Review responses/votes for "Within the Lies"

[SilverMyst]

This Thread is for Responses, Contests, Polls, and Interaction for the Harry Potter story "Within the Lies"... Though we tend to get off topic often.

More or less, this is just a fun thread where you can hang out and interact with the author. Why? Because Silver loves to talk with people! <3 lol If you want to see my Review Responses, hop over to http://www2.adultfan...the-lies/%3C~~~ Thank you! <3

POLLS

I'm STILL waiting for responses T.T lol Do people not like polls nowadays? Or is everyone "non-registered users"? XD lol

CONTESTS

Contest 1 (closed) ~ Guess what Harry’s Creature is. Leave a comment/review stating what you believe him to be. I will list those who guessed correctly next chapter, and I will use my sophisticated sorting method (aka put the names in a hat) and draw a winner. Said winner will then tell me a pairing and a minimum of five prompts for me to choose from. I’ll create a short story/oneshot as the prize *^.^*

Example form of what winner will fill out:

Pairing: Harry/Snape

Preferences: Harry Dominate Uke (bottom) while Snape is a Submissive Seme (top)

Prompts (minimum of five): Bondage, Roses, Whips, Toys, "Suck it", "Slut", Park, DP (there can be as many prompts as you'd like, but note that I might only choose two or three. Though the more choices you give me, the more I have to choose from, and the more likely I am to use as many as I can <3 lol)

Contest 1 WINNERS:

Dark Serpent Cat ~ You’re the only one that guessed Dementor… but since I’m writing something for you anyway, this doesn’t really count lol But I’ll give you an honourable mention *^.^*

summer ~ Your answer was close enough and I feel like there should be a real oneshot winner here, so... You're it! Please fill out the form above (like the example) and post it here in the forum <3 *huggles*

Contest 2 ~ I’ll give you clues about Harry’s next Mate. It’s kind of a guess who game…You can guess once per chapter, from the chapter the game is started until said Mate is revealed. When the Mate is revealed, then I’ll start up the next “guess who” clue and state those who guessed correctly.

Example:

1) I'm long and hard 2) I have an amazing filling 3) I make magic happen ...

The answer to these clues, when one is thinking of the Wizarding World, would be Wand... So get your mind out of the gutter, you perv lol

The method of choosing the winner, as well as the prize, are the same as Contest 1. Good luck everyone, and most of all… have fun! Now, here’s the first “Guess Who.”

1) I am pure 2) I'm red on the head 3) Be careful should you enter the dragon’s lair…

Contest 3 ~ Guess what George and Fred's Creature is! Winner(s) get to give prompts and kinks for some wet dreams Harry is going to have about his next mate! <3

Again, good luck you all! <3

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Alright! Let's move on, shall we? :3 ~

Edited September 16, 2011 by SilverMyst

[SilverMyst]

Edited September 16, 2011 by SilverMyst

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Edited September 16, 2011 by SilverMyst

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Edited September 16, 2011 by SilverMyst

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Edited September 6, 2011 by SilverMyst

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

well I am glad that this is more then just sex, though I do enjoy lemons, but when doing a multi chapter I personally think that there should be more then just sex in these type of fics unless it was a PWP like slut Harry and whore Harry fics which is also good but this one should definitively have romance before Harry goes and sleeps with most of his mates and some of them will be harder to accept or be accepted I am sure.

I still think Hagrid would be an awesome one with Harry since there is very little of that pairing and even though you are asking for votes I hope you don't just go by the votes. I can understand that the opinion of readers does matter and is helpful for the pairing decisions but it is your story and you make the final decisions.

By the way if you want another gay bear suggestion but want room to work on their personality I would suggest Golgomath he was the leader of the giants but he never really made more then a mention in the actual stories

Also what did you think of my other creature suggestions for Harry?

I forgot to mention that the Lamia and Succubus would also due to explain his parseltongue ability like the naga.

Lamiae are said to be beings who have the upper parts of a beautiful woman and the lower part of a serpent and they would seduce young men to feed on them, basically they along with empusa's were the greek versions of vampires and succubae

I also suggest the Succubus because if you think about some say that Lucifur or Satan however you look at it turned into a snake to trick Eve into eating the apple so it is possible that some demons can talk to snakes or certain type of animals.

also both male lamiae and succubae would be able to produce a type of pheromone that would cause even straight men to lust after them and can you imagine Harry constantly having to deal with horny men trying to get in his pants only for them to find themselves being threaten by Harry's mates.

Also the pheromones can be controlled thanks to occlumency but the stronger the succubus is the harder they have it with Occlumency and even if they have barriers up the pheromones leak out causing men to drool over them

By the way I know you said you don't know if you can do anthro or beast but if Harry is with Werewolves and he is a creature on his own don't you think the wolves will still want him while he is human and they are wolves if you have trouble writing it you can read other werewolf/Harry fics or you can look at furry yaoi

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

oh and if you want to do kitsunes why not make the twins into kitsune, lets face it it's not hard to believe. If you do that then the twins tails should be more like in myths

also anthro doesn't just apply to creatures who look mostly like animals but with human characteristics it also applies to humans with animal ears and tails, though I prefer the more animalistic anthro's

[SilverMyst]

well I am glad that this is more then just sex, though I do enjoy lemons, but when doing a multi chapter I personally think that there should be more then just sex in these type of fics unless it was a PWP like slut Harry and whore Harry fics which is also good but this one should definitively have romance before Harry goes and sleeps with most of his mates and some of them will be harder to accept or be accepted I am sure.

I still think Hagrid would be an awesome one with Harry since there is very little of that pairing and even though you are asking for votes I hope you don't just go by the votes. I can understand that the opinion of readers does matter and is helpful for the pairing decisions but it is your story and you make the final decisions.

The votes are more to see what people think, for my amusement, and maybe help guide the story a little bit. You understand how it is when a story starts writing itself. You have a plot, minor guidelines, and all that good stuff. But your muse, and things which you find entertaining/worthy of being added, are what help to fill in the in-between.

Oh, and Harry's reaction to mates will vary, depending. I can tell you one thing though... I love humor *^.^* (As you've probably gathered from Snipsickle. Honestly, I don't know where he came from Oo; One minute I'm typing along, going to have some random goblin help Harry out, and the next *BAM* there's a smart@$$ goblin prankster helping(?) Harry XD lol) Go figure.

I find it really fun, actually! PWP is nice and all, and sometimes a plotless porn is all I want to read. But as far as writing goes? I don't think I can write without some type of plot. I've tried PWP, but there was always a plot of some sort in the back of my mind.

By the way if you want another gay bear suggestion but want room to work on their personality I would suggest Golgomath he was the leader of the giants but he never really made more then a mention in the actual stories

That would be interesting, but I'd be afraid he'd tear our widdle Harry in two T_T

Also what did you think of my other creature suggestions for Harry?

I forgot to mention that the Lamia and Succubus would also due to explain his parseltongue ability like the naga.

Lamiae are said to be beings who have the upper parts of a beautiful woman and the lower part of a serpent and they would seduce young men to feed on them, basically they along with empusa's were the greek versions of vampires and succubae

I also suggest the Succubus because if you think about some say that Lucifer or Satan however you look at it turned into a snake to trick Eve into eating the apple so it is possible that some demons can talk to snakes or certain type of animals.

also both male lamiae and succubae would be able to produce a type of pheromone that would cause even straight men to lust after them and can you imagine Harry constantly having to deal with horny men trying to get in his pants only for them to find themselves being threaten by Harry's mates.

Also the pheromones can be controlled thanks to occlumency but the stronger the succubus is the harder they have it with Occlumency and even if they have barriers up the pheromones leak out causing men to drool over them

By the way I know you said you don't know if you can do anthro or beast but if Harry is with Werewolves and he is a creature on his own don't you think the wolves will still want him while he is human and they are wolves if you have trouble writing it you can read other werewolf/Harry fics or you can look at furry yaoi

I really do enjoy your suggestions *^.^* And I love the thought you put into them! Though I can't say much, I can tell you that we are on a similar wave length when it comes to awesome creatures! *^.^* (I've been researching for this story. You know I'm into it when I do that XD lol) ...Though the twins as a couple of kitsunes would be hilarious, and oh so appropriate XD lol...

I already know what Harry, Fred, George, Charlie, Bill, and Ginny are and I'm sticking to it for reasons I'll reveal later... it's going to be funny though XD lol Especially Ginny *^.^* lol

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[SilverMyst]

oh and if you want to do kitsunes why not make the twins into kitsune, lets face it it's not hard to believe. If you do that then the twins tails should be more like in myths

also anthro doesn't just apply to creatures who look mostly like animals but with human characteristics it also applies to humans with animal ears and tails, though I prefer the more animalistic anthro's

The term I've heard for animal ears and tail is Kemonomimi... Might just be a term used for the one site though. Before that, I don't recall ever hearing a term for it. I believe mild-anthro would be an appropriate term for it, and that I can handle, but full out anthro? I dunno. Not making any promises, but we'll see *^.^*

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

The votes are more to see what people think, for my amusement, and maybe help guide the story a little bit. You understand how it is when a story starts writing itself. You have a plot, minor guidelines, and all that good stuff. But your muse, and things which you find entertaining/worthy of being added, are what help to fill in the in-between.

Oh, and Harry's reaction to mates will vary, depending. I can tell you one thing though... I love humor *^.^* (As you've probably gathered from Snipsickle. Honestly, I don't know where he came from Oo; One minute I'm typing along, going to have some random goblin help Harry out, and the next *BAM* there's a smart@$$ goblin prankster helping(?) Harry XD lol) Go figure.

I find it really fun, actually! PWP is nice and all, and sometimes a plotless porn is all I want to read. But as far as writing goes? I don't think I can write without some type of plot. I've tried PWP, but there was always a plot of some sort in the back of my mind.

I can understand that and am happy about the fact you won't let the polls rule your decision. I can also understand what you mean about your muse and stuff since that is exactly how I am to

As for the humor I always love fics where Harry's mates (or at least some of his mates) would at first be arguing and fighting over Harry before he some how stops it (Like if Harry was with both Inuyasha and Kouga in a Inuyasha/HP crossover) and sometimes it might lead to the two said mates mating with each other.

Also I wasn't suggesting making this into a PWP like you I sometimes read them but I can't write them and I don't always want to read them

That would be interesting, but I'd be afraid he'd tear our widdle Harry in two T_T

Not if giants can change their size like in Harry's menagerie, which I felt made sense because how else could Hagrid's giant mum who stands over twenty feet in height ever be impregnated by a short man?

I also can see other creatures such as goblins have similair abilities considering it is hard to imagine a goblin and witch or wizard having sex and Flitwick is 1/8 goblin

though I always say beauty is in the eye of the beholder and since I like chubby bears who am I to judge though I think HP/Dobby is just wrong as well as HP/ old man Albus or anyone with either of the two but I just don't read them unlike some who seem to feel the urge to flame pairings just cause they don't like them

Though if I were you I would just have the giants change size and maybe the whole intelligence factor but keep them more like a half giant size and form and only do it for full blooded giants or close to full blooded and not like half giants like Hagrid and Madame Maxine

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

The term I've heard for animal ears and tail is Kemonomimi... Might just be a term used for the one site though. Before that, I don't recall ever hearing a term for it. I believe mild-anthro would be an appropriate term for it, and that I can handle, but full out anthro? I dunno. Not making any promises, but we'll see *^.^*

Well if you need help maybe you should check out some stories I have at least one story so far with a lemon for Harry and an anthro Greyback in werewolf form it is moonlit gardens on ff.net and it is a HP/Ouran High Host Club crossover

also are you aware that only members of this site can vote so guest like me can't which is because I believe I don't have an account for forums

[SilverMyst]

I can understand that and am happy about the fact you won't let the polls rule your decision. I can also understand what you mean about your muse and stuff since that is exactly how I am to

As for the humor I always love fics where Harry's mates (or at least some of his mates) would at first be arguing and fighting over Harry before he some how stops it (Like if Harry was with both Inuyasha and Kouga in a Inuyasha/HP crossover) and sometimes it might lead to the two said mates mating with each other.

Also I wasn't suggesting making this into a PWP like you I sometimes read them but I can't write them and I don't always want to read them

Polls decide for me? Yeah, that's going to work as well as me keeping to the original challenge. Oh wait, I couldn't. So... But at least I can feel out what other people think and perhaps allow it to influence some of my decisions. Doesn't hurt to try, right?

His mates will probably bicker, to a point, regardless of whether or not they screw around with each other as well XD lmao (More than likely they will) And I'm an Inuyasha fan as well, so that was the perfect example to give *^.^* Inuyasha and Kouga are awesome, though my fave will always be Sesshomaru :3 ~ Evil bastard actually had a good heart XD lol

Oh, I knew you weren't suggesting that XD lol Though there will be some hot scenes with little plot to appease my me... I want to ask people what kinks and/or toys they would like to see, too. Hopefully it'll help to get my muse's mind in the gutter for me XD lmao

Not if giants can change their size like in Harry's menagerie, which I felt made sense because how else could Hagrid's giant mum who stands over twenty feet in height ever be impregnated by a short man?

I also can see other creatures such as goblins have similair abilities considering it is hard to imagine a goblin and witch or wizard having sex and Flitwick is 1/8 goblin

though I always say beauty is in the eye of the beholder and since I like chubby bears who am I to judge though I think HP/Dobby is just wrong as well as HP/ old man Albus or anyone with either of the two but I just don't read them unlike some who seem to feel the urge to flame pairings just cause they don't like them

Though if I were you I would just have the giants change size and maybe the whole intelligence factor but keep them more like a half giant size and form and only do it for full blooded giants or close to full blooded and not like half giants like Hagrid and Madame Maxine

Hmmm... I'll have to keep that little "trick" in mind *^.^* Though I would have to add some intelligence X3

Er... Muggle "Little People" don't have that ability, and they seem to manage XD lol I love meeting them too! I know they probably don't like to be thought of as cute, but I can't help it and I just love them! How they do it, I have no idea. But I remember this one episode of "House" where the little lady gave a graphic, and rather humorous, explanation.

I believe love is love, regardless of age, gender, race, and all that. But there are some times when I just have to draw the line. Don't worry, Dobby might get a little girlfriend or something, but I wont write anything intimate. And Albus... yeah... *shudders* Okay, I'm officially traumatized methinks XD lol

Know any good shrinks? Oo; lol

[SilverMyst]

Well if you need help maybe you should check out some stories I have at least one story so far with a lemon for Harry and an anthro Greyback in werewolf form it is moonlit gardens on ff.net and it is a HP/Ouran High Host Club crossover

also are you aware that only members of this site can vote so guest like me can't which is because I believe I don't have an account for forums

Oh, another anime I can't help but enjoy! I'll be sure to check that out, hopefully sometime this week when I get time. Right now I'm working on the next chapter, so I'm not allowing myself much "playtime" except to chat here XD lol

I was informed earlier today, yes. But it is possible for guests to post in this thread so I don't think it'll be much of an issue. I prefer to hear why someone is voting for a certain thing anyway XD lol

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Polls decide for me? Yeah, that's going to work as well as me keeping to the original challenge. Oh wait, I couldn't. So... But at least I can feel out what other people think and perhaps allow it to influence some of my decisions. Doesn't hurt to try, right?

His mates will probably bicker, to a point, regardless of whether or not they screw around with each other as well XD lmao (More than likely they will) And I'm an Inuyasha fan as well, so that was the perfect example to give *^.^* Inuyasha and Kouga are awesome, though my fave will always be Sesshomaru :3 ~ Evil bastard actually had a good heart XD lol

Eh I am not so big on Sesshomaru but then again it could be because everywhere I look in crossovers with HP there he is or maybe I just prefer when Harry's doms show emotion then again I'm not that much into pretty boys so that could be it

When I do HP/Inuyasha Crossovers I make Sesshomaru Harry's grandfather and thus making Inuyasha Harry's great uncle adding the incest I love so much

Oh, I knew you weren't suggesting that XD lol Though there will be some hot scenes with little plot to appease my me... I want to ask people what kinks and/or toys they would like to see, too. Hopefully it'll help to get my muse's mind in the gutter for me XD lmao

first I would need to know who else was in the harem but for most of them and especially the twins I can't see anything but major BDSM but with out say Dominate/Submissive bit that I love to see with Kingsley

Fenrir would definitely have a whole D/s love even if only for sex and he would difinitly have a thing for outdoor sex and werewolf form sex which is one of the reasons I keep suggesting anthro or beast, that and I can't really see Remus taking Harry as his mate before the wolf does after all he would probably think it was wrong and try to fight it even more so then he did with Tonks, oh and I love the fic Sweet Puppy so I honestly can see Fenrir having a love for rape play

As for Hagrid well I can see Hagrid having an animal fetish and pet fetish, where Harry is the pet and maybe wearing some bunny ears or cat ears, I mean look at his love for animals and I do love animals but he brings it to a new high

Voldemort, well to be honest I want to see Voldemort have a fetish for being watched while having sex without him being a completely evil bastard

other kinks I think his mates might have are blood play because lets face it most of them love blood shed and cosplay is one of my favorite kinks I never see

My all time favorite kink though is Father/Son relationships I would love to hear Harry call one of his mates, espicially Remus or Sirius, Daddy

speaking of father/son pairings have you ever notice that there are a ton of Sirius/Harry's and Remus/Harry's where they fuck him in animal form but no James as a stag and Harry fics?

Hmmm... I'll have to keep that little "trick" in mind *^.^* Though I would have to add some intelligence X3

Er... Muggle "Little People" don't have that ability, and they seem to manage XD lol I love meeting them too! I know they probably don't like to be thought of as cute, but I can't help it and I just love them! How they do it, I have no idea. But I remember this one episode of "House" where the little lady gave a graphic, and rather humorous, explanation.

I believe love is love, regardless of age, gender, race, and all that. But there are some times when I just have to draw the line. Don't worry, Dobby might get a little girlfriend or something, but I wont write anything intimate. And Albus... yeah... *shudders* Okay, I'm officially traumatized methinks XD lol

Know any good shrinks? Oo; lol

Oh I know that and I understand that after all beauty is in the eye of the beholder but it wasn't so much the goblins shortness as it was their looks I was commenting on that

by the way you said each chapter gets a vote but all of my votes are still at 1

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

thanks for changing the poll also I really hope Hagrid will be with Harry, I know I said it a hundred times, my reason though is not just because I love gay bears but I am a Harry-centric meaning I don't really read any HP fanfics without the major pairing being Harry/male (I can't even picture sex with a female to be honest so I never read Het fanfics) and only where Harry is the bottom but I love when Harry is a strong sub because I can't see him weak in real life, not that I don't like them I just prefer it when Harry eventually becomes strong, after all just because you bottom in bed doesn't mean you're weak.

I also love it when a bigger man dominates the smaller man in bed and Harry's hieghts later in the books seemed a tad unrealistic to me since he was underfed his entire life and it only got worse when he returned to Dursley's after Hogwarts I feel that the type of damage he went through shouldn't be fixed so easily so to me a small Harry is an awesome Harry plus it is funny when short people can kick the butt of taller people or when the taller person is afraid of angering the shorter person and really such things are possible and very realistic.

Another reason I like bottom Harry is because though he is strong he has been through so much in his life that he probably just wants to trust someone to take care of him for a change.

So I think all of that is a factor into my Love of Harry/Slash pairings.

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

I really do enjoy your suggestions *^.^* And I love the thought you put into them! Though I can't say much, I can tell you that we are on a similar wave length when it comes to awesome creatures! *^.^* (I've been researching for this story. You know I'm into it when I do that XD lol) ...Though the twins as a couple of kitsunes would be hilarious, and oh so appropriate XD lol...

I already know what Harry, Fred, George, Charlie, Bill, and Ginny are and I'm sticking to it for reasons I'll reveal later... it's going to be funny though XD lol Especially Ginny *^.^* lol

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You know another creature I would like to see the twins being for a change, satyrs, there are no satyr fics and after reading a challenge and looking at Satyr yaoi I couldn't help but wish there were fics with satyrs in it and the twins would probably be good satyrs though for them if they aren't foxes I am guessing something involving fire or tricksters such as elves or fae or demons

[Guest SilverMyst]

You know another creature I would like to see the twins being for a change, satyrs, there are no satyr fics and after reading a challenge and looking at Satyr yaoi I couldn't help but wish there were fics with satyrs in it and the twins would probably be good satyrs though for them if they aren't foxes I am guessing something involving fire or tricksters such as elves or fae or demons

Those would be super fun! *^.^* But, sadly, that isn't it... but if you keep going, I'm going to have another plot bunny biting my arse and making me want to do a Kitsune!Harry Satyr!Twins fic XD lol ...

Mayyybeeee lol

[Guest SilverMyst]

thanks for changing the poll also I really hope Hagrid will be with Harry, I know I said it a hundred times, my reason though is not just because I love gay bears but I am a Harry-centric meaning I don't really read any HP fanfics without the major pairing being Harry/male (I can't even picture sex with a female to be honest so I never read Het fanfics) and only where Harry is the bottom but I love when Harry is a strong sub because I can't see him weak in real life, not that I don't like them I just prefer it when Harry eventually becomes strong, after all just because you bottom in bed doesn't mean you're weak.

I also love it when a bigger man dominates the smaller man in bed and Harry's hieghts later in the books seemed a tad unrealistic to me since he was underfed his entire life and it only got worse when he returned to Dursley's after Hogwarts I feel that the type of damage he went through shouldn't be fixed so easily so to me a small Harry is an awesome Harry plus it is funny when short people can kick the butt of taller people or when the taller person is afraid of angering the shorter person and really such things are possible and very realistic.

Another reason I like bottom Harry is because though he is strong he has been through so much in his life that he probably just wants to trust someone to take care of him for a change.

So I think all of that is a factor into my Love of Harry/Slash pairings.

Oh, so that's why I can't vote. Need to log in... er, nah. I'm going to be lazy for a little while XD lol It's just the two of us at the moment anyway, right? *^.^*

Bigger male with a pushy sub is always hot! And in my mind Harry will always be strong. Like you said, I believe the lack of love throughout his life would drive him to want someone he doesn't HAVE to be strong for (even though he will be anyway XD lol) and it will also be why he will be able to accept multiple mates more gracefully. Someone who has not been deprived of love and affection would probably freak out (more than Harry will, at least) at the prospect of having multiple mates.

He's still going to have some objections, of course, which is going to be hilarious! XD lol And the twins are just going to make it even more fun! XD lol;

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Oh, so that's why I can't vote. Need to log in... er, nah. I'm going to be lazy for a little while XD lol It's just the two of us at the moment anyway, right? *^.^*

Bigger male with a pushy sub is always hot! And in my mind Harry will always be strong. Like you said, I believe the lack of love throughout his life would drive him to want someone he doesn't HAVE to be strong for (even though he will be anyway XD lol) and it will also be why he will be able to accept multiple mates more gracefully. Someone who has not been deprived of love and affection would probably freak out (more than Harry will, at least) at the prospect of having multiple mates.

He's still going to have some objections, of course, which is going to be hilarious! XD lol And the twins are just going to make it even more fun! XD lol;

Wouldn't Snape and Voldemort also technically be a part of those who were deprived of affection and possibly Fenrir

Oh wait you said who was NOT deprived of love and affection well in that case wouldn't Draco and Lucius count into that factor along with a few of them?

Then again since those are older men and creatures or pure bloods I am sure they have some knowledge of creature bonds to help them accept it, especially when they have another mate with Harry (you know that is apart of the harem) or are at the least more accepting

By the way will the twins possibly try and molest others in Harry's harem like Draco or at least pretend flirt with him as a joke which seems in character to me, especially if they are trying to make Harry jealous

Also rivalries in Harry's harem

Tom/Hagrid- lets face it Hagrid is still angry about the whole Aragog incident (which after he was cleared I don't understand why his wand wasn't replaces) and what if Tom had an instant dislike for Hagrid because Subconsciously they had always known that they were both mates to the same person and yet not each others mates thus causing Tom to make Hagrid the person of blame for the whole chamber incident

the reason I thought of this is because I have been planning on a time travel fic like this where Harry and maybe a few others get sent back into time before Riddle opens the Chamber and Harry comes into a creature inheritance and gets close to Hagrid and Tom, who are both two of his mates, but Tom being possessive gets angry at Harry for spending time with Hagrid and chooses to use Hagrid as his scapegoat in order to have Harry all to himself

Firenze and Fenrir: Oh come on their personalities perfectly clash against each other with Fenrir being blood thirsty, egotistical, sadistic, werewolf and Firenze being a calm headed, compassionate, contemplative, thinker of a centaur and considering centaurs are half horse they probably do get hunted by werewolves if it weren't for their abilities to see the stars they also might have a sort of sibling rivalry since both probably look to the moon as a mother

that is all I can think of for now

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Oh I thought of some other things I should mention

Voldemort/Fenrir conflict:

those two are so possessive with their mate that I don't either will like the fact he is with both of them and I prefer Fenrir as an ally of the Dark Lord and not a DE so I am sure their possessiveness will cause them to come to blows with each other

Remus:

I really don't think Remus should have any one to fight with since he has enough problems with accepting the fact he is both Fenrir, the man who turned him and probably did more, and Harry, who is his best friends son and much younger then him and thinks of Harry as his cub, mate but he should difinitly have some issues with Fenrir, Voldemort and any DE's with Harry the others I think he is more accepting about and he won't get into to much conflict with LV since LV makes Harry happy but is uncomfortable about the fact due to what LV did to James and Lily

Also Fenrir should be pervy towards Remus and Harry as well as demanding which is what will set Remus into fighting with Fenrir

Twins:

They really shouldn't have any conflicts but still anger Harry's other mates due to pranks and they should get aroused by watching Harry having sex with the other mates

anyways hopes this helps

[Wynter Ravenheart]

Some of those pairings... no offence but, yuck!

Please count -1 to:

Lucius,

Severus

Hagrid

Fenrir

Remus

Firenze

Out of all those pairings the only one who really makes my jaw clench is Harry/Remus I mean... it makes no sense whatsoever! The block abandoned Harry when Albus left him with Petunia, didn't bother to get in contact until he was hired as a DADA Professor 12 years later and even then he only bothered to say 'hey, I was a friend of your parents!' at the very end of the year! Not to mention he virtually disappears during Harry's 4th year, where he actually needed someone there. Oh yeah.. great mate material that one! *glares*

Though I do, heartily, approve of Harry/Theodore! He's so overlooked you can do pretty much anything with the boy!

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Some of those pairings... no offence but, yuck!

Please count -1 to:

Lucius,

Severus

Hagrid

Fenrir

Remus

Firenze

Out of all those pairings the only one who really makes my jaw clench is Harry/Remus I mean... it makes no sense whatsoever! The block abandoned Harry when Albus left him with Petunia, didn't bother to get in contact until he was hired as a DADA Professor 12 years later and even then he only bothered to say 'hey, I was a friend of your parents!' at the very end of the year! Not to mention he virtually disappears during Harry's 4th year, where he actually needed someone there. Oh yeah.. great mate material that one! *glares*

Though I do, heartily, approve of Harry/Theodore! He's so overlooked you can do pretty much anything with the boy!

First off have you ever really giving some of those pairings a chance? because you may be surprised by some fics out there

Secondly as for Remus this is a fanfic and so things could be twisted to suite that issue such as Remus was afraid of harming Harry, especially if he knew Harry was his mate and didn't want his wolf to take over and do horrible things to him such as raping him in what not.

Remus probably didn't know where Harry was and then there is the fact Dumbledore is a master of Legillimency and could implant certain thoughts and make feelings stronger to cause this

Also it wasn't at the end he told Harry about his parents but somewhere in the middle and if he was trying to avoid Harry because of the werewolf incident or was afraid to tell Harry because of him not being there for Harry then it would make sense

Remus also trusted Dumbledore and being a werewolf he couldn't raise or even be near a child I think there were werewolf loves stating that fact.

I am sorry if this sounds rude I am just very defensiveness of my suggestions

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

oh and even if there weren't laws the Ministry was filled with bigots and can you really imagine a idiotic tool like Fudge allow a werewolf near the boy who lived Remus probably was only allowed at the school because of Dumbledore being there to watch over Remus

[Guest Dark Serpent Cat]

Hey Silvermist when are you gonna update your story?

I hope it is soon *puppy dog eyes and pout* pwease with sugar and lemon drops on top (I can't believe they don't have a emot con for puppy dog eyes)

if you don't I think I'll die

By the way when you have decided on the pairings you might want to go back and put them on the first chapter because I can honestly say from experience that it is annoying to read a good story or a story with promise just to learn that it is a pairing you hate

[Wynter Ravenheart]

First off have you ever really giving some of those pairings a chance? because you may be surprised by some fics out there

My turn to be rude I think... while I have read Malfoy and Snape with Harry, the thought of the others with Harry makes me nauseous, so no, I'm not giving it a chance and I don't plan to. That's all I have to say on that.

On the subject of Remus...

Well, this is fanfiction as you've pointed out, and it seems to be following cannon up to Harry's 5th year, so it's got to follow cannon up until 5th year (unless SilverMist gives us a damned good explanation for the deviation ) and up until the very end Remus was the most cowardly character in the entire series, imho. And I'm including Peter and Draco (whom I positively detest.)

Also, with this bit:

Remus probably didn't know where Harry was

You're just calling him stupid, as much as I hated it, Petunia was, at the very end, the only logical choice family-wise... James' parents were already dead, so was Lily's, Sirius was in Azkaban, who was left to take care of Harry? The Ministry was a mess and there was a very real chance that Harry, if he was put up for adoption, would end in a DE family and thus, dead. The trials and excuses (in the case of Malfoy & others) weren't over and done with overnight, so he was also in danger in a magical region (such as The Burrow, for example). The only place that could be safe, where they could put up protection wards and make them work, was with Petunia. Remus is not lacking a functioning brain, so one can reason that he did know if not where, with whom Harry was.

Could Dumbledore put something in Remus' brain to make him forget or just not give a damn? Sure, but unlikely. As a 15 month-old baby, Harry needed protection, blood-wards + a protective werewolf is a damned good protection if you ask me. Much better than a squib! Also, even with the werewolf-laws, there's very, very little that can nullify a will, while I doubt James and Lily would put the safety of their son to chance by naming Remus a guardian, they could have made him a caretaker, as in living in the area and keeping an eye on the boy. But that's just a theory mind.

Also, just so we're clear: Fudge stepped up as Minister for Magic in 1990, he had no say whatsoever in Harry's life before that.