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I finally get to say "I told you so". Legion is filled with grief and hatred right now. That could be a problem, in the future, he could go of the deep end. thank Punisher or Electra. he could start killing everybody he thanks deserves it. Great chapter I can't wait for the next one.

he was in a rage still, not really thinking straight

I think he meant on the way back from the sub. Legion just wanted to get back to Mika, to hold her one more time. He no longer cared about anything but seeing the woman he loved just once more

I am sorry I meant DA. She must be a little devil Angel to you and the family. Like I said have a nice day.

oh there will be sex and twists, hell i'm not even sure where the story will go

or he comes to his senses and realizes what he's done and flips out again, self destructs along with all the other naniyes and everyone dies, Hey, I could wrap this up in one more chapter

Legion flew past the boat with the major, how come he did not see the boat?

Max and legion designed him a body composed entirely of nanites of legions design so smaller and can be absorbed through the skin The boat, and I forgot to put this in, was put together by the two men the major left behindoh and yes Alice is with the major heading for a small island off the coast and we still don't know how bad the taser damaged her...da da da

Killing "bad guys" is NOT a flaw or weakness. B

Appears nanites can go in thru pores in the skin OR can be injected. Legion has conjured up an avatar that can change at will. He is formed of nanites in the millions or billions. He is now self aware and is evidencing some human traits. Many things are invisable to the naked eye until there is a mass of them. In addition to having a nice "sex story" this is also sci-fi. Mangus - where did I miss the boat? B

Damn Magus, you are good! One important piece I missed, I think. How does Legion make the transition from hologram to something that can be touched and how can the nanities get into a person's body if there are no wounds, and Max, Alice or Cat don't inject the individuals? Legion is a more extreme version of Max. The nanities are not invisible because the show up on X-rays but the SG guys holding the hostages AND those outside doesn't seem to see them. They only see Legion. You really went to town in this chapter. So, where is Alice and where is the major taking her? I thought he reported to the guy in the sub.

oops, sorry

Well obviously DA let the cat out of the bag...so yes while he seems to be a mechanical Marty Sue now, his flaws will be revealed, and his weaknesses

I am surprised that he let Legion miss Alice in the RHI. But that would have made the rescue scenes harder to do. B

I like this version of legion... He does seem a bit overpowered though. At least with the war spiders they could fire missiles at them. Maybe an EMP would work...

Holy crap indeed!!!! The "Master" has NOT lost his touch!!!!!