Check out the Marionette and let me know what you think Reviews are always a plus. I am trying to get 2000 hits then I can see if I can make this into a novel. This is a pasion of mine and would love to do something with it. so let me know
here IS my link
http://original.adul...p?no=1296887053
13 chapters and I have two more I just haven't had a chance to put them in let me know and I THANKS
THE MARIONETTE
A KILLER WHO STINGS HIS VICTIMS AS PUPPETS RETURNS ON A KILLING SPREE AND ONE THING HE IS ALREADY DEAD. WHO CAN STOP THIS MURDEROUS RAMPAGE OF A GHOSTLY SERIAL KILLER . JOIN TOBIAS, A MAN WHO LIVED THROUGH A SAME DRAMATIC EXPERIENCE AS A CHILD AND FBI OCCULT ENFORCER. REDSKY AS THE EMBARK IN A JOURNEY IN TO THE DANGEROUS ART OF THE OCCULT WILL HE BE ABLE TO SAVE THE NEXT VICTIM