Guest ABigFan Posted August 2, 2023 Report Posted August 2, 2023 I agree with Donkingkong, man you are so creative!!! I also love the idea number 4 the most. It will be a new low for a Countess and a proud woman. I would ask if maybe the side effect of the drug is that she gets aroused by strong scents. For example, sweaty balls, asses, etc. At first she may be repulsed by it but later on she accepts it and is hungry for a2m, for rimming men, maybe even animals, for piss, for getting cum in hair as sort of further degradation. I know that this is not everyone’s taste, so just throwing the idea out there. Quote
Extreme Posted August 2, 2023 Report Posted August 2, 2023 (edited) I agree with Donkingkong and ABigFan. I like reading porn stories about game characters and other, I read a lot, but Cross's stories are so detailed and well-written that its crazy, and none of them feel like just another version of a previous story. I like number 4 the most too, especially with the ideas that ABigFan has given, basically make her addicted and make her do anything for another dose every disgusting and degenerate thing she can do to contrast with her beauty and status. My only limit are scat, vomiting and things like cutting legs, arms, etc. But everything else is good dirty talk, degradation, drinking urine, sex with dogs, sex in dirty alleys or bathrooms, sex with ugly men, sex with dirty homeless, shota, rape, all kinds of filth like smegma, stench, rimming etc would be super hot. Ofc, if this is something you or other readers don't want, then ok, I know these things are a bit extreme. Edited August 2, 2023 by Extreme Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 2, 2023 Author Report Posted August 2, 2023 (edited) 3 votes for Number 4. I'll wait a few more days to give anyone else who want to a chance to give their opinion, then I'll begin (I'm still not in the right frame of mind to tackle the second half on Voluntary Enslavement yet, so another short story will be a nice distraction). What you guys think about a combination of 1 and 4? Lara is kidnapped and addicted to a drug that acts like an aphrodisiac. She hates what the drug makes her do, but she's addicted and when she starts suffering withdrawal, she has to crawl back to her enemy for another hit. In this version, I wouldn't need blackmail. I figure her enemy would use the drug itself to make Lara do stuff. Example - Lara goes to her enemy desperate for more of the drug. Enemy makes her dress in her fanciest designer shoes, gown and jewellery. He/she drives Lara to a homeless camp, gives her the aphrodisiac drug and then kicks her out of the car. Beautiful and horny woman surrounded by dirty horny homeless men - nature takes its course. Maybe her enemy hangs around to film it or pays someone else to do it. It'll depend who I use as her enemy. I can also use ABigFan's idea of the drug heightening Lara's sense of smell. So, for the example above, she's hyper aware of the stench of the homeless men, which eclipses the delicate scent of her expensive perfume. She's disgusted by it, but so aroused by the drug that she's powerless to do anything about it. When the arousal effects of the drug wears of, the hyperactive sense of smell persists, leaving Lara feeling self loathing, as her nostrils are filled with the stench of her own body, stinking of dirt, sweat and cum from what she's done. Just spitballing ideas. Let me know what you guys think. Edited August 3, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Additions Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted August 3, 2023 Report Posted August 3, 2023 I absolutely love the idea of homeless men and homeless camp, it is like you read my mind! I would just love that after the drug wears of she would first feel self-loathing but then she starts to crave all that filth, like she connects all those scents with heightened state of arousal, she gets wet, horny and needy. This craving should occur either during the scene or maybe for some other scene in the story, that depends on how much would you like to spend time with the story. Maybe her enemy sends her to the different homeless camp in the second part of the story and she gets tremendeously excited but does not show him that. I personally hate when stories end with something along the lines “… and then she fell so low that she knew there was no turning back...” In my opinion that is the best part to continue and produce even more content as it opens the door for soooo many posibilities. Of course, you are the boss and CrossroadsMk2. I am looking forward in which direction you will take the story. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 3, 2023 Author Report Posted August 3, 2023 (edited) Hi ABigFan, I don't think the craving filth thing would work with it being an aphrodisiac drug. If I was going to do that, I'd go with a different sort of drug. There's a part of the brain called the pregenual anterior cingulate cortex that is responsible for us feeling shame and embarassment. It triggers the fight or flight response and releases epinephrine and dopamine, which speeds the heart rate, makes us feel anxious and is generally unpleasant. But what if instead the brain is slowly rewired so that in response to feeling shame or embarassment, the brain releases dopamine and endorphins, making it feel really good. That would explain Lara eventually seeking out more and more shameful activities (and thereby craving dirty smelly homeless men etc). it's another idea, but I'll leave it up to the forum members to vote on which idea they like best - Aphrodisiac drug or Shameful pleasure drug. Edited August 3, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted August 3, 2023 Report Posted August 3, 2023 Thank you for detailed explanation. I love how deep you go into the story to make it more credible, big respect. My vote definetely goes to Shameful pleasure drug. I second Extreme’s request “every disgusting and degenerate thing she can do to contrast with her beauty and status.” Quote
Extreme Posted August 3, 2023 Report Posted August 3, 2023 I love both the homeless camp idea and the idea of craving filth after the initial disgust sounds super hot. Would be also great if ofc all that filth, stench and dirt of homeless would be described, and I hope homeless people don't have condoms their cum need to go into Lara's pussy, mouth, ass, and on her body. It would also be great if Lara didn't have any birth control also, so the potential ending would be her being pregnant, her aristocratic genes mixed with some random hobo and using her perfect body to give birth to hobo offspring Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 3, 2023 Report Posted August 3, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, My 3 cents, new story instead of putting it into the Voluntary Enslavement story....can’t see how anyone could top what Sarah’s doing to her. What about the nemesis of Lara's being Jonathan Reiss from the 2003 movie, The Cradle of Life. (or) make her old therapist, Dr. Smith the thorn in her side. Instead of a engineered virus, Lara is introduced to deep hypnosis by Dr. Smith. Unknown to Lara, he uses both hypnosis and to hook her to crave more, an enhanced drug that magnifies her arousal to do what ever he chooses. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted August 3, 2023 Report Posted August 3, 2023 Love the idea of combining 1 and 4 .. ..not so much of the filth tbh....they are to very different kind of scenario that don't compliment well imo.... Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 4, 2023 Author Report Posted August 4, 2023 (edited) Hi all, since Donkingkong started this whole thing off, I'm inclined to go with his suggestion of 1 and 4. It'll also work well with LHunt's suggested villain, since Jonathan Reiss, since he's in the business of making biological weapons, so a designer drug would be right up his alley. The homeless scene will probably happen early on, to teach Lara a lesson in the consequences of defiance. I also want to have a scene like this later on, when Reiss is demonstrating his drug's effects for perspective buyers: https://xhamster.com/videos/jennifer-connelly-ass2ass-extended-hd-4349598 I have no idea what movie this is from, but Jennifer Connelly is hot as fuck. Edited August 4, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted August 4, 2023 Report Posted August 4, 2023 Hi CrossroadsMk2, Looking forward to the story! P.S. The name of the movie is Requiem for a Dream https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0180093/ It is a great movie! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 4, 2023 Author Report Posted August 4, 2023 Hi ABigFan, thanks! I'll have to keep an eye out on Netflix. Quote
Extreme Posted August 4, 2023 Report Posted August 4, 2023 Jennifer and this scene are super hot but I heard this movie is actually depressing because my friend said whole movie killed his boner for that scene xD. Btw, not sure if this is going to be helpful, but i have two favorite porn videos where a hot woman has sex with a homeless person, It looks that i cant paste link here so first one is Samantha Rone Bum Luck on eporner and second one is Shona River Depths Of Depravity on pornoeggs. Maybe you'll take a look and see if you want to take inspiration from these videos if you look for inspiration from Jennifer video too. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 4, 2023 Author Report Posted August 4, 2023 Hi Extreme, thanks for the videos - they came up right away in Google. I think I'll have Lara gingerly crawl from tent to tent (or cardboard box to cardboard box) at first, having sex with homeless men, before word spreads and it turns into a full blown gangbang. Quote
Extreme Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 A cardboard box will fit even better, or it can be both boxes and tents. Everything else with Lara crawling from box to box then gangbang sounds great, omg this is going to be super fun and hot to read. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 5, 2023 Author Report Posted August 5, 2023 Hi Extreme, Boxes it is. I'll have time to start writing in about a week. It'll be the same deal as BDSM Raider - probably 3 chapters and about 30,000 to 35,000 words. It'll probably take 2 months to finish, given the way my work and family commitments are at the moment. Quote
Extreme Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 Take your time, I bet it's worth the wait BTW so let's recap Lara's enemy will force her to take the drug, Lara will get addicted and beg the enemies for another dose, they will use it against her, they will dump her with the drug near a area with homeless men, Lara will have sex with homeless people, they will be dirty, ugly, some fat, they will smell bad, Lara will be disgusted with all the filth at first but too horny to stop, then after some time she will start to crave all the filth because she identify it with all the pleasure that she received etc? Also why you think about no condom for homeless and no birth control for Lara? She'd probably be terrified of catching some STD (it's up to you if she gets any) and getting pregnant(i hope she finds out she's pregnant at the end of the story) but she'll be too horny to stop. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMK2, You may want to look into the plant called the Devil's Breath. Might be something that can be useful for the story. Lead the Way! Quote
Extreme Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 If I'm right, Devil's Breath works like a date rape where the victim has no idea what's going on. I think it would be better if Lara did everything when she's perfectly ok and knows what she's doing, but she's turned on by drugs and can't help herself. But its ofc up to Cross . Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 5, 2023 Author Report Posted August 5, 2023 Hi Extreme and LHunt, would you guys like a brief outline of the story (main dot points of the plot) or would you prefer to find out later, as you read it? Quote
Extreme Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 I don't know tbh on the one hand I would like to know the details on the other hand I prefer no spoilers xD. Let LHunt decide Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 Sure on the outline...send it email. What does Devil's breath do to you? You can experience hallucinations, drowsiness, dizziness, and blurred vision in large doses. Devil's Breath can cause violent behavior, aggression, and loss of inhibitions. It can lead to memory loss, so you may not recollect aggressive behavior afterward.Feb 20, 2023 Quote
Guest LHunt Posted August 5, 2023 Report Posted August 5, 2023 J. Reiss should be able to perfect it to his needs to control Lara....I'd think. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted August 5, 2023 Author Report Posted August 5, 2023 Hi Extreme and LHunt, I'll keep it a surprise then. I'm going to go with the addictive aphrodisiac drug, rather than Devil's Breath. The story's planned out. As a first, I'm going to include a real world celebrity for the other woman in the ass-to-ass double ended dildo scene, to demonstrate that Lara isn't the only famous celebrity that's been addicted to the drug. I'm thinking Taylor Swift at this stage. She won't play any other role in the story. It's more to demonstrate Reiss's power and control to Lara, to make her situation feel hopeless. Quote
Extreme Posted August 7, 2023 Report Posted August 7, 2023 Hmm, since Lara is a British countess, maybe it would be better to use someone from British royal family instead of Taylor Swift? Quote
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