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@Jade: so you got my message. I feel like a stalker or something. I just took an hour and a half (during SNL - Lady Gaga was hosting and she was actually pretty good) to look at the ch over my phone, which always seems to help me see mistakes better than on my laptop. And I found, let me count them...13 grammatical mistakes and 2 issues with too frequent use of adjectives. "Little", "massive", and "embarrassment" among them. I have problems with the word massive in relation to penis size. Because I've had my fair share of men, and the average penis size is 7 inches. I find it very hard to believe my male love interest could have a 10 in cock. But, it's a story so what the hey? This is funny b/c I have yet to address you review! Hey I'm glad you liked this chapter. I spent a week on it, I think. I thought about it all through the day and well into the night. I thought about it when I woke up, and when I was walking the dog, you get the point! I had to reconcile a lot of little bits of the plot that are easy to mess up - like the age of Elliot, when Luke's grandpa died, how old Tony Hawk was when Fico was 11, etc. Now, if you go back and look in the earlier chapters, you'll see that Elliot is initially described by Fico as appearing around 6-7 yrs. Tilde just confirms his judgement in this chapter. Next chapter: a scary/sexy dream of Fico and Luke together. Gotta love dream sequences!

Heya chica! Just wanted to tell you that I'm slowly but surely reading the latest chapters but I've been soooo busy lately that I'm reading it agonizingly slow! I've already finished ch 12(I think...the chapter title is something about Medusa and the green eyed monster!)and I've noticed the changes and they're pretty good!God I feel soooo honored that you took my opinion into consideration! Maaan...I just found The Worst disadvantage of living in my country!I mean I love my country despite all its downsides but this is just annoying! I have this MONUMENTAL crush on one of my female classmates (I like to consider myself bisexual ).Well...not technically 'classmates' as we have no classes in common.And I'm like, 79.6% sure she has a crush on me,too!But neither of us can nor are willing to do anything about it 'cause we can't just straight walk and ask and it's sooooo frustrating!I don't suppose you have any suggestions on what to do now do you?