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  1. Good point with the idea to have a trigger warning about her getting intoxicated...do you think I should invent my own story tag (since OTHER seem kind of pointless and none others match, the AFF story codes really take a dictionary to understand) or should I just add a line about it on the top of chapter? Actually it could be worth mentioning that the intention for the scene is for it to be a case of blackmail more than crazy powerful love drug. So far in the story the blackmailing situation is a returning plot element (guess who will be back for more) while the aphrodisiac will probably not see much use. I had some ideas of earlier, but found other things to interest me when I continued the story. The double meaning of the right equipment was not intentional from the start. When possible I want the story scenes rooted in reality and quite obviously it is pain to have dog at home without supporting equipment. As an example you see quite much in porn that does not make sense from a realistic perspective with all the anal play without proper preparations. Unfortunately this seems to cause an infinite number of story scenes where it is clear from the plot they did not have time to prepare for the anal sex...quite disturbing for me when I read such. Glad you liked the scene in John’s room. I have great fun writing all the “fan-service” events with the step brother since it is fun to change the situation so it is the girl that push and push for sex instead of the guy. Of course it is not intentional from Ronja’s side, but how should poor John know that. Eventually a horny young man is bound to see a pattern after a while and then the really fun part starts... As for the matter of Ronja’s experiences in sex there are more detail in the third chapter, but you are right that she does not have lots of sexual experience when the story starts. Ronja’s envy of the popular girls in class in the beginning ofthe story is intended to place her as the kind of girl that long for sexual contact, but not really daring enough to act teasingly enough to catch attention. Then things start to happen and Ronja is forced to get used things she could not imagine before.
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