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not a week I hope, last two chapters had me stumped, but going better nowAnd I'm teaching the girls all about football so even though the girls sometimes beg of my niece spends Sunday with me during the season, cute how she yells at th tv

So read the first four chapters, waiting to see if she cheats on her husband with all the tenticle monsters after her - and just because they only have one tentacle doesn't mean their are no a tentacle monster

Monkey see, monkey do? yep

Would really hate to see Max release the toys from hell on the enemy. NOT. Bring on the war to protect the family. Do not let Kara's parent off to light. Also I agree to turn down the testorone on Petria some. Other than that great story and will be looking forward to book three and I agree that the title Snakes in the grass is a great title.

Damn hangers!.. OK now we have 2 damaged alfabit ops about to undergo interrogation that they probably won't survive and 2 scumbags that should never walk free. Maybe Kare should be the one to punish the scumbags that were her parents. That could be interesting like Evan. As far as the comments on Petra I don't see her as taking over. Yes she is unusual BUT so is your story. I think you have done an excellent job of weaving interpersonal relationships into a thrilling story. Stay the course and FULL SPEED AHEAD.