DemonsAngel

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095678 This person states that the story is not theirs but the original Mitiki who they say passed away and that they are now going to take over and continue her work. I'm not sure if this is allowed or not, so I thought I would bring it to attention and hopefully find out. Thanks.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095537&chapter=16 Why is it I do this when bored? All well, here you go.

This is a new sotry in the HP section. The idea is that Harry is born a girl, her name is Heather and instead of Hagrid coming to get Harry, its Snape. The disclaimor says that some of the chapter was copied directly from the book. But I have the book in my lap. And it is nearly all of it. All they are doing is changing names and only a few other things. I don't know if this counts as plagerist, but if I were J.K Rowling, I would be furious about this as it seems more copying then a fan fic. There for, I leave it up to you to decide and thought I should just bring it to attention. http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095655

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095617 This person recently posted this in the Harry Potter sectiona and their note at the top made me question wether or not parts of this story is stolen. Note: ((Big thanks to "Englishwitch" for the inspiration and "help" writing the middle section, parts of which are lifted from his story, "Test of the heart".)) So, I figured I would mention it, just in case.

Baked Fish and Vegetables 4 fish fillets 4 medium potatoes, cut into 1 inch cubes 4 medium carrots cut into 1 inch pieces 4 small onions, quartered 4 Tbsp. Butter or margerine Salt, Pepper, Garlic Powder, Celery Seed (to taste) On eac of four square 9 inch peices of aluminum foil, place a fish fillet and protion of potato, carrot, and onion. Add 1 tablespoon butter/margering to each squre. Sprinkle with seasonings. Fold foil over and seal edges well. Bake on cookie sheet at 350 for 40 minutes.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095075&chapter=8 Chapter 8 of this story is an author's note. Not a chapter at all. And if I remember right, that is still not allowed, if it suddenly is, I apologize for wasting someones time.

In all honesty? No, I wouldn't pay. Why pay for something you can do for free yourself? The fact that people are lazy about such a simple thing is and don't want to take a few minutes is rediculious. Instead, they want someone who is already busy as heck keeping the site going, to come in and fix it for them. If they were 5, I could see that. But as we are all adults, or should be, I don't see why people can't just suck it up and do it themselves... That may be a bit harsh, but *shrugs* I believe people should behave like the capeable adults they are. But then, I am a bit jaded XD

http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096746 They are searching for a story.

What I don't understand is how she became this way. It is my understanding that she was always like this. Where as her own mother was the biggest sweetheart in the world. I should know, I KNEW my great grandmother.My grandmother even broke HER heart and was mean to her! None of her other kids were ever like that.

There is also one from them in the recent updates. Not sure if that one is important though as that thing cycles pretty quickly. Heck of a way to start the day eh DG?

So, I feel the need to at least talk about this a bit to vent frustrations. Why must people be so fucking insensitive?! I mean seriously, last night was my grandmothers birthday. So we went out to dinner. My sisters husband of only a couple months (and bf for a couple years) just went to jail a few weeks ago. We all know it is breaking my sisters heart because she misses him and he is going to miss a lot of things. So what does the old bitch do? The ENTIRE night, all she talks about is him being in jail when it is CLEARLY upsetting my sister. She ended up crying at the table in the middle of the restaurant for fucks sake! But did the bitch stop? NO! She just kept going on and on! I swear, the next person I run into that does something like that, whether it be my grandmother or not, I am going to give them one warning before tearing into them. NO ONE makes my baby sister cry but ME. And I don't even do it. That is my right as an older sister. The only other person with that right is my mother. *takes a deep breath* I feel better. For now. Oh and on another note, the other thing that pisses me off is that the old bitch talks about it to anyone and everyone that will listen. Even though my sister has asked her not to repeatedly. *twitches*

Ok, this is starting to piss me off bexypoesseGew is spamming topics in the forums.

http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096743 This is yet another person looking for a story and posting where stories actually go. They seem to think that saying they will delete it when they find it makes it ok...*reads her comment and realizes that yes, she is irritable so it is a bit more snarky then usual* Twits. >.>

This one is pretty good. Personally I intend to cut down the icing recipe a bit. It makes too much in my opinion. But I decided to post the original so others can decide for themselves. Spiced Pumpkin Cupcakes 1 pkg. (18 1/4 oz) yellow cake mix 1 pkg.(4 servings) vanilla instant pudding mix 1 cup canned pumpkin 1/2 cup oil 1/2 cup water 3 eggs 1 1/2 tsp. Ground Cinnamon 1 tsp Ground Cloves 1 tsp Vanilla Extract BEAT all ingredients with electric mixer on low speeds just until moistened. Beat on medium speed for 2 minutes. Spoon batter into 24 paper-lined muffin cups, filling each cup 2/3 full Bake in preheated 350 degree oven for 20 minutes (use the middle rack.) Frost cooled cupcakes with spiced cream cheese frosting. Makes 24 cupcakes. Spiced Cream Cheese Frosting 1 pkg. (8 oz) softened Cream Cheese 1/4 cup softened butter 1 tsp Vanilla Extract 1/4 tsp Ground Cloves 1 box (16 oz) Confectioners Sugar BEAT Cream cheese, butter, vanilla, and ground cloves until light and fluffy. Gradually beat in confectioners sugar until smooth. Note: I would highly recommend an electric hand mixer for frosting and only add about 1/4 -1/3 cups of confectioners sugar at a time.

This person is looking for a story and posting it where the stories go... http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095194

So, yeah. As the topic title says, I need some help/advice. I have never written an outline for a story and have no idea how. I think this is part of why I have a hard time finishing a story, after a point, I forget where I was going with something or what I was going to do. So, does anyone know of any websites that can help or can help me with how to do this? The next thing I need help with is that I found the beginning of an old story I started back in '09. I like the idea of it but it was horribly written and some things need to change. But I am not sure how to go about it. Any idea's for this? Any help is appreciated! *hugs all*