related fic and im trying to describe some things for the character to be dressed as. I know all the parts of clothing that i want but i need help to describe some of it, pictures are included. for a chest pice/top im thinking of some thing simular to what Ryu from Ninja Gaiden 2 has on. i am unsure of if this would be a correct description, but spiked/bladed wrist guards? in short im trying to describe some one to look more like the sterieotypical ninja just a little more badass looking kind of like Ryu is, he just has a different personality and every thing and is in a different universe. any help would be apresheated.