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InvidiaRed
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Finally paid my school loans off.
Free at last.
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Many congratulations on your newfound freedom!
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Congrats! Finishing paying off a loan always feels good.
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From Ayrick on January 01, 2019 Damian is so out of his depth. Where is gouhlneedle at? Passion is a hell of a drug. Ghoulneedle is out of cold for the next few chapters.
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GeorgeGlass reacted to a reply to a status update:
I was reading the comments on a news article today, and someone mentioned that in Gre
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JayDee reacted to a reply to a status update:
I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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JayDee reacted to a status update:
I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
Since a lot of our users use deviantArt too, I thought I’d put this here, as a head’s
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BronxWench reacted to a reply to a status update:
I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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BronxWench reacted to a status update:
I survived two hellish days. Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall
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I survived two hellish days.
Between Jevoah witnesses getting thrown out of the mall because they think holidays are evil and santa is secretly satan near children.
To witnessing the dregs of society I can safely say i’ve lost quite a bit of hope towards humanity but not quite to nihilism yet.
Anywho hope yall had a good holiday.
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QuoteThank you BronxWench, blessed Be
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WillowDarkling reacted to a reply to a status update:
Happy Holidays to everyone, and hope you have a wonderful time.
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Beastiary coming along nicely. :3
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
So, who here got sidelined in the government shutdown? ::raises hand::
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
So, who here got sidelined in the government shutdown? ::raises hand::
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Have to work Xmas bs.
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I don’t plan to touch a store for weeks.
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I’m temporarily shut down.
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The people who actually do something (Aka you n others) won’t have to wait long once enough people get the politicians to grow the fluck up and act like reasonable adults.
Fret not @BronxWench
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
Well, thus ends the semester... Now to wait to see how badly I failed to achieve the
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I’m so relieved the Christmas anthology is going well. I feel bad for being semi MIA
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I think I got everyone ’s reviews. Thank you The rest are in my review response place
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From JayDee on December 19, 2018 Outreach It feels like Vaneris’s feelings for iteration pi are not entirely healthy... It was interesting. Lots of hints at wider lore as with the Halloween story and that momentous things have happened, but here’s a couple folks just lying together on a holiday. And, hey, Bread can be hard to get right! A relationship is hard enough without a vast power imbalance between two beings. The nearly unfettered power on their home turf means even a mild temper tantrum by a godling can be absolutely apocalyptic. Love often blinds those with it of the faults of their beloved. the result of a dalliance between a fertility goddess and a god of pestilence is Vaneris.Its not by accident that the name is similar to
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From Desiderius_Price on December 18, 2018 Outreach - InvidiaRed It was nice seeing iteration pi return. A bit of formatting to the poetry would do it nicely (ie, indent it). Thank You. I’ll try to mend it
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From SinfulWolf on December 20, 2018 Outreach – by InvidiaRed The style is rather interesting. I think anthologies like this really are a great time to experiment. This style of writing, I think it can work really well for a short story (as here) but I don’t think it’d work for anything much longer. Each sentence being a paragraph, especially at the start for the time in the hole, made every bit a little more impactful. Almost like poetry. I think where it was showing it’s weaknesses was when it came to dialogue. It felt a little disjointed, and didn’t flow very well, and since a single character had multiple lines, sometimes I wasn’t entirely sure who was speaking at a given time. Still, a rather nice story with a lovely ending, and your setting is quite interesting indeed. Certainly shows all the work you’ve put into it. I always seek to improve…. You are absolutely correct dialogue isn’t a strength yet. the rules for dialogue is vaguely arcane… At least to me.
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haha. I’ll never forget the flavor text since my brother loved to spam lightning bolt( He’s hardcore Red)(for those interested I’m hardcore Black) MTG ftw
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InvidiaRed reacted to a reply to a status update:
I’m now working on a second Christmas story, involves some of the material from the H
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“Breeder venom changes the host to be more hospitable to their little parasitic shits.” He wouldn’t be able to take said anti-venom if he was severely hallucinating. Part of him is aware he’s infected its just the rest of the hallucination drowns it out. Hahaha. Now I can’t wait till next holiday.
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From BronxWench on December 16, 2018 Outreach Beautiful, just beautiful. You play with language like a master, and it's delightful to see how you coax words into new patterns. And this world of yours--so unique, and painful, and full of terrible beauty. Thank you! Thank you for the kind words.
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From PlagueClover on December 16, 2018 Outreach by InvidiaRed This was a very sweet story. You know, when I read fics you've written, the style, the elite word usage and complicated thought processes make me very curious about what's happening in that brain of yours. I mean that in a good way. Your writing is very different from anything I've read before. It's a lot to take in, a lot of jumping back and forth so I had trouble following/understanding what was happening, but once I kinda caught onto the rhythm of it, and that little romance began to spark, it managed to pull at my heartstrings and ended beautifully. Awesome job. It takes effort to make the words flow. To make them go. Where they end up nobody knows. From one mind to the next A simple test, A detail stress For Context is Queen and the order of words King.
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Outreach is up. Haha. I almost changed my mind for a unabashed story based on a horny santa, His demonic gimp Krampus, his wife and his quest to find another Ho.
