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  1. Amazingly enough I did not start with my current skills. I encountered my English teacher about 6 years after the last class and thanked him for his good lessons and he had no memory of me at all…looking at the texts I wrote back then that was probably quite fair. It is safe to say that I learned the bulk of my knowledge after school. The Azbezil story was written between 2001 and 2006 and I have improved quite a bit since.Going by the reviews it was first of my stories that had a really good plot, at one point I even got a significant group of people to answer a survey what they thought about the story, but when I check it now I see lots potential for improvement. We can say I do it because the other authors of AFF should get the message...I am big into reciprocal reviews. *hint* *hint* I already have that story on my possible-to-read list, but have not reached it yet. I also try to alternate around new authors on site so I don’t just read my favorites AFF writers and there is never enough free time for erotic writing/reading with family life intruding.
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  2. The webrowser ate my reply when I was about to post it...anyway I am not totally decided yet. A Carmen sequel kind of demands a good twist at the end and I don’t have any developed ideas for that. Another option would be a superhero story as sequel to my G.S.P. story. All the good feedback from InBrightestDay has made me start thinking about possibilities. Another obvious candidate is The Tale about the Laughter of Azbezil where I so far has only revised the first third. Considering how much feedback that story managed attract despite my lower grasp of English language it is shame the rest of the story is not done properly. I have an idea for sending the girls on a vacation abroad and in that scenario the ash-cloud would kind of obvious frame of reference. Maybe I should just send them by train and avoid the issue... I can understand where you are coming from after reading this chapter but there is lots more coming considering the cosplay Ronja has agreed to do for him and John being convinced they are in mutual agreed lets-break-the-rules-of-step-siblings-and-fuck relation. I am glad to hear you say that. I will be looking into reviewing something in you backlog later this week.
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