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Every form of media producer should know that killing animals (mostly dogs) is a tear jerker. Many a sad film I can watch without crying hut as soon as the main characters dog dies I'm fucked.

A cliff hanger with an actual cliff

Does anyone know if Mika had a chip? if she did then she just downloaded. Legion is in shock but after that passes I don't think the bad guys will have to think about the future. I am sorta worried for Alice because Legion has never felt grief and lose so I can't wait to see what he does. Max might not have to deal with the SG's at all.

Milo was a spider. Of course he is gonna attack. Unfortunately, his only weapons are his teeth and he is a lot more vulnerable as a canine. Then, when Milo gets caught in the fray, Mia gets involved and she has even less protection. Scratch two four-legged kids. Other than that drop off there at the end, it was good. Ya couldn't cut us some slack with the cliffs, could ya? LOL, of course not. Ya wouldn't be Magusfang if ya did. Still hanging on every chapter.

oh no, they both have already expressed that they want Max to be the father and just as soon as i can figure out a plausible scenario max will make it happen

I believe that I should think about some things other than raining vengeance on the SG. Max, Legion, Amy and the rest of the family are coming! This is a suggestion for a few chapters down de road. When Max discover how Alice and May can make a baby, and the genius will, let the babies father be Rick. Max can't want to hog up everything. Plus he will have earned it with getting shot up and all and the family need some new blood!! Just a thought. Magus, now that the appetiser is consumed I am ready with my knife and fork, well sharpened, for the main course. ETA?

that would be scary but sadly no

I just had surgury on drugs sorry the legion baby means part nanite Oh and all nanites right now will be atempting to get to mika everyone will feel the heartbreak and imediate panicked worry and overwelming rage of legion All self aware spiders all machines all the warbots and flyers can be simultanipusly overriden and controled with the hive mind of legion

a nanite infused legion baby grown like a clone with combonation of bolth june and max dna but for alice moor strey cinthia dna from her old brush amy saved grown in an incubation chamber inside may and alice

No monkey this week...just me and the wifeys...been sooooo much fun

"We" understand distractions especially welcome ones. HOWEVER you are the one that left the cliffhanger on such a sharp edge. Put monkey & company back in their cage/room for a while and give your suffering public/fans a little relief. B

day or two, having a lot of distractions lately LOL Welcome distractions, but they do slow the writing down.

Nearly half done

I think we liked it - I did anyway. HOWEVER this cliffhanger is a bit different than the others. Some relief please.

and they never killed kids until "The Thing"

So thanks for all the replies and sowwy I killed the dogs (not really) I didn't know Mia had so many fans But that's the way it goes; hope everyone liked the chapter other than the deceased canines I mean

I say legion is gonna wipe out any members of the SG within his capable range. They all wondered what would happen when he came, what about when he's angry?

I tend to avoid this conversation because magus tends to drop red herrings like no tomorrow. I had to comment, though, because of this most recent chap. Alice captured, Joanne rescued, the main battlers of the younger generation are away, Legion's love "seemingly" dead. I think Max is gonna be the lesser of two storms to cross the sadistic bastard's bow. Remember that Legion has no need for breathing and can take any shape. How long does anybody think he is gonna wait to find out where the assault came from?

They killed the dogs, I hope they die bloody and painfully. Especially the guy in charge and when he dies I hope it's Max and he can't figure out how this kid beat him.