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[JayDee]

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BTW, for anyone looking for a hot incest story, I recommend JayDee’s “Twinpregnation.” Hot incest sex and romance, with girl-twin getting knocked up...it checks a lot of my boxes. 

Thank you for the plug!

Though to really fit the AFF template it probably should have been the boy twin getting knocked up. And thank you kindly for the review also, I’ll reply over in my thread!

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, I can't wait for the next chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', oh and I'm really excited about the next chapter of 'The more, the Merrier ', you said that the chapter is going to be a long chapter,  5000 words, that does sound really exciting,  and you also said that more time is going to be spent on the characters, or pairs, as you say, since the perspective shifts wont be as frequent, and that does sound really exciting, anyway,  hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, oh and I will also be checking out the hot incest story you recommended, 'Twinpregnation', and you were right, I'll just have to wait and see : ), bye and have a nice day. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Chapter 5 of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” is posted!

Next up, chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier.” This story just got it’s first review, so I have created a review reply thread for it. 

 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I've recently read the next chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant' and I really enjoyed it, although, I do have one question, will there be another chapter, or is the fifth chapter the final part of the story ? let me know when you have the time, oh and I also am really excited for the second, intense chapter of 'The More, the Merrier', and I will leave a comment on the review page of it, and I congratulate you on the story getting another reveiew, anyway, hope you're doing well and good luck with your stories, and can't wait for the next chapter of 'The More, the Merrier', bye and have a nice day

 

[GeorgeGlass]

I’ve been crazy productive in the past couple of days. As a result, some news:

--Chapter 2 of “Little Rose” is now posted! Rose is feeling better but still needs some help bathing, so she and daddy have some fun in the tub.

--Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” went off to beta yesterday. It’s a pretty long chapter (over 5,700 words), so it could be a little while before it comes back.

I also made decent progress on a couple of original one-shot stories. One of them, which is close to completion, is called “The Happiest Place.” It’s about a creative meeting at a Disney-like company in another world where “children’s entertainment” has a whole other side to it.

On 8/5/2018 at 2:43 PM, Guest Star wars player 1 said:

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I've recently read the next chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant' and I really enjoyed it, although, I do have one question, will there be another chapter, or is the fifth chapter the final part of the story ?

There will be one more chapter. We still have the swimsuit and talent competitions ahead of us—not to mention the crowning of the winner.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying to my question, oh and I also wanted to let you know that I have just read chapter two of ' Little Rose ' and I thought it was a very good chapter, oh and I also wanted to let you know that I didn't put some other things about 'Hot Yoga ' in my review since I didn't think of them befeore, but now I will be saying the other parts of my review of ' Hot Yoga '. So, to start off, one of the many parts that I love about the story is Gretchen and Adyson's sub-dom relationship, I think that it's a great way to have two chracters have sex like this, and it gets better when Monty and Vannessa join them, I like how Vannessa is like a teacher to Adyson in that part of the story as well, another thing that I love about the story is the Mother's duty ( Mom teaches her kids about sex first hand) element in the story,  with Dr.hirano teaching Stacy, Ginger, and Coltrane about sex during the story, like you I love the Mother's duty in these stories, like ' Auntie's Home ', Anyway,  hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', and the final chapter of 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', bye and have a good night. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and ask how you're doing, I have been doing well, oh and I hve a question or two if you don't mind,  1. How are you doing with your last few days of the Summer season ? 2. How are you doing with your stories like 'The more, the Merrier ', 'Little Rose ', 'The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', and 'Multiversy ' ? Let me know when you have the time, and hope you're doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Hey there. Personally, I’m glad that summer is getting closer to its end, mainly because it’s hot as blazes where I live. Some days, going outside is like going to a crawfish boil – where you’re the crawfish.  I hope it’s more comfortable where you are.

As for the stories you asked about, progress may slow down for a bit because I’m now in charge of putting together the program for my parents’ memorial service. But that shouldn’t take too long. Anyway, here’s a quick update:

• Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” is still in beta. I hope to have it back and posted some time in the next week.
• Chapter 3 of “Little Rose” is off to a good start, but there’s work to be done.
• Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” is coming along nicely; I'd say it's about three-quarters complete. It's going to be a bit longer than chapter 9. 
• The 6th and final chapter of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” still has a ways to go. But I’ve got a solid outline of it in my head, and I’m writing bits of the text as they come to me. (This is the way a lot of my writing goes – scenes are written not in the order they happen, but in the order in which each one becomes clear enough in my head to be put into words.)
   

 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, on your comment on how hot it is, I must sadlt say that I feel like a Crwafish too, and don't worry about your prograss on your stories, take your time with your parent's Memorial service and hope that they are resting peacefully in heaven, anyway, hope you're doing well and can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', and good luck with your stories, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

My parents’ memorial service went splendidly. Lots of us got to tell stories about them, and everyone in attendance seemed glad to hear it.

Now, 2 quick updates:

--Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” should be back from beta any time now.

--Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” went off to beta this morning.

Thus, one way or the other, I’ll have something posted soon.

 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and say congratulations on your parent's Memorial service, I hope that they're resting peacefully in heaven together, and I also wanted to ask how you're doing, and I also can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', and ' Multiversy ', anyway hope you're doing well and good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[JayDee]

Good to hear the memorial service went well. Sharing stories like that is a wonderful way to remember people.

[GeorgeGlass]

Well, neither chapter has returned from beta yet, but in the meantime, I’ve made a bit of progress on the next chapters of “Auntie’s Home” and “The Little Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” and major progress on chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl.” This chapter is a flashback to Mia’s teenage years, when she experienced her “second puberty” and the sharp spike in libido that came with it. It’s been hard limiting myself to one chapter’s worth of material, but I really want to get back to present time in the third chapter, so I’m sticking to the porny essentials.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

HI, it's me, I wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, I'm really excited about chapter 2 of ' Mia : Confessions of a Dickgirl ',  it sounds very good, and don't worry about the second chapter of 'The more, the Merrier ', and ' Multiversy ',  no rush I hope that you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, oh and I also wanted to let you know that on one of my earlier comments on this page, the one posted on August 8th, I also commented on some other parts of 'Hot Yoga ' that I didn't put in my review for the story, so let me know what you think of the other parts of my review of 'Hot Yoga ' when you have the time, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

So, much news. First, chapter 2 of “Delta Delta Delta” is now posted. Lindsey and the other pledges have to show off their dancing skills—alone, and with a partner. Naughtiness ensues.

Second, chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” is now in beta. I now have three chapters in beta simultaneously, which is a personal record. Yay?

Third, I unexpectedly made massive progress on chapter 3 of “Little Rose” this week, so that will probably be posted soon. Although if one of those three chapters comes back from beta and needs revisions, that will take priority.

Fourth: SWP1, regarding your additional comments on “Hot Yoga”:

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So, to start off, one of the many parts that I love about the story is Gretchen and Adyson's sub-dom relationship, I think that it's a great way to have two chracters have sex like this,

Thanks! I wanted them to have a different sort of relationship from any of the others in the group. Also, Adyson has always had a bit of a bad-girl vibe, and I’ve always thought Gretchen was the cutest and sweetest of the Fireside Girls (after Isabella, anyway), so it just seemed right for Adyson to be the domme and Gretchen the sweet little submissive.

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and it gets better when Monty and Vannessa join them, I like how Vannessa is like a teacher to Adyson in that part of the story as well, another thing that I love about the story is the Mother's duty ( Mom teaches her kids about sex first hand) element in the story,  with Dr.hirano teaching Stacy, Ginger, and Coltrane about sex during the story, like you I love the Mother's duty in these stories, like ' Auntie's Home ',

Yes, my whole mother’s duty fetish definitely came through big time in this story, given that two female characters took on the role of sex-teachers to the younger ones. We’ll be seeing more of that from both Vanessa and Dr. Hirano in “The More, the Merrier.”

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying to my comment, I hope you're doing well and one question,  you said that chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ' should be back from beta anytime now, does that mean that it might be posted tommorow or Sunday ? But I am not rushing you or anything,  just asking, anyway let me  know when you have the time, hope you're doing well and good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

I don’t have any control over when my betas will get back to me with their critiques. They are doing this out of the kindness of their heart (ie, they rarely ask for me to do something for them in return), so I wouldn’t feel right about pressuring them.

But I do plan to post chapter 3 of “Little Rose” some time tonight.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Okay, I didn't mean to pressure you or your betas, I am sorry if I made you feel that way, but I can't wait for chapter 3 of 'Little Rose ' and I hope you're having a nice weekend, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Aaaaand chapter 3 of “Little Rose” is posted. 

SWP1, no worries.

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read chapter 3 of 'Little Rose ' and I really loved it, I loved the ending where Rose's dad finally got to fuck her ass and that he said that they would be doing that lots of more times, I can't wait for the next chapter , oh and another thing, one of the many things I love about your stories is that when people are having sex, sometimes they get really turned on, and fuck the girl real hard and crazy, like for example in 'Hot Yoga ' when Monty started to fuck Gretchen hard and fast after she begged him to cum in her ass, and when Coltrane started to fuck Dr.hirano real hard and fast after she said that he could be making Stacy and Ginger another sibling, and of course, in 'Little Rose ' when her dad finally fucks her and does it hard and fast, I love that element that you have in many of your stories anyway, hope you're doing well and hope that you're having a nice weekend, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, and can't wait for chapter 4 of 'Little Rose ' bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” is posted! In this flashback chapter, we find out how Mia’s unusual sex life got started.

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one of the many things I love about your stories is that when people are having sex, sometimes they get really turned on, and fuck the girl real hard and crazy, like for example in 'Hot Yoga ' when Monty started to fuck Gretchen hard and fast after she begged him to cum in her ass, and when Coltrane started to fuck Dr.hirano real hard and fast after she said that he could be making Stacy and Ginger another sibling, and of course, in 'Little Rose ' when her dad finally fucks her and does it hard and fast, I love that element that you have in many of your stories

 

Thanks! There are times when I want the guy to have self-control, but I feel like it would be boring (and not terribly realistic) if that were the case ALL the time. So sometimes I just want him to go crazy and give the girl everything he’s got. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I just read chapter two of ' Mia : Confessions of a Dickgirl ', and I really loved it, although the ending is a bit sad, with Mia's dad saying that she is no longer his daughter but beside that, the story is really good, anyway,  hope you're doing well and can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', oh and also, one other thing,  I might be busy during later on this week, but I don't know for sure yet, so I will let you know either tonight or tomorrow, anyway hope you're doing well and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. 

[GeorgeGlass]

The penultimate chapter (chapter 10) of “Multiversity” is back from beta and posted! Dipper 

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 I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I just read chapter two of ' Mia : Confessions of a Dickgirl ', and I really loved it, although the ending is a bit sad, with Mia's dad saying that she is no longer his daughter but beside that, the story is really good

Thanks! I felt like I had to include the bit about the dad because I wanted to show that Mia’s fears of being exposed aren’t just in her head—that there are real consequences to people finding out what she is. But we’ll be back to the fun stuff soon enough.

 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me again,  I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying,  I will be reading chapter 10 of 'Multiversy ',  and then I'll leave a comment on what I think of it soon, good luck with your stories, and can't wait for chapter two of ' The more, the Merrier ', and I also can't wait for the final chapter of ' The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', bye and have a good night. 

[Guest Star wars player 1]

Hi, it's me,  I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read chapter 10 of ' Multiversy ', and I really liked it, you know, in this chapter, Dipper thought of something that is true in both fiction and real life, that if you try to be a completely different person for someone...even for someone you really like...you're never going to be happy, I love that part of the chapter alot, oh and I guess the final chapter of ' Multiversy ' will be about Dipper and Pacifica, and I think Dipper is going to like it Anyway, I hope you're doing well and can't wait for the final chapter of 'Multiversy ', the second chapter of ' The more, the Merrier ', and the final chapter of ' The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant ', bye and have a nice day.