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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from JayDee in How Did You Find Fanfiction?   
    It’s been ages, but I believe that the first time I came across fanfictions was all the way back to the Geocities days. Back then fansites were a big thing, and they sprang around like we’ve got wiki pages these days. And while most of them offered some basic information of certain series, along with the occasional image, there were a few that had fan made stories set in the same fandom.
    I must admit that this caught my attention, and a quick search later led me to some of the biggest fanfiction archives at the time. Some of them are still around today, but the majority of the smaller ones are all but abandoned.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from pittwitch in How Did You Find Fanfiction?   
    It’s been ages, but I believe that the first time I came across fanfictions was all the way back to the Geocities days. Back then fansites were a big thing, and they sprang around like we’ve got wiki pages these days. And while most of them offered some basic information of certain series, along with the occasional image, there were a few that had fan made stories set in the same fandom.
    I must admit that this caught my attention, and a quick search later led me to some of the biggest fanfiction archives at the time. Some of them are still around today, but the majority of the smaller ones are all but abandoned.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from BronxWench in How Did You Find Fanfiction?   
    It’s been ages, but I believe that the first time I came across fanfictions was all the way back to the Geocities days. Back then fansites were a big thing, and they sprang around like we’ve got wiki pages these days. And while most of them offered some basic information of certain series, along with the occasional image, there were a few that had fan made stories set in the same fandom.
    I must admit that this caught my attention, and a quick search later led me to some of the biggest fanfiction archives at the time. Some of them are still around today, but the majority of the smaller ones are all but abandoned.
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    h3nta1fun reacted to Melrick in Can I upload pornographic pictures to the forum?   
    Yes and no.  Pictures can only be uploaded to the Art Room forum – which is member’s only access – and then only of the drawn or digital variety; i.e., no photographs of real people.  And no photo manipulations of any kind.  Any pictures uploaded to any other forums will be deleted.  Also, no pornographic pictures beyond mild nudity will be allowed to be used in your Signature, Cover Photo or Profile Picture.
    So, why have we decided to do this?  Well, firstly, this site always has been and always will be primarily about written smut, not smutty pictures.  But perhaps the main reason is that different countries have different laws about what’s illegal visually and what isn’t, and we want to make it as difficult as possible for people to accidentally stumble on pictures that would be considered illegal in their country.
    Outside of the Art Room forum, you can provide a link to a picture hosted elsewhere, as long as there’s a clear description of what the picture is of, and do not use any link that means the picture is downloaded to their computer as soon as someone clicks on the link; it has to be a picture that is viewable without needing to be downloaded first.  This is to ensure no one tries to force a virus or anything else unsavoury onto an unsuspecting person.  Any link not meeting these requirements will be removed and the member warned.
    If you’re unsure whether or not a picture you have uploaded to your profile or signature is acceptable then please don’t hesitate to ask a moderator.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    You have no idea. Although, technically speaking nothing too much will happen during the workout session itself. It’s just that the view of Lind in tight exercise gear will definitely have an effect on Keiichi, and this will set up a series of events that will prove more than taxing for Keiichi. 
    Of course, that will eventually involve Lind and Keiichi (in the same chapter too, just a bit after the workout part), but for a different reason And to drop a hint, one of the goddesses will get a taste of what happens when someone ( *cough* Lind *cough*) frustrates Keiichi by inadvertently teasing him for far too long
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    h3nta1fun reacted to warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Why do I get the feeling Lind's starting workout tomorrow will be very taxing for Keiichi?
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Hm…   cannot see the image, but here’s what I can find as references for Skuld’s adult form:
    Edit: Actually, I found out where the image was from, but danbooru doesn’t allow direct linking, so it cannot be posted here like that. Still, that’s exactly the version of Skuld I had in mind for this story. Here are some screenshots from the episode where Skuld was an adult (the same episode where the gif image originated from):
     


    Those are both considered as canon, since they’re from the anime itself. So, that’s what Skuld should look like in this story.
    The only difference is, that here, she’s a real adult, and not just temporarily aged up (as it happened in the anime).
     
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    h3nta1fun reacted to warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    I've always wondered, does Skuld look like this here?:

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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Chapter 7 is out

    Most of the chapter focuses on Urd and Skuld, but I hope that's a nice compensation for the less steamy chapter 6. I also spent some time addressing some issues that might arise in such a polyamorous setting, at least to the point where it doesn't ruin the story. Of course I could've simply ignored all that, but this seemed like a touch of realism that makes the characters more believable.

    For next chapter... Peorth and Bell. 
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from DemonGoddess in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    I’ve suspected as much, but I wasn’t sure. Glad to hear that it was merely spam! Thank you very much for your hard work!
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Oops, I meant independent ^^;
    I haven’t made a decision about Blue Lance, as it might depend on whether or not I’ll go with a certain idea or not. However, Hild’s devil will show up later on in this story. For now I’ll focus on having Keiichi meet some of the other angels, with World of Elegance being a plot point for the chapter after the next one (the next chapter will focus more on the main goddesses and Keiichi).
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Devils are more independent compared to angels, so there should be some subtle differences between them and their hosts. Of course, they shouldn’t bee too different, as they’re dependent on them and the influence their hosts have over them isn’t easy to ignore.
    The devils aren’t going to be much of a focus right now, although there is one angel (Urd’s) who has some clear influences of her mistress’ dual nature and in a way that makes her somewhat similar to a half devil too. As such, World of Elegance will display some demonic traits like the devils, although she’s technically an angel. And she’s definitely going to make an appearance.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Chapter 6 is up! 
    It took me a while to get this finished, since I did little progress during the holidays, but Mara is not officially added in the story! Of course, keep in mind that this is her intro, so not much happens with her at the moment, although there should be enough to give you an idea of things to come.
    And... Lind also arrived on Earth, which only adds more options for the next chapter.
    Also, for those wondering, both Mara's intro scene and Aoshima's interaction with Belldandy were heavily inspired by the manga, where Mara first showed up in Keiichi's dreams and Aoshima tried to get Belldandy to a love hotel. The scenes in this story though were significantly altered though, just to avoid repeating the same content from the actual series, as well as to better fit the mood of this story.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    I suppose that World of Elegance (Urd’s angel) might have a bit of thing for femdom than Gorgeous Rose. Of course, with both of them going after Keiichi, they might end up cooperating at some point
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    I suppose that Hild is the obvious choice, but with Mara… things will be a little bit complicated. That’s all I can say for now
    For Hild and Hagall, I guess this is what they look like:
    Hild: http://fav.me/d1gkfp0
    Hagall: http://fav.me/d9a0o8g
    For the two angels, I’ll only say that it’s definitely Gorgeous Rose along with another one of them. The two Mints will show up at a future chapter.
    The goddesses:
    Belldandy: http://fav.me/d21w0pj
    Urd: http://fav.me/d20zqrf
    Skuld:http://fav.me/d225jzj
    Peorth:http://fav.me/d21f1x0
    Lind: http://fav.me/d21pc8k
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    The angels should be as good as their hosts are. After all, they share memories and feelings, so each of them should behave in a somewhat similar way to her goddess.
    It's indeed true that they can change hosts, but the process can put a lot of strain on Keiichi's body. Still, something of that nature might actually happen, although not because the goddesses gave their angels to Keiichi.
    Now, for Hild's avatar… The truth is that I'm not comfortable with minor characters (even if it's only their appearance and not their actual age) in a story like this. However you might indeed see Hild (in her full body) in that outfit, and her habit of kissing others out of the blue will remain.
    As far as that outfit is concerned, there are two versions actually. One is what she actually wore in that race and the other is part of a cover from the manga. Here’s the images:
    In story:

     
    And he’s the other one:

     
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    h3nta1fun reacted to warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Wow. It really looks like a lot of women - goddeses, demonesses, angels, and devils – will be having fun with Keiichi in various ways. And no doubt the majority of them, with maybe the exception of Belldandy(?), would have more experience with sex than him?
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    That’s indeed true. Well, Belldandy has some experience, although Keiichi’s going to be her first male partner (she only had Lind so far, so all her experience is with goddesses). Also, Skuld isn’t too experienced either, since she just got a boyfriend and at this point, Keiichi might actually have more experience than her.
    It is also the reason why I’m not going to directly involve all characters with Keiichi, to keep the story a bit more plausible. For example, Skuld already has a boyfriend, yet she’s there to spend some time with her sisters, and Lind is mainly involved with Belldandy (who in turn will become involved with Keiichi). And both Hild and Ansuz have a lover of their own, but since their daughters are involved with Keiichi, there might be a few moments with him too, eventually.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Hell does indeed have something close to that. They’re called devils or familiars (depending on the translation), but their appearance varies. In the series, there are a few imp like creatures called familiars, but the ones who truly match the angels are far more similar in appearance. Unfortunately, there’s only one example when Hild tried to gave Belldandy one (in the Angel Eater arc).


     
    Keep in mind that the last image is fanart, and in reality, the devil depicted here isn’t colored in the same fashion as seen in the anime (her skin is the same complexion as Belldandy’s and her hair are dark blue).
     
    For Hild, there’s no confirmation in the series that she’s got a devil, let alone any images of her. Of course, if I wish to do so, I can come up with something that could be something in between the devil depicted above (her name is Blue Lance btw, but she was actually named a bit later in the manga) and Urd’s angel, World of Elegance.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    The angels’ bodies are mostly similar to those of their goddesses, although each one of them have different hairstyles and a few other features (like the tattoos on World of Elegance for example).
    Here’s a list of them:
    Holy Bell (Belldandy’s angel)

     
    World Of Elegance (Urd’s angel):

     
    Gorgeous Rose (Peorth’s angel):

     
    Noble Scarlet (Skuld’s angel, although keep in mind that in my story she’s aged up, just like Skuld is)

     
    And finally, Spear Mint and Coll Mint (Lind’s twin angels)

     
    Keep in mind that all those are colored versions of the official artwork from the manga, so they are indeed nice looking and not just a hentai/ecchi version of them
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    h3nta1fun reacted to warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    I forget, how big are the angels in comparison to humans or goddesses?
    Also considering in the manga Hild showed some interest in Keiichi, will that also be shown here? Her fucking him I mean. I read her fucking those clones but what about the original himself? While Urd was quite adamant about not wanting her touching Keiichi, I get the feeling Hild won’t let something like that stop her!
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    h3nta1fun reacted to warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Been reading and really enjoying this. Tell me, would any of the goddess' angels be getting involved in the fun as well? I noticed in the first chapter about how seeing Gorgeous Rose was also making Keiichi hard in addition to Peorth.
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    The angels should be about the same size as their hosts, actually. Also, while they don't generally unfold their legs, they do posses legs (as seen in the movie), so that also means they're capable of sexual activities.
    Now for Hild, I see no reason for her not to be able to eventually sleep with Keiichi. Urd's main concern is a situation where Hild's going to seduce her boyfriend, but as long as she won't be added as a girlfriend, Urd might eventually allow it. Or… it might happen afterwards, since Hild isn't one to take no for an answer indeed  (although she won't try to antagonize Urd too much).
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Hello everyone!
    This topic is dedicated for answering reviews (as I cannot post replies directly there), as well as any other feedback someone wishes to give for my story.
    The Vain Rose's garden is an Ah!/Oh! My goddess fanfiction that's based on an alternate universe where Peorth grants Keiichi's wish instead of Belldandy. From that point on, it follows the lives of both that couple, as well as the other goddesses and their dealings with their mortal friend. Also, while it does adhere to the same slice of life format that Ah!/Oh! My goddess uses (even with a much more harem like setting), there's a lot more sensual content and interesting situation for the readers to enjoy.
    The story can be found here: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600055428
    Additionally, you can also find me in hentai-foundry,com and archiveofourown.org under the same username, and the same can be said about my story (same title there too).

    Criticism is always welcome!
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    h3nta1fun got a reaction from warellis in [Oh my goddess] The Vain Rose's garden Review replies & Discussion thread   
    Eventually? You bet! Although it might end up in fouresomes…. given how many might be involved into those scenes (Keiichi, a goddess or two, plus their angels… kind of adds up a lot of characters).
    Now that won’t happen right away on the next chapter, since I’ve got something a bit special for two of the angels (I’d rather not to spoil what it is though), however, it’ll definitely spark Keiichi’s interest in angels (and not just in a sexual fashion, he’ll try to learn more about them). Also, since this is an AU version of the story, both the situation with Urd’s angel as well as Lind’s twins is sort of unresolved as of yet. So, those situations will have to be eventually addressed too.
    In the long run (maybe the chapter after the next one), you can definitely expect the angels to actively join in the fun.
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