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That’s the part that had me on my recent AO³ one. They made a more specific comment, like they did read (or more likely skim) the chapter. Thus, if I could redact the scam/contact info out of the comment, I would’ve preferred keeping the first bit.

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As a follow on, yes, I did manage to finally write past that 105k/107k (depends on using FFN vs the libreoffice’s word counter) old chapter on the rewrite… became like 126 chapters or something like that. Now tackling that 91k old chapter and wondering how long that’ll end up For Repair Guy, I did experiment, overall successfully with deliberately keeping them short (around 2k) … though it’s rewrite has stalled.

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