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The second half of “Clydeborg” is posted!

This story hasn’t attracted much attention, and I’m not sure why. But it’s not like I’ve ever been good at predicting what readers will find most appealing.

In other news, I expect to post chapter 4 of “The First Adam” on Monday, and I hope to send the next chapter of “Smooshed” off to beta by the middle of the coming week. This latest chapter is going to be longer than any of the preceding ones, because a lot happens in it.

Chapter 1 of “Secret Sash” will probably head off to beta some time next week, too. 

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The penultimate chapter of “The First Adam” is now available for your viewing pleasure.

Chapter 4: Eve and the Serpent

I’ve also just sent chapter 9 of “Smooshed” off to beta. Judging from many of the comments I’ve gotten on this story since the beginning, this is the chapter that a lot of readers have been waiting for.

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“Depravity Falls” has begun!

Summary: When thirteen-year-old Mabel and Dipper Pines return to Gravity Falls for another summer at the Mystery Shack, Mabel is looking forward to hanging with her friends and, at last, finding an epic summer romance. But it’s going to be more epic than she ever could have guessed.

Content Tags : 3Plus Anal Beast Contro DP Inc MC MF Minor1 Minor2 Oral Preg Solo

Chapter 1: And We’re Back!

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Well, even though I’ve got a lot going on IRL right now, I’ve still managed to get the next chapters of both “Into the Third Dimension” and “Smooshed” off to beta in recent days. Probably the next thing I’ll try to do is get chapter 2 of “Depravity Falls” off to beta, too. Also, I expect to post chapter 1 of “Secret Sash” (the “Rated F” sequel) this Wednesday.

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Hey, all! I’m back at home base and trying to get into the groove of things again. 

I’m hoping to send chapter 11 of “Smooshed” off to beta by the end of the week. Chapter 2 of “Secret Sash” will probably go to beta not long after that, and then chapter 3 of “Depravity Falls.” And I plan to post chapter 1 of “Liberatrix” (sequel to Miraculous story “Miss Match”) before the month is out. 

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I’ve got two things in beta right now: chapter 11 of “Smooshed,” and an original one-shot story called “First Flowers.” And I’m hoping to get chapter 2 of “Secret Sash” off to beta by the end of the week.

The first chapter of “Liberatrix” (which doesn’t have a beta) should be ready to post in the next couple of days.

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Well, I’ve gone and done it again, posting 2 new story chapters on the same day.

One is the next part of “Smooshed”: Chapter 11: Cheer Up.

The other is the first chapter (of three) of my Miraculous story “Liberatrix,” which is a sequel to “Miss Match.”

I’m going to go lie down now. :)

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Hello it’s me, I finally have time to leave this message, I’ve been very busy but first I wanted to ask if you are well. I have been doing great. I actually wanted to talk about something that just popped up in my head literally a few minutes ago. I found myself thinking about how some scenes or parts of a story cut away to another part of the story. For example in the MCU’s first movie ,Iron man 2008, there is a very interesting scene with Tony stark and a very attractive reporter. The woman asks tony if he had ever lost an hour of sleep in his life and he charmingly replies ‘I’d be prepared to lose a few with you.’ The woman’s smile fades and she looks at him with a cold look. However, the next scene shows her having sex with him on the bed and kissing him very passionately and wildly. It really is a very hot scene in the film :) it makes me wonder what happened in between that scene and the previous scene where we left off, where she was just staring at him coldly for that charming reply. Did she suddenly decide to go with his charm? Did she say something to him about it? Did they talk any further than what was shown? It’s those missing scenes where I’m just gnawing at my fingertips to find out what actually happened right after that interview scene. It’s like your story ‘Little Rose’ specifically  the scene where Opal told Evie to go help Rose enjoy being tied with Buddy after they had sex, and Randy started to get hard again just by watching Buddy have sex with Rose and then watching Evie and her making out and finally watching Evie suck Rose’s nipples. The next part of the story talked about how Randy and Opal got very horny watching this and had doggystyle sex because of this. But it just narrates that part, it doesn’t say what exactly Randy’s thoughts were immediately after seeing Evie kiss Rose’s nipples or what immediately happened right after that scene .It doesn’t explain what he said next or did next right after that very scene.  Did he turn to Opal and suggested they have doggystyle sex? Was it Opal who suggested it? Did Opal pull her painties down in front of Randy? What was Randy’s reaction to seeing a grown adult woman’s hot body for the first time in a long time? What did they say to each other right after the Evie and Rose nipple scene? What was their conversation like before they had sex? It’s like waiting for a timer to go off or a big scene to build up, the dialogue is what helps build up the hype and tension. You just wish to know what had they actually said before the next big scene happened. Of course I’m not saying that your stories don’t have dialogue or hype building or anything, I’m just stating how it feels to want to know what happened in between the two scenes. Anyway, I hope you are well and hope you have a great 4th of July tomorrow, I wish you good luck with your stories and hope you have a great night, bye and goodnight. :)

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Well, it looks like every forum post from the past week was lost in the server upgrade, including my response to SWP1’s post. And now I can’t remember what I wrote, except that IMO, that scene in Iron Man was simply meant to show that Tony Stark is a guy who gets what he wants. The how of it didn’t really matter.

Now, on to the good news: The latest chapters of “Secret Sash,” “Depravity Falls,” and “Smooshed” are all in beta. We’ll see which of those boomerangs comes back first. 

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The bad news: I had to send my laptop to the manufacturer for repair. God only knows when I’ll get it back.

The good news: Before I sent the laptop home to momma, I managed to get all my story files onto a flash drive, which means that I am finally able to post those story chapters:

Secret Sash, chapter 2: Silver-Fox Hunter

Depravity Falls, chapter 3: Two Steps Forward

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Hey, George,

Hope, your laptop will be fixed soon without any huge loss (I think, you also work on your laptop, don’t you?). Your stories are pretty cool and I am waiting new. Right now I am checking really old ones like “Single Mother Support Group” and, gosh, they are fucking hot. I wish you have more of them.

Also, I saw, that you don’t have any problems with the M/M content, especially if it’s little boys, like Toby from the story about mother with the depression (also really cool, one of the best your stories on my opinion). I wonder why don’t you have crossdressing content? For example, little slutty boys, who forced to wear cute pink dress and make up and than was forced to submit to the German shepherd like a little proper bitch? Or forced to fucked actual female dog in her doggy ass…

Also, still waiting new stories about your Slutty Disney+)

Wish you the best

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Okay, news first: Chapter 2 of “Liberatrix” is posted!

16 hours ago, Guest DoubleD said:

Hey, George,Hope, your laptop will be fixed soon without any huge loss (I think, you also work on your laptop, don’t you?).

Thanks, DoubleD (love the name, BTW). I do sometimes work remotely by using my laptop, so I’m stuck going into the office every day this week. 

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Your stories are pretty cool and I am waiting new.

Thanks! Not having my laptop hasn't slowed down my actual writing very much, because I do most of that on my phone (so I can dictate text). The bottlenecks are editing, which I find easier to do on a computer; and proofing, formatting, and posting, because I always do those things in Word. I'm experimenting with using the Word app on my phone, but it doesn't have the macros I use to format text for different sites. Right now, I’m using my wife’s computer to post chapters, but it doesn’t have my Word customizations, either.

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Right now I am checking really old ones like “Single Mother Support Group” and, gosh, they are fucking hot. I wish you have more of them.

I have tons of old stories, so my back catalog could keep you entertained for a good while if you’re finding stuff you like in there. I don’t know if you’ve read “Anything That Moves,” but judging by what you’ve written in this post, you might particularly like that one.

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Also, I saw, that you don’t have any problems with the M/M content, especially if it’s little boys, like Toby from the story about mother with the depression (also really cool, one of the best your stories on my opinion).

 

Thanks! That story doesn’t get a lot of love because it’s so dark, so I appreciate your saying that.

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I wonder why don’t you have crossdressing content? For example, little slutty boys, who forced to wear cute pink dress and make up and than was forced to submit to the German shepherd like a little proper bitch? Or forced to fucked actual female dog in her doggy ass…

I’ve just never been into crossdressing and forced feminization. My feeling is, the boy should already be feminine/girly enough that such things aren’t necessary for the older boy or man to want to violate him. Although the idea of a boy being forced to fuck a female dog is a bit interesting.

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Also, still waiting new stories about your Slutty Disney+)

As it happens, I think I’m pretty close to having a complete draft of “Waltney Plus.” I’ll probably be ready to send it off to beta by next week.

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Wish you the best

Same to you!

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Thanks, DoubleD (love the name, BTW). I do sometimes work remotely by using my laptop, so I’m stuck going into the office every day this week. 

Heh, it is Dark Darkness, by the way, but usually use DoubleD:D

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Thanks! Not having my laptop hasn't slowed down my actual writing very much, because I do most of that on my phone (so I can dictate text). The bottlenecks are editing, which I find easier to do on a computer; and proofing, formatting, and posting, because I always do those things in Word.

Wow, sounds great! You know, I really miss your updates in period of the beginning of July.

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I have tons of old stories, so my back catalog could keep you entertained for a good while if you’re finding stuff you like in there. I don’t know if you’ve read “Anything That Moves,” but judging by what you’ve written in this post, you might particularly like that one.

I have already read most of them, both originals and fanfics. Especially I like your The Loud House works because Link incest harem is really cool;) “My wish your command” had a huge potential for me but I am not really into the huge cocks fetish and body changing – I am talking about Patty and Selma part (for me it was such a shame because there is not a lot of porn stories with them). 
 

Speaking about “Anything that Moves”, yah, I already checked this and it was really hot. However, on my opinion, the chapters were pretty small – I would read it even twice or triple more words volume.

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Thanks! That story doesn’t get a lot of love because it’s so dark, so I appreciate your saying that.

Pff, people, on my opinion, just does not see your potential in this genre For example, I also like your Darla dilogy (especially because you made her chubby, like piggy) or story about boy with supernatural ability – he mind broke his family and married with bestiality kink girl.

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Although the idea of a boy being forced to fuck a female dog is a bit interesting.

There is a lot of combination you can produce with it: boy being forced to fuck a female dog, female dog being forced to fuck boy or girl with strapon (even gangbanging), female dog and boy/girl can be forced to fuck each other by double-sized dildo. Also, why should we stop only on dog? After your Adam story, for example, I imagined a special contact zoo, but people, especially children, are fucking well-trained animals, including puma, tigress, gorillas and maybe even elephants. Maybe these animals even wearing something slutty, like stockings, corsets and crotch less panties (just imagined big muscular gorilla in the pink tutu, lol).

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As it happens, I think I’m pretty close to having a complete draft of “Waltney Plus.” I’ll probably be ready to send it off to beta by next week.
 

Wow, that’s great! Finally, I really missed your stories from this universe. However, there is a problem – sometimes I can’t recognize reference of characters you use, so I would prefer original ones, like in Cartooniversary Competition Context but it is your choice, anyway)

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Hey on that note, ever thought of making more stuff in this universe but focusing on Cartoon Network, Nick or Netflix etc shows? I think it’ll be really fun, also gives us opportunity for more of this Freeuse universe content that’s so good

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Welcome to a special edition of “Good News, Bad News.” 

The good news: Chapter 12 of “Smooshed” has come back from beta.

The bad news: My astute beta for that story, Fairy Slayer, pointed out a glaring omission on my part, and now I have to decide what to do about it, so that chapter might be delayed a day or three.

The good news: Chapter 5 of “Into the Third Dimension” went off to beta last night.

The bad news: I don’t know when I’m going to get my laptop back. I was kind of hoping to have it back by the weekend, but we’ll see.

On 7/19/2022 at 1:17 PM, Guest DoubleD said:

Wow, that’s great! Finally, I really missed your stories from this universe. However, there is a problem – sometimes I can’t recognize reference of characters you use, so I would prefer original ones, like in Cartooniversary Competition Context but it is your choice, anyway)

Every TV show, movie, character, etc mentioned in the Waltney stories is a parody of some actual Disney thing. But Disney’s properties are so vast that probably not everyone can get every reference.

I’m afraid this problem will only get worse in “Waltney Plus.” In the two previous Waltney stories, i only referenced Disney and Pixar properties; in “Waltney Plus,” I’ll be Going There with Marvel, Lucasfilm, and National Geographic, too.

17 hours ago, Guest Devas 777 said:

Hey on that note, ever thought of making more stuff in this universe but focusing on Cartoon Network, Nick or Netflix etc shows? I think it’ll be really fun, also gives us opportunity for more of this Freeuse universe content that’s so good

So, Waltney’s competitors? That could make good fodder for a future story.

The main reason why I’ve focused on Disney versus the others is that Disney is a vast corporate empire with many kinds of products (movies, TV shows, theme parks, consumer products) and many acquired IPs (like Star Wars and Marvel).

Speaking of Nick and Netflix, I’ve just started outlining a Glitch Techs fic called “Retro.” Miko and Five accidentally release a bunch of glitches from Hinobi’s “adult games” of the ‘80s and ‘90s, and wackiness ensues. It’ll be a while before that story sees the light of day, though.

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19 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:

Welcome to a special edition of “Good News, Bad News.” 

The good news: Chapter 12 of “Smooshed” has come back from beta.

The bad news: My astute beta for that story, Fairy Slayer, pointed out a glaring omission on my part, and now I have to decide what to do about it, so that chapter might be delayed a day or three.

The good news: Chapter 5 of “Into the Third Dimension” went off to beta last night.

The bad news: I don’t know when I’m going to get my laptop back. I was kind of hoping to have it back by the weekend, but we’ll see.

Every TV show, movie, character, etc mentioned in the Waltney stories is a parody of some actual Disney thing. But Disney’s properties are so vast that probably not everyone can get every reference.

I’m afraid this problem will only get worse in “Waltney Plus.” In the two previous Waltney stories, i only referenced Disney and Pixar properties; in “Waltney Plus,” I’ll be Going There with Marvel, Lucasfilm, and National Geographic, too.

So, Waltney’s competitors? That could make good fodder for a future story.

The main reason why I’ve focused on Disney versus the others is that Disney is a vast corporate empire with many kinds of products (movies, TV shows, theme parks, consumer products) and many acquired IPs (like Star Wars and Marvel).

Speaking of Nick and Netflix, I’ve just started outlining a Glitch Techs fic called “Retro.” Miko and Five accidentally release a bunch of glitches from Hinobi’s “adult games” of the ‘80s and ‘90s, and wackiness ensues. It’ll be a while before that story sees the light of day, though.

Ah kk, that makes sense. Hmmm, maybe throwing them all into the same story to get to the same length, either way, I’m glad you’re interested 

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I’m pleased to announce that my laptop is back in my hands. This was a bit of a surprise, because the website said that it was still “Under repair.” But I’d rather they make that mistake than the opposite one.

I’m hoping to finish and post chapter 12 of “Smooshed” today or tomorrow. Also, I expect to send chapter 4 of “Depravity Falls” to beta by Monday. Chapter 3 of “Secret Sash” should be ready to go pretty soon after that. And “Waltney Plus” is getting close to beta-ready, too.

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So, the next chapters of “Depravity Falls” and “Secret Sash” are both in beta, along with chapter 5 of “Into the Third Dimension.” So what gets posted next will depend on what comes back first.

Jomahawk is the beta for both “Secret Sash” and “Third Dimension,” and he’s going to be the beta for “Waltney Plus” as well. So even if I have a complete draft of “Waltney Plus” by the end of the week, I’ll probably hold off on sending it to him until I hear back about the two chapters he has now.

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