Thwarted again!
well, in that case, any of the moderators on this forum are excellent grammar nazis. I'm sure they will help you to the fullest extent of their abilities. (well, except for any artists, but we forgive them for that). As for me, I'll be watching you. I expect much improvement.
Consider that publishing in RL requires very strict guidelines, and even the most perfect of works can be rejected for random reasons. Just because you decide to publish on the net doesn't mean those standards must languish like a dead skunk in the middle of the highway.
(edit) cute baby!!!
however, ahem, that doesn't sway my convictions in the least!
*walks confidently away, then, once out of sight, melts against the doorjamb*
(damn smiley babies! why are they so darn cute?)