SirGeneralSir

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  1. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    So in a original story I am working on, I have a tavern girl/server in a medieval/fantasy setting (not MC) use magic to hold a drunk against the wall who was trying to force her to follow him home. I need him to drop something, there really isnt anything special about the one time character, its more about setting the scene and giving the impression that this girl/woman is NOT a helpless damsel in distress, she will murder you with magic fire. I was thinking that something like a Wine Skin, I already have a sword from a nobleman, a picaxe and megical torches from a miner and the helmet from a thug (thug is killed by tavern owner, all others survived.) any thoughts of what a random drunk could drop that could be used as a trophy/warning to others they can look at the girls all they like but you will die if you try to touch. Drunk could even be a trader if that helps to increase the number of possible items dropped.
  2. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    I think I figured it out, A drunk Bard and he left his Lute, still have to make the scene more funny and the like but I think thats the better option.
  3. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    So I like tormenting characters sometimes, I have a male and female character that are good close friends but that line was never crossed. They are at a party, lots of drinking, singing etc etc etc. The two of them wake up in bed together, the girl on top of him and he is still inside her, clearly they went full at it and everything under the sun. Neither one knows how the hell it end up this way, all they both remember was eating and drinking, having a good time then wake up. I need a reaction from both characters, it's like waking up with your step sibling almost in terms of how long you've/they have known each other. I know that surprise and shock would be there but I need more to go off on, my thoughts are that this would be something that eventually turns into a romance but its still just an idea at this time.
  4. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    My thinking is that the two have been together for a long time fighting and adventuring etc. the consent thing, neither knows how they got there and she is the one on top of him, who did what to who unless he is just guilty because hes a guy.
  5. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    Yean so far my thinking is that MC will do the panic, deer in headlights thing because he will fear that not only will she be mad at him and beat him, but that now their friendship will be ruined and things will never be the same etc etc. She will be more annoyed that she missed out on it memory wise but ultimately think nothing of it as she is still sitting on his dick while taking her sweet time to get off him. Her thinking being more of “its already in, nothing will change that now, feels nice actually.”
  6. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    for the MC, if he walked in on a girl/woman changing or anything of that nature, he is the type that would turn around on his heel while his face turned bright red, and pretend to not have seen anything at all, it never happened, nope its all good. Even if, said woman had no issue with him seeing her naked or wanted him to see her naked, hes not the type to stare. ATM as I have her now (might change) the female (still no name) is more of a yeah they are tits, what about them? for 5 gold you can ask a prostitute to show you hers. a kind of batman and robin type of set up only that they are the same age and one is female, I have no other examples The two would have seen each other naked and in every other situation under the sun but its a kind of forbidden fruit to them. yeah still have to work it out better.
  7. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    Setting, its a mythical world, magic and some very primitive steam powered crap. IF the Mc is wrong with how and how he treats people, he would correct his mistake accordingly as the situation demands. (vampire only feeding on animals and bandits gets a pass, Vampire feeding on homeless etc does not) The world type as best I can describe it would be kind of like the witcher and D&D mixed together. monsters roam the world mostly unchallenged but there are people out there that do fight them and try to protect the small towns and villages but not the main military as they hide behind the walls of the cities etc. ATM I think his reaction would be to freeze as panic flooded him, his mind set is that while sex does not mean marriage, he doesn't just go and use any hole that opens up to him either. the female character that I am still trying to design and plan out, so far has two paths, the first is that she would be upset because she missed out on it or second being pissed not at him per say but the situation in a how the hell.
  8. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    Story plot is that all the gods and demon lords are dead, save for a scant few lesser gods and demons, powerful enough but not enough to control all the forces of X. All the heroes champions etc for each side are also either dead or in a different realm/dimension The MC is a new generation Hero to be, he first has to become powerful enough in almost RPG style, beat an enemy and gain power. Problem is the MC is not the kill it because its a monster type, he is more practical and believes that its your actions that define if you are good or evil, even demons and this in turn gains him some negative reactions from other people. He is not the white knight type, he is the wild knight? and the idea is that a few girls/women will be attracted to that as he also doesnt treat them as fragile little girls that need a hero but instead treats them as independent people
  9. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    The universe is a mystical fant, so the blaming on a wizard is always possible. Ultimately the possible goal of that setting is creating an awkwardness that leads to a romantic desire, there are other girls that have romantic interests with the guy too but its to provide as much chaos as possible for the male character. If I use it at all. New question, sisters revealing to each other that they have romantic interest in the same guy not knowing the other does, sisters are very close, maybe twins bordering on incest level like in host club.
  10. SirGeneralSir

    Looking for a character reaction

    The characters are adventurers, hunting monsters, exploring dungeons etc. The woman is a mage, bold and daring, knows much but not everything. The man is the proper, respectful and will not cross that line type of guy, the typical fictional one that girls would want to take to see mom and dad type. He is also a crafty bugger that likes to make new and interesting ways to take out an enemy, but if a smart ass too, with taste. ( I think )
  11. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    Yeah, my thinking is that the tavern owner (a Dwarf) would be big on the idea of leaving little or not so little reminders that these people were here, tried something and “This” happened to them, so dont push your luck. Mostly because if the girls cant handle the problem, who are like daughters to him, he and his axe will handle it with the final word.
  12. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    Yeah, I like the idea of having something taken from the person (something important they left behind/dropped) indicating their status in society and how it doesn't matter where they are from, you don't fuck with the tavern girls and these items serve as a warning of that.
  13. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    Under normal situation, no a trader would not let go of the seal, hence him being drunk. I doubt the guild would be so willing to cause issues with a tavern when their member was assaulting or trying to assault one of the girls, bad PR. humm.
  14. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    guild seal could be an amulet of sorts, looks like weight scales, one with a box and the other with a coin, hanging around the neck of a troll head mount saying the guy was a troll
  15. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    A drunk Trader, drops his traders guild seal meaning he will be unable to trade until he gets it back or pays a large sum to replace it? ….. makes me think of a police badge and thats too small. His traders pack along with his guild banner/flag? might be more impressive? A lock box chest used by guild members to hold their stash, said chest has a magical “living” guardian. this one thinks he is a stand up comedian?
  16. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    Yean, maybe I need to just change who this person is, I want them to survive just for the pure idea that these guys will spread the word, giving the place a reputation of dont fuck with the taverns girls. Owner, a dwarf, is also very protective of the girls but will not step in unless he needs to, they are almost like his daughters to him, MC is like a son. Maybe I could change it to some pompous priest or something, someone not actually able to fight back, but my world has limited religions in that respects as 99.9% of the gods are either dead or banished from the world as well as the demon lords. If it was an Orc tavern, the heads of the people would be stuck on the antlers of a mount or something, heads mounted on a mount.
  17. SirGeneralSir

    looking for a trophy.

    @BronxWench Yeah I was kind of feeling that too. I was thinking something reasonable but still something that could have a story to it if you first came into the tavern. Bob: hey whats with the picaxe and torches on the wall? Bartender: Oh that, some miner once tried to force one of the local girls to go home with him, one of our own girls showed him her knife throwing skills and he never came back for them. Bob: and the sword? Bartender: Nobleman tried to convince one of our other girls that she could make a great deal of coin if she spent the night with him, almost killed the poor shit stain right here on the floor with the thing. maybe a traders pack? something that a wandering trader would use to carry all his trade good when he doesn't have a cart.
  18. I need some ideas. I am looking for some mythical monsters that operate in a pack/hoard type of community, that will attack travelers or small towns/villages, doing the raid and or pillage deal while also kidnapping anyone they could have a use for in any number of ways. So far I have a pick of Goblins or Werewolves, any other suggestions?
  19. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    ATM I am thinking that some random character will survive the attack, make it back to town and tell the hero what happened, some hunters or whoever, will then inform him that A B and C locations are the more likely spots that would be the lair.
  20. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    Some goblins and trolls, also do that but also for slaves and breeding. I think the more central europe has more about monsters/creatures doing the full list. honestly not too unlike some kinds of Orcs in name a fic world.
  21. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    I have read up on “traditional” monsters and there are many that will kidnap people for a list of uses, mostly as food. but it also differs depending on what country, Germany and England may both have a type of fairy, but their nature can be very different, same with their appearances. Giants, trolls and even vampires can differ a lot in different countries (annoying sometimes)
  22. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    I actually prefer to have monsters etc be more classic/traditional in accordance to history/mythology, I find its less work but also easy for more people to understand the idea etc. So far the idea now is, Hero hears friends are missing, there is a Ratmen lair at an old fort, Hero wants his friends back. Might conquer the lair and make it his own home base kind of thing too.
  23. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    Thats another good one. I am thinking that I might go with the Ratmen though, then all I need is a Lair that they would use and the Hero could take over for his own uses instead. A plot is forming in my mind but it is not yet clear.
  24. SirGeneralSir

    mythical monsters that kidnap people?

    How about ones in a forest/mountain setting? The Ratmen sound like they would be a good candidate for the inside of a ruined city or something, might still be able to use them. The setting I have is for the hero to find out that his friends have disappeared near X, so he goes out to find them only to find that it was ABC that took them and now he must race the clock to save his friends before it is too late.
  25. SirGeneralSir

    Introducing characters

    So I was talking with my wife about the first chapter to an Original story I am working on and she commented on that she didnt know how she felt about the appearance/description for three female characters as I described their bust size. My thinking was that it’s important because of how the characters are treated, for example there is a blond busty elf girl, she is not a bimbo and has some powerful magical abilities, push her too far and you will have a fireball heading for your nuts. I tried to give the MC, male, the same level of detail about his build, or rather lack of. He in no way looks or sounds like a hero. would anyone be able to give me their thoughts on this?