To clarify, the issue with the story is that it is a commissioned work based on a fandom. Most copyright owners take a very dim view of such things. Hence, we don't allow it here.
If magus wants any of this deleted, he has only to ask.
However, in the interest of not hijacking this further, perhaps we shouldn't ask more questions.
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