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Holy crap..

shhhhhh, i read the chapter,,,it pretty good, lots of twists and turns its all finished except proofing it, like every other word is misspelled i've never seen so many squiggly lines. don't worry, i'll keep bugging him shhhh, i was never here holy crap, i'm a virgin! when the hell did that happen...oh, i'm so mad too, the nuns in catholic school said you couldn't go back!

:rolls eyes: at DA Ok, the reason they shot Mika was they were terrified, remember the house floodlights are on so they are partially blinded and being cut down, they would shoot at anything that moved As for Alice getting tazed, well military tazers pack a punch so what happened next would be telling, though some of you are pretty close...

I told him not to kill the dogs! He's so mean!

Need next chapter need to know if legion takes the one who shot mel apart like a blender or how manny of them downloaded if they hit tge kids or if any strey kids died the pool was hit after all and adults were there dose the major shread the yellow spider or dose another member of the strike team just before the body of the mechanical matinencebot pushes him off the cliff as they bolth fall the major hrabbing a rope last second lol need to know

I like this version of legion... He does seem a bit overpowered though. At least with the war spiders they could fire missiles at them. Maybe an EMP would work...

I think he is referring to his "girls/harem" B

Crazyc cleaned it up. Thank you DA for getting him on track AGAIN ! Mangus you left us wanting more as usual, At least it wasn't as bad a habger as the last chapter. I do see the possibility of a little comic relief when Max attracts the attention of various local and state agencies with the speed of the truck and they all fall in behind him only to get shut down when he goes down his road and the FBI says go away and you saw nothing here. Maybe backed up by a spider ord one of the twins in armor. Alice should regain consciousness and be able to deal with the boat crew then summon help to get her back. Legion has shown himself to be worthy. Evidently "grey hair" was rouge BUT was he being handled? Since Legion got involved everything that was in his head is now available to legion. Should be interesting. Another thought what about the other nonconus teams mentioned earlier. Do they just disappear? Waiting for the next installment. B

and who is this they? might have to block them

ok, Shadows chapter 9 is up, sorry, no sex in this one but its hard to do in the middle of a battle

Oh my god, she found the thread...is nothing sacred any more? get her an account they said...it'll be fun they said...sigh so just need to spell check it and its done...gonna take a quick shower first though...should be up sometime soon

i'll keep bugging him - PLEASE DO !! holy crap, i'm a virgin! when the hell did that happen...oh, i'm so mad too, the nuns in catholic school said you couldn't go back! So much fun to retrace those steps !!! B

Lol

I think DA is one of yours. AND she is telling on you . B

he he he...its awesome so writing the second half of the battle scene...blood gore and the odd explosion!

I wonder what an angry nanobot could do if it got inside of an enemy.

Mmmmm, the family is a bit angry, especially the machines...I don't think there will be any living prisoners... And it doesn't look good for either side :shakes head sadly:

Hopefully most of them are shadows. It would be nice to take some prisoners, tho', and turn them against the group.

over half done and the bodies are piling up

To quote a great actor, "Ha, Ha. It is to laugh."Of course you need Mel's aptitude with voices to get the sputters right, but ...