Guest LHunt Posted May 18, 2023 Report Posted May 18, 2023 Awesome...thanks! Thought we were going to have to send out a search party for Lara. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted May 18, 2023 Report Posted May 18, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Your stories read like a slow burning, well timed detonation charge going off. Love the way this story grabs you all of a sudden, especially with Sam’s involvement now. Sam convinced by Sarah that Lara has been sexually repressed since childhood, shown all the video’s of Lara and how she gets off on being dominated and humiliated by her staff... which only confirms what Sam heard her saying in Switzerland. The Tattoos also confirming what Lara is into, the whole story setup by Sarah easily convinced Sam – and now the the start of what is a village gangbang – fucking awesome! Lead the Way! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted May 18, 2023 Report Posted May 18, 2023 I can only guess that Sam’s itching to start experimenting on Lara once they arrive back at Green Manor. Your description of her thinking of Lara like a superhero with a secret identity...couldn’t have explained her thoughts better. Given the control to basically do as she wishes with Lara’s PR and have two different sets of content filmed ….I think Sam will have some great stuff to show the special guests before Lara’s outing. Sam knowing Lara is an insatiable little slut now! Can’t wait to see how Lara earns the idol. Lead the Way Sir! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 18, 2023 Author Report Posted May 18, 2023 Hi LHunt, just the part 2 to go for Africa and then the rest of the story will be back at Croft/Green Manor. Lots of fun planned in the new sex dungeon with all of the charity members using Lara without her knowing (Lara will be wearing a sensory deprivation helmet to literally keep her in the dark), Lara will unknowingly get an Onlyfans managed by Sam (the public website Sarah alluded to), and the Charity Dinners will slowly get more and more embarrassing for Lara (as all the guests know her secret, although Lara is unaware), until eventually all is revealed but by then it's too late for Lara to turn back. Quote
Guest LHunt Posted May 22, 2023 Report Posted May 22, 2023 On 5/18/2023 at 6:54 PM, CrossroadsMk2 said: Hi LHunt, just the part 2 to go for Africa and then the rest of the story will be back at Croft/Green Manor. Lots of fun planned in the new sex dungeon with all of the charity members using Lara without her knowing (Lara will be wearing a sensory deprivation helmet to literally keep her in the dark), Lara will unknowingly get an Onlyfans managed by Sam (the public website Sarah alluded to), and the Charity Dinners will slowly get more and more embarrassing for Lara (as all the guests know her secret, although Lara is unaware), until eventually all is revealed but by then it's too late for Lara to turn back. Sam is going to be a busy, busy girl keeping up with Lara in my opinion! Lead The Way! Quote
Guest LHunt Posted May 22, 2023 Report Posted May 22, 2023 It's awesome that Lara can't stop from playing with herself...and in her mind, she is conditioning herself to think of Sarah as Lady Sarah. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 22, 2023 Author Report Posted May 22, 2023 (edited) Hi LHunt, the mental conditioning will be a big part of the second half of the story - feeding Lara's addiction for attention, validation and sexual gratification, while at the same time slowly shifting her window for what she perceives as acceptable behaviour. It'll be my attempt to show the path that a lot of Instagram models seem to follow, as the go down the rabbit hole. First it's just sexy workout pics, then some suggestive lingerie shots, then they start an Onlyfans and start showing partial nudes, then full nudes, then masturbating with toys - until eventually they're doing hardcore porn, and they're completely unrecognisable from the innocent girl they started out as. Edited May 22, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
Extreme Posted May 23, 2023 Report Posted May 23, 2023 Hi, the new chapter is very good and hot, probably my favorite from this story so far. I like how Lara starts to "break" more and more, how she gets turned on by prostitution, and I like race play too, and how it connects to the history of nations. I always thought that BBC really fits to our favorite British countess and I looking forward to the second part in Africa Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted May 24, 2023 Author Report Posted May 24, 2023 (edited) Hi Extreme, glad you're enjoying the story so far. Part 2 will be Lara's biggest challenge yet - in order to prove her worthiness to remove the Idol, the High Priestess will set Lara an impossible task (John Wick style, since at this point Lara's body count is getting up there). Lara has from sunrise to sunset to satisfy all 270 adult males in the village. With an average 13 hour day, that works out at about 22 an hour, so she'll need to get creative to stay on schedule. Or I might do from dusk till dawn and have the gangbang in the courtyard, illuminated by firelight - could also be hot. I just know I want her under time constraints, so she has to go above and beyond. Edited May 24, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest LHunt Posted May 24, 2023 Report Posted May 24, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Now that’s HOT! In the court yard so Lara can actually see the mass of men gathered – this should quell her fantasy (just a bit). Dusk to Dawn with torches to provide the light – way too cool….plus the cool air as the night wears on, should keep her nipples hard as rocks. Just my opinion! Lead the Way Sir! Quote
Extreme Posted May 24, 2023 Report Posted May 24, 2023 The village gives me some ideas like that Lara would be fucked by common peasants (in part 1 she was fucked at least by the king and his sons) which would contrast with her aristocratic status, the peasants would be ugly, dirty, smelly bad, obvious lack of hygiene (some might have smegma under their skin), small penises, some of them fat etc. basically they would be the opposite of Lara, which would contrast with her beauty. They would be told who Lara is, so they would use that information to humiliate and degrade her. Lara would be turn on and disgusted at first, but over time she would only be turn on to the point she woul agree to do even rimming. Maybe there would also place for some colonization jokes and dirty talk which mean the villagers would want to knock her up, and Lara would be so horny and turn on that she would beg to be knock up and mix her aristocratic genes with some of the lowest scum she'd ever seen. Don't expect her to actually be pregnant later on, but it would be hot if she found out at the end of the story that she is pregnant which would later on also caused alot of interest around her Quote
Extreme Posted June 12, 2023 Report Posted June 12, 2023 Just wondering how are you and how is the work on the new chapter going? Have you seen my idea, is it too extreme or doesn't fit the story or its ok? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted June 12, 2023 Author Report Posted June 12, 2023 Hi Extreme, I had to take a few weeks off writing, as the whole family's gotten COVID, then gastro and then the flu (just for something different). Your idea won't really work because Lara won't be talking to any of the tribesmen, as she doesn't speak their language. As I said in our email, I'll look at doing a homeless gangbang in a later story. With regard to the next chapter of Voluntary Enslavement, I've decided to take a break. Writing was becoming a bit of a grind, so I'm finishing another short story at the moment, and then will come back to it later. I'll be posting all parts of the short story together when it's finished. Quote
Extreme Posted June 13, 2023 Report Posted June 13, 2023 (edited) Sorry to hear about your family's health issues Well, they don't need to understand her, she could just talk anyway We don't talk about homeless gangbang in our email(we talked through email a long time ago before your long break due to family and we talked about BDSM Raider story) but I'm all for it xD I'm also very curious about this new short story I am a bit surprised that Voluntary Enslavement becoming a bit grind because last chapter was probably my favorite from this story Edited June 13, 2023 by Extreme Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted June 13, 2023 Author Report Posted June 13, 2023 Just now, CrossroadsMk2 said: Hi Extreme, the short story is BDSM Raider - I've decided to finish it. Regarding Voluntary Enslavement, I think it's just the daunting length - It's already sitting at 140,000, which is longer than Return of the King from the Lord of the Rings Trilogy - and I still have so many chapters left to go. I wanted to do something else to reboot my mind. Finish something short to get an accomplishment under my belt and then come back fresh for the second half of Voluntary Enslavement. I'm always worried about the chapters becoming boring and repetitive. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted June 13, 2023 Author Report Posted June 13, 2023 Hi everyone, just a quick announcement. LHunt commissioned some artwork on Hentai Foundry for my Voluntary Enslavement story. It's a sneak peak of some stuff that'll be happening in future chapters in Croft Manor's newly renovated sex dungeon. Thanks to LHunt. Link below. https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Ethevian/1055435/Isnt-that-too-big-for-Lara--Commission Quote
Extreme Posted June 15, 2023 Report Posted June 15, 2023 On 6/13/2023 at 3:48 AM, CrossroadsMk2 said: BDSM Raider has a really good start. I still have that first chapter you sent me through email before the family break, so it'll be good to read the full story. I never found your stories boring or repetitive (I think the only thing I didn't like was the Supernatural Adventures chapters where Lara turned into a cow, just not my thing) but a break for an open mind and fresh ideas is always good and good that there will be a new story in between. btw impressive that Voluntary Enslavement is longer than Return of The King Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted July 13, 2023 Report Posted July 13, 2023 Hey guys! How's it going? How are you Cross??!! Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 13, 2023 Author Report Posted July 13, 2023 Hi Donkingkong, going fine. Hope everything's good with you as well. It's a bit of a struggle at the moment to find time to write, but I'm almost finished a side project - 3 chapter short story that I'll try to post in it's entirety in the next week. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted July 13, 2023 Report Posted July 13, 2023 Been very busy , but counting my blessings helps . I'm glad you're doing great too! What's this side project about ?! Quote
Extreme Posted July 13, 2023 Report Posted July 13, 2023 5 hours ago, Guest Donkingkong said: Hey guys! How's it going? How are you Cross??!! I am fine too 32 minutes ago, Guest Donkingkong said: Been very busy , but counting my blessings helps . I'm glad you're doing great too! What's this side project about ?! BDSM Raider Cross posted one chapter a long time ago but deleted it, but believe me, that first chapter was hot so it's nice that he decided to finish the story. Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted July 13, 2023 Report Posted July 13, 2023 @Extreme hey man glad you're great too !! Yea I think I remember that chapter! It also ended on a very suspenseful note when she entered the club and was finally ready to submit. I'm so glad he's finally dropping that nuke , if it's what I'm thinking it is 😛 Quote
Guest Donkingkong Posted July 13, 2023 Report Posted July 13, 2023 It's not too often Lara gets smitten by and submits willing... Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted July 13, 2023 Author Report Posted July 13, 2023 (edited) I've written BDSM Raider with a young Tomb Raider (19) starting out on her career. We often wonder how attractive and intelligent women wind up with and continually go back to douchebag ex's, but women love a bad boy. Lara falls hard for devilishly handsome sex club owner, Dante, who's confident, charismatic and much more experienced than her. No blackmail in this story. - Lara does it all to herself, as she finds herself so smitten and desperate to win Dante's affection that she behaves in ways that a well brought-up young Countess definitely shouldn't. She's about to discover that even strong and independent women can lose themselves in codependent relationships, as she is gradually seduced and finally corrupted - becoming Dante's pet and the club bicycle. Edited July 13, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Typos Quote
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