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[GeorgeGlass]

At long last, I’ve managed to finish something: the next chapter of “Flesh.”

Chapter 8: Kim’s Deal

It’s the longest chapter yet, so between that and my recent inspiration problems, it’s no surprise that it took me a while to finish.

I might be starting to fall back into the groove. We’ll see.

Edited April 22, 2020 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how you are doing. I also heard how recently you’ve been lacking any inspiration for your stories but you made chapter 8 of ‘Flesh’ which is great to hear, I haven’t read it or the rest of the chapters but I probably will read sooner or later, it’s just that I’ve heard it’s a bit dark and I will see if it is something that is hot and not too dark  anyway, I was wondering, since you’ve only been slowly getting back into the ‘groove’ as you call, I guess that means you have plenty of time to think for now, so I was wondering, and this is merely a suggestion that I’ve made before but I just thought it would something perfect for you to work on while slowly trying to get back into your ‘groove’ That is the deleted scene I suggested of how Randy and Opal had sex in ‘Little Rose, now I don’t mean to offend you or push you to do anything, this is entirely up to you if you want to do it, I just thought this could be something fun to do and to help you get back into your ‘groove’ or pass the time of course  I think this would be something nice to do while you have plenty of time to think of how this scene would have happened, but again, the decision is yours to make, I am merely suggesting something to help you get back into your ‘Groove’  Anyway, I hope you are doing well, good luck with your stories and also, I read your list of chores and I thought it was a nice and funny list especially with the laundry, don’t worry you’ll get to it eventually, I believe it  Hope you have a good night as well.

[JayDee]

“How George got his Groove Back”

 

[GeorgeGlass]

SWP1, I’ll be blunt: “Flesh” is dark as all get-out. Maybe the darkest thing I’ve ever written, depending on your perspective. So it may not be your thing. 

To be blunt again: Still not feeling the Rose/Opal/etc thing. Sorry.

But you might like the original story that will probably be the next thing I’ll finish: a one-shot called “Nothing Beats Two Pair.” It’s a little slice-of-life incest story about two pairs of twins. 

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, and also, thank you for the heads up about ‘Flesh’, and also, it’s okay if your not feeling like doing the Rose/ Opal thing, and I am pretty excited for this story about twins, hope you’re well and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

I’ve just posted “Nothing Beats Two Pair.” The summary: Two sets of boy-girl twins enjoy a typical morning—of sex.

The idea was original, but it was such a good fit for the universe of “Regina” by Lady Freelove that I decided to tie it in to that. You don’t need to have read “Regina” to enjoy this story, though.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read ‘Nothing beats two pair’ and I really enjoyed it  I thought that the two younger twins were cute and funny in this story and I loved how they keep on wanting to join their older siblings, I thought that was really funny  this is another great story and I really enjoyed it, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Chapter 5 of “For the Price of One” is posted! A “sleepover” at Ramon’s place turns out to be as fun as you’d expect.

SWP1, thanks for the comments on “Nothing Beats Two Pair.” 

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I just read chapter 5 of ‘For the Price of One’ and I absolutely loved it!  I loved how Serena started doing a sexy dance for Ramon and then had Maya join her, I thought that was really hot and then when Ramon and Serena started sucking each of Maya’s nipples, that really excited me, and finally when Serena and Ramon taught Maya what a blowjob was, I thought that was really good and hot  And then, in the end, I was wondering what Ramon is going to ask Maya to do in the next chapter  anyway, I hope you’re doing well, let me know what you think of my review for the chapter when you can, and also, this very hot chapter of the really hot story proves, to me at least, that you’ve got your groove back  Good luck with your stories and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Made some halfway decent progress on stories this week. Also did some figuring out about how much more of each of my in-progress stories I’m going to be writing.

• For the Price of One: 2-3 chapters, depending on how long some of the scenes I’m planning end up being. (BTW, “2-3” may not be precise, but it’s still an improvement; before this week, I had no idea how much more of this story I was going to write.)
• Twist My Arm: 2 more chapters, plus a short epilogue
• Flesh: Also 2 more chapters, plus a somewhat longer epilogue
• Wishful: 2 more chapters. Chapter 6 may end up being the longest of them all, so it’s taking a while to write; it’s got two big sex scenes and a major plot revelation in between them.
• Keene’s College Weekend: 2 more chapters. Chapter 2 is going to be the longest by far, because it covers a full day, unlike chapters 1 and 3. So that one is also taking a while to write.

Once I finish one of these, the next thing I plan to start posting is a 3-chapter Craig of the Creek story titled “Creek Dreams.”

SWP1: Glad you liked chapter 5 of “For the Price of One.” I hope you’ll like the next one just as much.

[GeorgeGlass]

I’m pleased to say that I’ve just sent chapter 4 of “Twist My Arm” off to beta. So unless it needs major revisions, it should be posted soon.

[GeorgeGlass]

I was sad to learn today that The World’s Concubine, whose stories I have enjoyed, has died of coronavirus. I know she had some good friends who will miss her.

[GeorgeGlass]

Chapter 4 of “Twist My Arm” is posted! Vanzilla may be parked, but Lincoln’s in for quite a ride nonetheless.

[GeorgeGlass]

So, a few things:

--I think the next thing I’ll finish will be chapter 2 of “Keene’s College Weekend.” This chapter will be about three times as long as chapter 1. I’m hoping to send it off to beta by the weekend.

--I’ve also got a oneshot story titled “The Wrong Locker Room” that’s pretty close to finished. It’s a furry MMMMMM/b Minor1 dubcon story, so it’s probably not going to get any reviews here, but the folks at Inkbunny will probably like it.

--I’m starting to think about splitting the next chapter of “Wishful” into two chapters. The first sex scene is a bigger production than I had originally planned, so now I’m thinking of making the chapter about just that and ending with a bit of the plot twist/exhibition piece. The next chapter would have the rest of that and then the second sex scene.

--I got a whopping four reviews today from Lady Freelove -- a couple of them on stories that hadn't received any reviews until now. It seems she is a voracious reader as well as a fun writer. (I’m currently enjoying the first segment of her new piece, “Reina’s Story.”)

Edited May 19, 2020 by GeorgeGlass

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how you are doing. I also wanted to say a late happy Memorial Day  I have a question if you don’t mind, How are you doing with the next chapter of’For the Price of One’? I’m really excited to see what happens next, but no rush of course  Anyway, I hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope you have a good night  

[GeorgeGlass]

"For the Price of One" now has more than 20,000 Dragon Prints, so I guess I should keep writing it.  However, chapter 6 of that story is going to take a little longer to write than I expected, because it's ended up having two major scenes instead of one. 

Meanwhile, chapter 2 of "Keene's College Weekend" is in beta. It didn’t end up being three times as long as chapter 1 (which I had misremembered as being 2000 words and not 2700), but it’s certainly more than twice as long.

SWP1, hope you had a good Memorial Day weekend, too. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Here’s something I’ve been wondering lately: How would readers feel about fanfic that isn’t based on the fandom itself (ie, the actual source material), but on porn of that fandom?

I’m thinking about this because I have ideas for stories for both Lilo and Stitch and The Simpsons that would be based on R34 art of those fandoms, rather than on canon. I’ve only seen the first Lilo and Stitch movie -- not the sequel or the series -- so I wouldn’t be able to write a canon-compatible story about those characters. Likewise for The Simpsons, which I haven’t watched in over a decade. But these story ideas persist in my head despite that.

[JayDee]

It’s weird, I must have watched every episode of The Simpsons up until 2000 and I still like to think it’s a great show and I’ve seen loads, but that’s like… 20 years ago now and I’ve only seen an episode or two since. I hope it’s still good.

As for your idea – I don’t see why not! I’m sure folks who enjoy the R34would love the story just as well, and those who didn’t know the R34 would maybe just need an author’s note for where the canon differs. I based my story Corinthian Knot off a piece of R34 fanart of Lara Croft and a dog by Turria years ago, when I could still risk going to places like HF, and that story went down very well – DG just advised I needed the permission of the person who created the work and to credit them properly – http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/26628-the-question-i-couldnt-see-where-else-to-put-it/ 

Edit -heh, the entire subforum was created so I could ask that question in it.

Edited June 1, 2020 by JayDee

[GeorgeGlass]

“The Wrong Locker Room” is posted. A first-grade fox-boy is tricked into going into the older boys’ locker room. But what starts as a nightmare turns into a dream.

Yeah, I know, the "Little kid stumbles into the big kids' locker room" scenario has been done to death, but that's because it's so good.

[GeorgeGlass]

Chapter 6 of “For the Price of One” is posted. For those who have been following this story, this may be the chapter you’ve been waiting for.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 6 of ‘For The Price of One’ and I absolutely loved it!  I loved how Serena picked a movie with lots of sex in it to watch and how Maya was entranced by it. I also loved how Ramon finally had sex with Maya, I thought that was really hot and sweet and then when Serena came back after putting Maya to bed and had sex with Ramon on the table, I really loved that part  The next part where Maya has sex with Ramon in bed while Serena watches and has her first organism was very sweet and hot  I also loved how Ramon told Serena and Maya to sit in each other’s laps and spread their legs, I thought that really hot and clever since Ramon could have sex with them at the same time  And the ending was really exciting and left me wondering how much more fun Ramon is gonna have with Serena and Maya  This chapter was amazing and I loved it from start to finish, and I can’t wait to see more of this great story of yours  anyway, I hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night  

[GeorgeGlass]

So glad you enjoyed it, SWP1. One chapter still to come!

[GeorgeGlass]

The fifth and final chapter of “Twist My Arm” has gone off to beta. I hope to post it by the weekend. I’m also hoping to post chapter 6 of “Wishful” some time next week.

[GeorgeGlass]

“Twist My Arm” is now complete! I’ve just posted chapter 5, plus a short epilogue.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 5 of ‘Twist my Arm’ and I really loved it, I loved how when Lincoln and Ronnie Anne were alone in the beginning they had sex with each other three times, I thought that was really hot and sweet  The next part I absolutely loved was when Ronnie Anne devised a way for Lincoln to get back at Lori for threatening him throughout the story, when that part came I was like Happy! Lori’s gonna pay big time!  I also loved the part where Lincoln and Ronnie Anne have anal sex, I thought that was really hot  I absolutely loved this sex scene, I think it’s another one of your best ones  I also liked the end where Lori reveals to Lincoln that she knew what he and Ronnie Anne planned and apologized for threatening him throughout the story, I’m really glad she realized what she did was wrong , and then when she explains that the reason why she was so forcing of him was because she wanted him to experience love and romance as well as her, I thought this was a nice reason although I don’t think it entirely excuses her ‘Psycotic’ behavior. I’m glad that she and Lincoln made up though and also I loved the part where Bobby misunderstood her reaction to when they first began to have anal sex  And lastly, I loved the epilogue, I loved how Lincoln and Ronnie Anne agree that they didn’t have to call themselves a couple just because they had sex, they could decide whenever they wanted to do that themselves  and I loved the part where Ronnie Anne and Lincoln start talking to each other hotly, I thought that was great as well  So this story is definitely another great one from you and I really enjoyed it. I can’t wait to see your ‘Enter the Sandboy’ sequel as well  and I am also excited for the next chapter of ‘Wishful’ as well  And before I go, I have a questions if you don’t mind, 1. How are you doing with finding a name for your ‘Enter the Sandboy’ sequel? If you need help I can try to think of a few suggestions for you  2. How are you doing with the final chapter of ‘For the Price of One’ ? I really cannot wait to see what fun Ramon is gonna have with Serena and Maya  I am absolutely in love with this story and cannot wait to see what happens next  3. How are you doing with your idea for a ‘Big Hero 6’ story? If you want any more inspiration, there is a story called ‘You’re in DEEP trouble’ it is a really nice hot story involving Hiro and his aunt but this is just if you need more inspiration for your idea or not  anyway, I hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night