InvidiaRed

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  1. InvidiaRed

    AFF Halloween 2021 Revews

    From GeorgeGlass on October 26, 2021 Re: "Clucking Doom" by InvidiaRed John Madden once said, "Don't do anything great if you can't handle the congratulations." Looks like Berta earned herself the last job she'd ever want. Berta definitely got the short end of the lollipop. Quite the imaginative world you have here: science and magic in what would appear to be a postapocalyptic setting, made all the more amusingly bizarre by Wudy the Wabbit. Thank you. I’ll go more in depth on my own review thread. Rudy kinda just popped into my head one day. A wholly benevolent theme-park mascot animatronic with a lovingly developed company AI. Much Closer to Delta than say murder ‘nonfunctional inducing’ happy Gestalt Close, but not post-apocalyptic. You know how cutthroat and thieving global corps can be and even subsidiary companies aren’t 100% transparent with the main one when it comes to R&D top-secret prototypes and tech.
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    AFF Halloween 2021 Revews

    A place where the reviews go =p crazy I know!
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    Halloween 2021

    Hello! Hello! Hello! Fellow Ghosts and Ghouls Come one, Come all to the annual fall festival Halloween 2021! Where the rites are devilish and the autumn rituals celebrate the harvest…. All things are subject to rules the sun, the moon, me and you! Cast the die and make your fate! Conduct your offering or live eternally in regret wondering why you didn’t =p I kid, I kid. So procure your pencils, pens, quills and or writing implement of choice! Now then dearies. We All Float Down here! It’s been one heck of a crazy ride this year. Sit back, Relax and enjoy this year’s selection as we celebrate in gratitude as the year finally starts winding down! So I bid thee aidou and by the pricking of thy thumbs. Something wicked this way comes! Original fiction Halloween or Horror theme Include all appropriate tags at the beginning of the story Oneshots of under 50k words So pick up your red balloon
  4. InvidiaRed

    AFF Halloween 2021 Revews

    I think I do have enough time to actually write Day of The Himbo full credit to you and all for the werebimbo and the inspiration
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    Halloween 2021

    I don't think it uploaded. Just checked
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    Halloween 2021

    The answer is Yes. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/69679-aff-halloween-2021-revews/?tab=comments#comment-433960
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    Halloween 2021

    Now I kinda want to write day of the himbos lul
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    Halloween 2021

    http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109947
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    Halloween 2021

    Kk <3
  10. InvidiaRed

    Halloween 2021

    Woo! <3 Even if you don’t I say it counts cause you posted here <3
  11. InvidiaRed

    Halloween 2021

    Only if you want to. I mean you did just reach 1million on your story why not kick back and celebrate it?
  12. InvidiaRed

    Halloween 2021

    Okay, posted The first story.
  13. InvidiaRed

    Halloween 2021

    Clucking Doom An Angel’s Visitation is not always welcome. TF, Angst, Violence No Sex
  14. InvidiaRed

    AFF Holiday Party 2020

    I’ll give it a few days. But if no one else will I shall the rules haven’t really changed all that much right?
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    AFF Holiday Party 2020

    I got a story for Halloween/ harvest festival. @GeorgeGlass do I post it here or wait for Halloween 2021? Clucking Doom An Angel’s Visitation is not always welcome.
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    AFF Holiday Party 2020

    Woo!
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    AFF Holiday Party 2020

    Almost October
  18. Fun fact: Alexa is responsible for 95% of werewolf attacks in the last 5 years

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Naughty Alexa!

    2. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      Who knows what’ll happen when a AI and werewolves team up. We’re fine at least until she starts quoting the godfather.

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Werewolves need AI?

  19. https://wordcounter.net/

     

    Found a helpful site :D

    1. Desiderius Price
    2. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      I like the keyword density feature. That’s useful if it highlights it as you go along, rather than having to wait for your editor to point out how well you’ve abused certain words. :blink: 

    3. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      The ability to find overused words is invaluable. Now i’m trying my hand at finding filter words

  20. InvidiaRed

    Bad Quotes

  21. Update: Another checkmark down.

    part of me is happy as that finish line grows ever nearer… And the other part of me is screaming that everybody is going to hate it forever and until eternity.

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Tentacles are easy, they can go pretty much anywhere… :)

    3. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      Yeah but if I ever did it I’d want a happy ending for everyone.

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Tentacles are good for gripping, whatever needs to be gripped.  The suction can be applied as needed.  One or two per office.  So, yeah, any human involved could certainly get a happy ending.  Though, not sure how the tentacle monster would get a happy ending too.   Now, my smutty short (as a dream for the MC) implied that urine of adolescent teenage boys was an addictive substance to the alien kind (ie a hallucinogenic or an opioid etc) so “drinking” it was its own reward for the service.

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    Bad Quotes

  23. Writer Question

    How would you best convey that the story you’re writing is a dark fantasy geared towards adults and as such contains adult themes. I’m a little anxious as I approach the finish line.

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    2. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      True, But the fact remains evil exists. I would probably put at least a watch team on those who do evil for evil’s sake. Always a few who confuse mystery with the banality of what they espouse. Which I will always profess to be one of the great tragedies.

      The true threats have always been those willing and able to ignore all moral and ethical boundaries to get what they want no matter the cost.

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      There are psychopaths with no remorse or sense of guilt, always trying to get away.  Some become harden criminals, others become CEOs and/or politicians.  Still, even they’re not doing evil for the sake of evil, they’re doing it for some reason.  Anyways, your story, write them as serving evil gods if you want :)

    4. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      Here’s a secret I know from RPing Evil characters.

      There’s always a reason to serve outright evil demons and or gods. Not a good reason, but a reason be it vengence, spite. Its even possible to serve an evil god out of nothing but genuine thanks because when you were at rock bottom, they were the only ones that listened.

      You have to get something out of it. influence, power, wealth and or a fully stocked harem of your choice. All of the above etc… Even if it is nothing more than a reprieve from the eternal torture they promise.

      The evil deities know very well how duplicitous and self-serving you are. They’re using you just as you are using them. They know very well well the moment you get a chance to taste great power. You’ll try to usurp them, and they’re counting on it. But in the mean time you poor dupe, there’s a nunnery in need of pillaging,that orphanage is oppressing you and the goody two shoes high priest isn’t going to ritually sacrifice himself in a rhapsody of torturous ecstasy.

      Since the deal is a form of spiritual bribery. The more horrid and evil you are the less your assuredly damned afterlife is going to be. Because you got a I did big bad sticker and the evil spirits aren’t going to torment you as much.

  24. Everybody needs a dose of infectious laughter <3