I sound masterful because I have many, many, many horrible first drafts and drabbles. I also take a lot of time to think about what i read; both the things I liked and disliked. That’s the important part. You need to think.. alot. And read a good deal to get a feel for the stuff that works for youy and doesn’t. Since I lean towards stoies that present fairly well fitting characters and a well hidden plot.
I can’t take credit for that line. It’s a quotayion from another author whom i can’t remember but it’s one that’s stuck with me for obvious reasons. As for my works on AFF. I’ve got 4., though 2 are due fro some rewriting.
Not the same thing - Pinky and the Brain
Gosalyn's Gambit - Darkwing Duck
Thursday - Animaniacs
The Bet (ongoing) - Tiny toons Adventures
PWP?
One saying I came across recently was this.
“You must always strive to be or, at the very least, appear to be impartial. Few things ruins a story for the reader more than knowing who God is rooting for.”
Though even there, one can toy with the rule. Sherlock Holmes stories were a good example of this as were many mystery stories. It was a foregone conclusion that the mystery would be solved, so the fun wasseeing if you could figure out the mystery before the big reveal. Sir COnan Doyle sadly, often cheated.