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told you it was gonna be messy Not over yet

Is it weird how incidents with the humans have barely any effect of me but as soon as its the dogs im almost shouting 'noooo'? Now would be a really bad time for you to pick up Northstar. (When you do, give us a heads up please. I think most will need to reread it to remember what's happening ), Maybe this new power armor has some special abilities and the twins get home, max in tow.

Bigger the better Now if you'll excuse me I have some reading to do

Oh there will be naked girls in the battle...I'm a sick sick man

See I can write visually with out including naked people Although its more fun with naked people

OK some hope here. engulfed his seemingly dead girlfriend then continued to flow towards the wild eyed and terrified men. Oh no, didn't I tell you Max dies...oops thats in chapter 9...just kidding Really hope so. He's artificial enough already. B

Well you certainly have NOT lost your touch with the cliffhangers!!!!! Good grief Man!!! What the holy heck???? I sure hope you're NOT planning on disappearing on us again anytime soon!!!!!!

Or is he...

Oh no, didn't I tell you Max dies...oops thats in chapter 9...just kidding

NOT LONG AT ALL !! Another damned cliffhanger - literally. We've lost the dogs and a bit player. Now what is legion going to do?? I suspect he may end the fight single handedly. Some of the women in a pile in the pool area? Excuse me but SHIT !. This appears much more serious than your previous hangers. No rush on the next chapter - anytime today will be fine. Is Max going to make the semi fly to get back? B

No Problem. So chapter 8 is up, bit long for me but oh well, hope you like it be kind...its a bit different...

"We" wouldn't do that - UNLESS - you eliminated, or tried to, one of the main characters. B

Ok, chapter basically done, just filling in a few places where it was a little thin...should be a surprise here and there for just about everyone So deep breathes...and no lynching of the Magus...not even in effigy!

Interesting...but no

Hmmmm, good idea but won't work...you'll see why soon, chapter two thirds done, hoping to finish it tonight

I see the potential for completely distracting the attackers. IF the twins let them get close enough to see without binocs. B

I hope Jeeves is not asleep at the switch. B

With the upcoming battle the naked ones should be the snakes who have had their clothes removed as the result of an explosion. B

You turning into a poet on me Magus? "........drowning is a sea of their own blood". That bit should refer to the SG!

Hmmm, I see frogmen approaching the house...this doesn'y bode well...or maybe it does

YES !!!! Next chapter please. B

YES !!!! Next chapter please. B

Hmmm - Max has a sub too. Designed for combat. Not as up to date as some of his newer toys, but I suspect can also be a stealthy hunter-killer. Just how much intel did they get from people in the pods?? So many unanswered questions. B

And we all know what happens to snitches... (Imitates shanking someone in the eye)

That would be telling

What is YOUR definition of "soon"? " Someone" ?? Good guy or bad guy? B

Thanks, you too. And from a vet let me say we are honored to stand the wall.

I know there have been questions through the past couple years as to what happened to my story "Adaptation," a post-apocalyptic tale of six people who travel across Canada to set up a secondary base for their organization five years after the world ended. They had a plan, but it all went down the drain when they found a young man who had been in hiding since the end. Well, it's been through some edits and re-writes and adjustments, even a new chapter, it's name has been changed to Five Years Dead and it's now part of the Haven series, with books two and three almost written. Five Years Dead has now been scheduled for the editor, and will be published in early 2016!