BronxWench

I don't know, Yowly is starting down the path to redemption, just a little nudge and he could almost be tolerable
I think Anny is a lost cause, even if he regains some of what he was, the memories would be too much for me, I'd resent that all I got back was a broken version of someone I loved - Icky and corinthian die, period. They took what she loved, broke it, and gave it back broken...they die slowly and screaming...hormones...

Sheepfuckers with mutton daggers.

It's definitely worse than him dying, because every time Valentina is with him, she'll remember the Aneurin she loves, and who loved her fiercely enough to bind himself to her. Nothing will ever replace that lost love, and I think it'll leave a very dark mark on her, too.

Exactly. The new Aneurin isn't enough, and neither is Yorwrath or Islwyn. Even all three won't be enough. Poor Valentina...

Hot, but sad. Poor Val. Even if Anny gets his memory back, it doesn't seem like he's gonna get it all back. I mean, maybe they can build from it, but it's still sad.

I say she dump Anurysm, Yowley has piqued my interest
maybe take Gwyn along for when Yowley is a butthead, the big guy seems to like her

So very sad to see a stranger wear the face of the one you love.

Yup... I really should stop even trying to do a HEA, my attempts just make things so much worse lol.

Chapter 11
Despite it all, I actually feel somewhat sorry for Valentina. While I think Yorwrath's love will be purer than Aneurin's reclaimed version of their love, if Aneurin can even come to truly love her again, I know her heart will always yearn for "her" Aneurin. Yorwrath is not going to mend that wound, no matter what.
Caoilfionn is still at risk for being a dead, dead Unicorn, I think, and Grwn continues to grow on me, which makes me mistrust him now. And Islwyn, well... I was roughly as gleeful as Valentina when she pelted him with the stone.
And Yorwrath's eyes, oh my... he's far more than merely elven now, isn't it?
By the way, you made me snivel again. Evil woman.

jojo, you've asked for cuckold stories in this subdomain a dozen times, in various topics. By now, I don't think anyone on the entire Internet has missed that you like cuckold stories, so for pity's sake, stop making new topics asking for the same thing over and over?

lol... Can I get Yorwrath on Weekends? Every other first of the month? Kokoa you can keep Islwyn to yourself

jojo, you've asked for cuckold stories in this subdomain a dozen times, in various topics. By now, I don't think anyone on the entire Internet has missed that you like cuckold stories, so for pity's sake, stop making new topics asking for the same thing over and over?

KoKoa, we'll love the elves together, you and me...

Maybe Blondie will accidentally get Aneurysm pregnant making it an mpreg story... Then I'd have to hate him too because I'd have to stop reading.
Never trust the people in your head Chrissy, they're all evil!

I gotta say, I'm pretty hard to creep out, but mpeg does it

who the hell invented that anyway?

I think we can add sick to that list :-/

I'll never warm up to Islwyn, I keep expecting him to do something horrible... >.>
Val will of course, but I won't. I'm going to write that scene glaring at the screen the whole time thinking "I don't trust you... you might live in my head but I still don't trust you"

Lol, and sigh cause magus is sort of ogrey cute ogrey but t still, he's definitely not pretty
Shhh, don't tell him though

I call dibs on this one, he's yummy.
Oh and Chrissy, I know that Aneurysm isn't dead because you always tease me by killing off the character I don't care for and then bring them back. I'm sorta looking forward to having all three in Val's bed though Now that's an idea I can really get behind.

Vampire elves...

Very nice indeed...
Oh, and sorry, DA, this is a male elf.

That's in that realm of androgyny where my unicorns fall. That is a tasty elf-pire

Chapter 10
Anyone who was not already aware of what an unattractive crier I am is surely aware of it now. I've been sniffling on and off all day, having made the mistake of reading this chapter far too early.
Having said all that, the relationship between Valentina and Yorwrath has gotten even more complicated, and I'm not at all sure how I feel about that. On the one hand, they are developing a grudging respect, which is good, but I still have such a sinking feeling about Yorwrath's future. I know Valentina will do what she can, but it may not be enough, and he's far from safe. For a supposed villain, he's gotten too damned interesting, and I'm going to worry.
And the obligatory cliffhanger, which will hopefully be Aneurin and Caiolfionn riding to the rescue, Islwyn be damned. Duplicitous druid...
And now I'll go off and cry a little more, just because.

KoKoa, I didn't mind Val stabbing Yorwrath's arm to get him to let go. That was nothing. It's the potential maiming that has me twitchy, because I can't see Yorwrath being able to go on and remain sane if he's rendered useless.
Contrary to the SB silliness last night, he's a creature of physical prowess, a swordsman and warrior. Take away his ability to defend those he loves, like Aneurin, and those to whom he's loyal, like his people, and he has nothing. Not even the promise made by Caoilfionn that he will share Valentina with Aneurin and Islwyn would be enough. He'd be without purpose, and that's the kind of maiming that's far worse than any physical wound.
And there's a strong streak of nobility in Yorwrath. He knew what would happen if he shed a tear for his wife when Aeron killed her, but he did it anyway. He's willing to die for his brother. And he had the chance to make trouble at the claiming, and didn't, nor did he touch Valentina when he slept beside her and his brother. So, if anything, he's becoming more of a tragic figure than a villain, although I wouldn't say the same thing about Islwyn, who hides his motivation far too well for me to trust him. Sadly, he's the underdog I'm rooting for, and I have the worst feeling that I'll be crying in the next chapter or so.

Suggested wording for your email:
"Hi Paranoia!
Are you dead?"
If you are, I'd appreciate if you didn't reply as it gets dark at night.
Yours,
Yamii"