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Under Joan's Bed Thank you! I always had some ideas for more parts, I just never got around to them. If you can’t be buddies with the monster under your bed who can you be buddies with? Thanks again in case you ever stop back by and see this belated review reply!
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Rękaw tatuażu toż indywidualny spośród najbardziej idealnych także żmudnych projektów, jakie można zrobić na ciele. W przeciwieństwie do pojedynczego wzoru, rękaw ma ważną grupa ramienia lub wszą rękę, ponieważ potrzebuje istnieć ustalony jako krótka całość. Wówczas nie jest szereg losowych grafik, ale przemyślana historia, która płynnie łączy wszelkie czynniki w pojedynczy obraz. Doskonałym a najważniejszym krokiem jest dobór tematu przewodniego. Chyba to żyć wygląd realistyczny, japoński, geometryczny, mroczny, oldschoolowy albo wcale autorska koncepcja. Istotne jest, aby materiał miał stanowienie dla pani tatuowanej, bo rękaw to preparat, co jest na całe mieszkanie. Cel winien funkcjonowań na tyle duży, żeby ważna go stanowiło rozwinąć na całkowitej długości ramienia bez poczucia chaosu. Drugim stopniem jest uwaga z tatuażystą. To odpowiednio artysta pomaga przełożyć projekt na układ przystosowany do anatomii ręki. Ramię, łokieć i przedramię mają rozmaite układy i znaki, dlatego wzory muszą być rozłożone w taki system, aby tak robiły zarówno w spoczynku, jak zaś w ruchu. Doświadczony tatuator wie, gdzie umieścić charakterystyczne składniki, a gdzie zastosować tło lub dokonania, aby sumę była idealna. Projekt rękawa z wykorzystaniem [url=https://tattoo-arena.blogspot.com/2025/10/projektowanie-rekawa-tatuazu-od-do-z.html]akcesoria do tatuażu[/url] zawsze powinien uwzględniać kompozycję. Kluczowe czynniki zazwyczaj celują w najbardziej wyraziste miejsca, takie jak bark czy zewnętrzna stronę przedramienia, i drobniejsze tematy oraz segmenty wypełniają przestrzenie między nimi. Tło, cienie i wejścia kolorystyczne lub czarno-szare sprawiają, że rękaw patrzy jako pewna całość, a nie kilka oddzielnych tatuaży. Rękaw pisze się etapami, zwykle podczas wielu sesji. Skóra wymaga czasu na naprawę, oraz jeden cel jest tworzony w trakcie pracy. To normalne, iż w wartość postępu artysta wprowadza drobne korekty, by dokładnie przystosować przykłady do teraz zrobionych fragmentów. Taki proces pozwala pozwalać bardzo lepszy rezultat niż działanie wszystkiego na cios bez celu. Nie silna zapominać o pielęgnacji. Między debatami natomiast po wyjściu całego rękawa skóra musi być właściwie nawilżana oraz podtrzymywana przed światłem oraz uszkodzeniami. To tak z opiek w wysokiej mierze zależy, jak długo tatuaż zachowa wyrazistość, kontrast i moc detali. Projektowanie rękawa to połączenie wizji osoby tatuowanej także wydarzenia tatuażysty. Gdy oba te fragmenty zgoda ze sobą współpracują, efektem jest uznana, spójna całość, jaka nie tylko zdobi ciało, a również prowadzi osobistą historię napisane na skórze.
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Holodeck Bitch Thank you for this review! Apologies I did not see/respond at the time, but if you ever happen over this way I appreciate your thoughts. There was the odd episode, I confess, where as a much younger JD I imagined the entire crew naked. It was easier for some, than others, as we got to see Chakotay’s ass in that one episode, and, of course, the Doctor surely has the body of a greek god sculpted there by Doctor Zimmerman. I’m sure while the story there had some sexual feelings of a four legged variety, Janeway was very much a bipedal fancier type in canon. If you ignore that one episode where she and Paris got turned into lizards and had a bunch of baby lizards. Still, it wasn’t as bad as Spock’s Brain am I right, Kiz?
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Edit – I put here because of the possible scammer element, but possibly it should be in the spammer subforum, apologies! Got this review, hadn’t spotted it until now. Unless I did and said something previously. My mind hasn’t been great. Saw it tonight, anyway – https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081649 User here – https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1297031347 so, here’s the thing. There’s been bots and users etc for years over on fanfiction.net (and I presume elsewhere) that post stuff similar to this, and those ones are all scammers. Taking advantage of gullible children or vulnerable adults mostly. As this is a registered user of the site I hesitate to cast such an accusation here but, well, let’s look at the facts It’s a 1000 word POS fic I crapped out just to have one on the Lord of the Rings subdomain and because I was afraid if I actually wrote the Galadriel idea I had, she’d get me somehow. You do not want her as an enemy. I’m not sure I’d even be comfortable having her as a friend. Anyway. So putting aside the story’s short length and literally shit quality, we have the review. Positive but utterly generic, and wanting contact off site. Then, I try google for other reviews by this user and, well, https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081720 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081623 https://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600056826 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600106964 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081666 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600107089 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081664 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081671 I’m not convinced this user’s intentions are entirely genuine if I’m honest. It feels like a buncha almost spam like reviews, all generic, all wanting off site discussion, no money mentioned but come on… Happy to be proven wrong, like.
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Hello, sorry I missed this before. I assume you’re long gone but in case you are not anyone else is wondering, I’ve never done commissions (not even for original work!) and while I have done requests I am busy with one at moment so not open for more. Sorry! I hope you got your idea written though.
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Another missed review from when I wasn’t doing shit about shit. Bart the Ripper II: Mothersnuffer From ANON - I came on January 27, 2022 Thank you for the comment! I am glad you enjoyed the story. I think that was one of the ones that made the old topless robot fanfic reviewer drink. With good cause!
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Progress report on this challenge – 3 chapters basically bar final proofing/editing completed, covering the first part of the structure near the top of this page. I am now working on thew next chapter, which will hopefully be a chunk of the part 2 structure above. Definitely going to be more than 4 parts! However, main reason I am posting is I’ve slowly started going back through my profile and deleting out various spam reviews (lot of super dodgy links) when I saw one I had not noticed/responded to before! Pleasurable Evils review by ANON - Kayla on May 21, 2022 I realise at this stage the odds of you seeing this reply are slim to none, but I still want to say thank you for this review! I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I hope you haven’t had to read anything that’s quite such a … ride since. Thank you again!
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The concluding Part is now loaded – link https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110651&chapter=2 Chapter specific content codes: Complete, Humanoid, M/F, TF. Oral sex
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The new chapter of “Time’s Error” has made its debut! Chapter 2: Crew Who?
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I really appreciate the clarification there! I’ve seen worse too, but I’m happy with a B. B minus maybe. I can say also you’ll probably want to avoid the Buffy fic I’m working on since there’s a whole lot of frantic sloppy drool-splashing face fucking with extra heavy loads planned for it, on the plus side I don’t usually write sound effects so only 2 out of 3 would be really bad… Also, instead of choking frog I picture a Goblin, Glurk, who just gives the best BJs. “Tavenkeep! Why’s this place called The Goblin’s Head?” “Go see Glurk in the back room, traveller, and take a gold piece.”
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I liked it in particular because it made it feel like a carnivorous plant or something similar, where once a prey animal is drawn in by the “lure”, it still takes a while for the trap to fully close, like the slow-moving tentacles of a sundew. The sudden drop would have worked too (more of a Venus flytrap vibe there), but I kind of like it better this way. This is a fair question, and it deserves the full answer I couldn’t condense enough for the review. So, this was a solid B, I would say. It was pretty good, but I think it could have been hotter. I wanted to lean especially into the positive, however, because I’ve read enough blowjobs in erotic fiction to know that most people write them in ways I don’t like at all. The standard erotic fic blowjob tends to go a certain way. 1. The motion is kind of frantic, like the woman is trying to win a prize for time (that would have been amusingly appropriate here, but the point stands). I tend to find sexual content more arousing when it starts out more relaxed and then kind of accelerates toward the climax. 2. There’s a sound effect that gets made, and it’s nearly always the exact same sound effect too: “Glurk! Glurk! Glurk!” Suffice it to say I am not aroused by the sound of a choking frog. 3. There’s always an emphasis on the amount of drool/spit coming off the blowjob, and it usually reaches the point where I honestly find it gross rather than hot. I know I’ve read seriously arousing blowjobs in erotic fics before, but they’re shockingly few and far between in my experience. I agree that there is room for you to improve, but I gave a positive mention there because I’ve seen way worse.
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Here's the latest: –Chapter 5 of “Precocious" went off to beta a couple of days ago. It's the longest chapter of that story yet, at 7,500 words, so I'm not sure when it will be back. –Since then, I've been working on chapter 2 of "Time’s Error.” I have made good progress and expect to post the chapter later this week. –Once that's done, I will shift my focus—to the extent that I have focus—to the final chapter of “RB-X-17." In other news, I’m about halfway through reading InBrightestDay’s Winter Holiday story “Meaningful Gifts.” Really nice so far. JayDee’s new story is now in my queue, as well.
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yuuya26 started following Stolen and Drugged and Highschool of the Dead: The cult of Shido
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Of all the HOTD stories i read until now, i never found one where Shido gets all the girls. So lets say that Takashi and Kouta are killed early in the game (either at school or after that) and Shido using a drug he found in his father safe (liquid or spray your choise) was able to slowly make all the girls lust for him. If Takashi and Kouta are killed before they leave the school then the girls will have no choise but to stay with shido since not all of them can fight and Shido can start from there. I want Shido to have all the hot women for him and the males of his group even the ones who are married, he can allways kill the husbands.
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This challenge is inspired from a story i read on a fanfiction and a doujinshi. While the war was going on Harry gets a girlfriend from another house and they decide to keep it a secret so Voldemort doesn't target her. After the war is over, they told the news to her family but her father who only wants to use her to elevate his house doesn't accept that and tells her that he will choose a husband for her who has more political power. Harry tries to find a way to help her but cant, her father chose a fat older man from outside England, not realising that he is also a major pervert with many kinks. After they marry he starts using drugs and other methods to turn her into his ideal woman. If you guys have any questions send me a msg.
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Game of Thrones and Naruto crossover have many stories, but not even one with Kushina so my challenge is this: During the conversation that Minato and Kushina had while restraining the kyuubi about sealing the fox into Naruto, Kushina refused to seal the fox into her son and said that she will take the fox inside her and then use a jutsu of her clan that she read in one of her family’s scrolls to go to another dimension so the fox cannot harm Konoha again, The jutsu worked and threw Kushina in the Game of Thrones universe where Walder Frey found her. The stress of the extraction and then the resealing of the Kyuubi, the death of her husband and the realization that she will never see her son, weakened her both physically and mentally and made her unable to use chakra for sometime, so when Walder found her he became captivated by her beauty and sexy body and he decided that he had to have her. When they arrived in the Frey household the doctors told him that she was only exhausted so Walder decided to take advantage of her exhaustion and weaken her by using drugs to slowly break her mind and rebuild it to his image. In the following days Kushina tried to withstand the drugs but with her mental exhaustion her mind broke and she swore herself to Walder.
