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    CloverReef got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I finally read and reviewed your story a couple days ago @BronxWench. Sorry I was a little late with it.
    To everyone else, I'm going to disable contributions in a couple days, so if anyone else wants to put a story up, you can let me know and I'll wait for you or you can save it for next year's anthology. 
    Awesome job everybody! Hope to see you in the Holidays one where the theme will be... Drumroll please... Holidays! I know, I'm surprised too. Any holiday centered around december/January. Have fun! 
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    CloverReef reacted to BronxWench in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    More reviews! I’m like a kid at, well, Hallowe’en!
    Thank you, so much! The idea of wrens as Samhain sacrifices is pretty obscure—they’re more often associated with Boxing Day, and collecting pence for the wren. But I like my obscure details, and I am really glad it worked!
    You are completely awesome to have gone back and read the older stories, but it’s good to know they hung together well. I mean, I went years between them, so… Thank you!  
    I felt pretty bad for Connor in the last one. He’s really not had a whole lot of luck in his life—losing his dad, and then his Gran, and the whole teenage rebellion thing at the fairy fort leading to ten years of servitude to the Sídhe. And when he figures out his grand exit, Murphy’s Law strikes again. On the bright side, I guess he won’t die a virgin after all…maybe. We’ll have to see if @Desiderius Price  get his wish and there’s another episode of “Aw, fuck me, it’s the Sídhe!” in our future. 
     
     
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    CloverReef got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I finally read and reviewed your story a couple days ago @BronxWench. Sorry I was a little late with it.
    To everyone else, I'm going to disable contributions in a couple days, so if anyone else wants to put a story up, you can let me know and I'll wait for you or you can save it for next year's anthology. 
    Awesome job everybody! Hope to see you in the Holidays one where the theme will be... Drumroll please... Holidays! I know, I'm surprised too. Any holiday centered around december/January. Have fun! 
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    CloverReef reacted to Sinfulwolf in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    Heh, it’s all good. 
    But that doesn’t surprise me. Like I said, it seemed like such a big world.
    And damn those multiple projects eh? I feel that pain.
    Ha. There is, I think it might be a slight different take… but honestly only slightly.
     
    But, more reviews have been put up.
    Thank you! I did want to go for dark and bloody. Think I hit it. Lydia I really liked, and she’ll likely return some day. Though as a protagonist of her own.
    Heh. I had pondered the “NoSex” thing for a bit, but I felt it worked better for what I was going for. There was a semblance of an idea to have the grove scene a sex scene as well, but it wouldn’t have felt crowbarred in. Asides, my other work has plenty of sex.
    And damnit! 
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    CloverReef reacted to Sinfulwolf in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    Problem with Thanksgiving is that it’s not nearly as widespread or international… for example, Canadian Thanksgiving is already done. Weeks ago.
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    CloverReef reacted to Praetor in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I’m down for a Christmas party, maybe even a Thanksgiving Party.  I wanted to do something for Halloween but started late and couldn’t finish a fic in time that didn’t clearly rip off Resident Evil, Bloodborne or Dark Souls.  I guess I’ll try again next year.
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    CloverReef reacted to JayDee in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    Don’t want to upset rehabbed craic addicts, eh?
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    CloverReef got a reaction from swirlingdoubt in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    The anthology is up!
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    CloverReef got a reaction from swirlingdoubt in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    We’re up and running now! Read the stories here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109141 
    Review reply thread can be found here:
    if you want to add one of your own, you can find the details below. 
     
    Every year on AFF, we do an anthology of original short stories. Everyone is welcome to participate! The rules are simple:
    Oneshots (Under 50k words)  Original fiction  Halloween or Horror theme Of course, include all the appropriate warnings at the beginning of your story If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here or send me a PM. 
    If you want to participate, but don’t have an idea, there are a ton of sites online with horror prompts. Here’s one! https://screencraft.org/2017/10/19/101-terrifying-horror-story-prompts/
    If you’ve already decided to participate, please say so - here or PM me - with your story title and summary. Happy Halloween! 
    Confirmed Participants: 
    @Desiderius Price
    Title: Adam the Altar Boy  – Warnings: Abuse, Anal, Contro, Exhib, Fet, Horror, Inc, Minor1, Minor2, MCD, MiCD, MM, Oral, Pedo, Rape, Violence, WS
    Summary: Adam, the altar boy, at Christmas. @BronxWench
    Title: TBD  – Warnings: TBD
    Summary: TBD @CloverReef (PlagueClover on the Archive)
    Title: Scent of Brine  – Warnings: F/F, MiCD, rape, M/F
    Summary: Concepcion is stuck at sea, pregnant and with her English brute of a husband. She’s resigned herself to her life of abuse and popping out babies, but one fateful night, a phantom appears and gives her another option…   @Sinfulwolf 
    Title: TBD  – Warnings: TBD
    Summary: TBD @InvidiaRed
    Title: Synth  – Warnings: TBD
    Summary: A creation witnesses the breaking of its creators. @Tcr
    Title: Creeper Part 2  – Warnings: FF, Violence, NoSex, 
    Summary: A year has passed since Grace’s parents were murdered and she has tried to live a normal life at university. But a promise was made that day and promises should be kept, right? @GeorgeGlass
    Title: Apprentice  – Warnings: Hum, MCD, MF, Oral
    Summary: Three sisters on their way to a ball must travel through the pine woods. What could go wrong? (If you have a forum theme on and can’t see the post, try highlighting it.)
     
     
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    CloverReef reacted to Sinfulwolf in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    We can be sometimes can’t we? The mind is a deeply odd place sometimes. Especially among writers. It’s strange what we can pull out of ourselves. And yes, I remember you talking about that before. Perhaps all the more frightening in that it feels so damn plausible. 
    Heh, I have an idea, as we’ve chatted about it before. But yeah, I have a feeling I’ll have the same issues whenever I get around to my M/M scenes. Tip toeing that line between cheesy and clinical and what’s actually sexy to those that enjoy the material
     
    I also have reviews of my own to respond to. Woo! 
    I enjoy doing little things like that. I like describing little ticks and motions the characters do when they’re just talking or walking or whatever. I feel it breathes a little life into them. Kind of a reminder for the imagination that they’re not just standing that yammering at each other straight backed, or strolling super purposefully down the road. I find it also opens doors for little snipits of world building. Not much, but little bits of it.
    And yeah, once I thought of this idea earlier this week I hit the ground running and just went for it. Lydia was originally going to be the main character, but I felt it better for her just to have a cameo. I thought it would be better for the horror vibe if I had this noble completely out of her comfort zone. I often worry about the Mary Sue thing, especially with my typical archetype that I find coming into my stories. Them warrior lasses that I enjoy writing so much. But, this time it wasn’t actually I worry for me. I found it rather different to go for the noble woman who was physically weak, but could be a powerhouse in politics. She was a fun character to write.
     
    Why thank you. The one side was certainly inspired by Rome, and the conquered city in my head was drawn from Gaul, Brittannia, and Massalia. I had a lot more stuff but… didn’t want to drown in exposition since most of it wasn’t necessary for the plot. But yes, butchered by demons/undead isn’t the best of days.
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    CloverReef reacted to GeorgeGlass in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I've already decided what to write for next year. Working title: "Day of the Deadly."
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    CloverReef reacted to Desiderius Price in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    I felt a bit  … disturbed too by what my mind came up with, but definitely a dark story (and technically, that entire universe of mine is set a short ways in the future, so it could definitely happen depending on politics).
    Now that I’ve situated a Halloween story around Christmas, next challenge it fit a Holiday story around Halloween
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    CloverReef reacted to Sinfulwolf in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    Woo! Managed to finish. After about 5 scraped ideas, and a few starts and restarts, I finally got something I actually had a lot of fun writing. 
    Title: Eve of Hollow Souls
    Summary: A noblewoman of a conquered land goes to visit her countryside villa, on the night of a outlawed religious festival. 
    Warnings: Violence, no sex, F/F (sorta, but not really)
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    CloverReef reacted to JayDee in Throw your ideas in here!   
    Well, it’s been a year so here’s some more ideas for free. I mean, if you don’t count the price of your self respect.
     
    In the old west, a horse tamer who claims he can break any horse meets a recent immigrant kelpie by a river.
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    A reader reads a story on a website about a monster that wrote a story on a website and then killed anyone who read it and didn’t leave a review. They don’t leave a review. The monster then appears and says that it was only a story, and it actually just fucks people who read and don’t review. But only if they’re into monster sex.
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    A giant spider finds a human in the cave, and hides until a bigger spider shoos them out, maybe with a giant glass and oversized copy of a newspaper.
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    A serial killer targets people writing article titles which use “Millennials” to mean teenagers instead of “early/mid twenties to damn near 40”
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    At a convention, a fursuit has the head pulled off to reveal a whole bunch of raccoons who were just trying to get to the free buffet
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    In a second person solo fic, you find yourself skimming down increasingly terrible ideas before deciding to go masturbate to that hot bath scene in Shokan Lust.
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    In a first person fic, I write inceasingly terrible ideas onto a thread before my computer gains sentience and kills me in disgust. Also with masturbation.
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    Someone should totally turn that old joke with the “Why does your dick taste like shit?” “Oh, I forgot, your brother already borrowed the car” into a full length story.
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    A succubus sucks souls on a bus. By dressing sluttily and drawing energy from perverts who grope her. The more/worse things they do, the more of their life force she gets, the most depraved acts committed publically lead to a quick death. On one bus route in Trenton nine men die in one night. And four women.
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    A pizza delivery guy gets an order to take pizza to a cemetary. The dead folks find they don’t have the money to pay, so in line with the porno rules of pizza delivery he has to get it on with a couple of half rotted revenants. “I should have known there was evil here when they ordered double pineapple,” he thinks.
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    This idea left intentionally blank.
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    A user who makes jokes about ABDL fics accidentally pisses off a powerful witch who is a fan, and gets turned into her ABDL slave. At least that’s what I assume happened.
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    Fuck. 12 months of scrawling every spare thought down and not a single good idea.
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    CloverReef reacted to JayDee in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    That’s me twice!
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    CloverReef got a reaction from JayDee in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    Yes. Definitely a sign. Thanks for the review!
     
    Thank you for pointing those out. That’s what happens when I continue to edit after it’s been betaed. I’m glad the F/F smut bit went well enough. I think that was what I was most worried about, especially with the awkward boob grab. Still not entirely sure why I didn’t rewrite that bit, lol. Thank you for the review!  
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    CloverReef reacted to BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    Mine is in the works!
     
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    CloverReef reacted to Desiderius Price in The sexbot   
    I’d almost suggest a more classic twist.  Instead of Jake seeking his mother out, he surreptitiously sells them (based on his dick, of course).  Unbeknownst to Jake, his mother, having marital issues with his father (or divorced and single), buys one and uses it.  Truth comes out...over a big family Christmas dinner?   Think we’ve got a holiday story for you to write, @T_B.
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    CloverReef reacted to Desiderius Price in I'm haunted   
    We’ll encourage you!  Heck, this premise could even make for a good Halloween story (going on now).
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    CloverReef reacted to JayDee in I'm haunted   
    “I can’t tell if you’re aroused, or just dripping ectoplasm.”
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    CloverReef got a reaction from Desiderius Price in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    BTW that Riggs & Mortis thing made me laugh
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    CloverReef reacted to Desiderius Price in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    Thank you, thank you for the review!  
    Obviously being from Adam’s point of view (and his younger brother’s), I don’t tell the full picture of what’s going through Father Jordan’s mind.  And if Hope had suspected Adam’s fate, she would not have dropped him off like that, instead, picking up Oliver too and bringing them elsewhere..
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    CloverReef got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    The anthology is up!
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    CloverReef reacted to Desiderius Price in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    And so is my story, enjoy the misbehaving priests!
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    CloverReef got a reaction from Desiderius Price in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    The anthology is up!
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