Thank you, JD! Damn, you always manage to make me feel like I know what I'm doing (as opposed to my usual seat of the pants style of writing). I felt sort of bad for Derwen because he really didn't have much good sex at all in this, did he? First the punishment sex from Celyn, and then the punishment sex from the bitch Goddess. It'd be enough to turn me off the whole notion, but fortunately Derwen's made of sterner stuff.
I loved the song, by the way. I need to listen to more of their music. It's a good sound.