Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

[Snake_King]

Yes?

[Guest D-Strut]

I was asking what kind if "dark/evil" race I could make for my Isekai story. Here are some off hand.

Orc (considered savage and dangerous normally, devastating if theyre smart and could use magic. Plus it be funny to play off the racism of others thinking he cant read)

Drow (Very dark version of evils with several evil overlords from their history)

Vampire Lord (Not only is he magic, But all of the powers of a vampire, including obscure ones like shapeshifting and telepathy.)

Demon (just look up chernabog)

Or he could be just a human or a light race who's using his position as an "unbeatable hero" to get laid 9-5

[Praetor]

        If you want something human then consider a Drow if you can refrain from making tasteless South Park like jokes.  The Manotaur is also an option, it’s half man, half otaur.

[Guest D-Strut]

1 hour ago, Praetor said:

        If you want something human then consider a Drow if you can refrain from making tasteless South Park like jokes.  The Manotaur is also an option, it’s half man, half otaur.

Nice choices! I can already see ehy you picked the manotaur (for that giant DI-), but I must ask why the Drow?

[Praetor]

     It was more for a Gravity Falls reference.  I just think the Drow look super cool.

[Guest D-Strut]

2 hours ago, Praetor said:

     It was more for a Gravity Falls reference.  I just think the Drow look super cool.

Oh, from the DnD episode they made? Yeah thats my 3rd favorite episode.

And I agree, the Drow do look cool, especially when they have actually onyx or dark violet skin and not when their basically dark skinned elves. Plus it fits with the realm Im making which has 4 flavores of elves

Theres the standard, polished asshole elves.

The Drow who are bassically Loki but even more charasmatic and decietful.

The tree hugging, druid Twilight Elves that are probbably high off... something?

And the ancient Old Elves that mastered both science and magic, but destroyed themselves playing god.

[thebooblover]

On 05/08/2017 at 8:06 PM, Snake_King said:

I can see that working, although if it becomes a part of him permanently, then there’d really be no reason for him to keep the amulet would it?  Unless a bit of drama would have him trying to keep it hidden so that it doesn’t fall into the wrong hands.  After all, if that did fall into a bad dude’s hands, he’d use it to steal women left and right.  That would actually make it more of a story instead of just fapping material.  As they say, “Porn with a Plot.”

On 05/08/2017 at 7:49 PM, thebooblover said:

So this is what I wrote so far. Why’d you think, needs any fixing?

“After saving an old lady from a mugging, Terry’s younger brother Matt finds a strange amulet. When he gets home and puts it on, the amulet shows him a holographic projection of a woman that tells him where it came from, a planet where its people had superpowers.

The amulet explains that it was made by one the residents of the planet, who was planning to come to Earth and made the amulet to retain his powers since they don’t work on Earth. However, the amulet detected its creator’s evil intentions, and escaped to find someone who could use the powers contained in it for good, and chose Matt because it saw him helping the old lady.

During this conversation, Matt feels the power of the amulet coursing through him, but also notices a strange feeling in his crotch. He also notices the hologram’s very sizeable bust. When the amulet finishes its story, it talks about all the powers that Matt will now have.

She also reveals one more thing about the citizens of the planet: they’re very well-endowed, and when they get to Earth, their endowments disappear, and the amulet was not only supposed to make its creators powers work on Earth, but keep his endowments intact. Matt then undoes his pants and finds that indeed his dick is now much bigger than before.

Meanwhile, the creator of the amulet arrives on Earth, and seeks for it.”

 

[Snake_King]

10 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

So this is what I wrote so far. Why’d you think, needs any fixing?

“After saving an old lady from a mugging, Terry’s younger brother Matt finds a strange amulet. When he gets home and puts it on, the amulet shows him a holographic projection of a woman that tells him where it came from, a planet where its people had superpowers.

The amulet explains that it was made by one the residents of the planet, who was planning to come to Earth and made the amulet to retain his powers since they don’t work on Earth. However, the amulet detected its creator’s evil intentions, and escaped to find someone who could use the powers contained in it for good, and chose Matt because it saw him helping the old lady.

During this conversation, Matt feels the power of the amulet coursing through him, but also notices a strange feeling in his crotch. He also notices the hologram’s very sizeable bust. When the amulet finishes its story, it talks about all the powers that Matt will now have.

She also reveals one more thing about the citizens of the planet: they’re very well-endowed, and when they get to Earth, their endowments disappear, and the amulet was not only supposed to make its creators powers work on Earth, but keep his endowments intact. Matt then undoes his pants and finds that indeed his dick is now much bigger than before.

Meanwhile, the creator of the amulet arrives on Earth, and seeks for it.”

 

Sounds like a good set-up to me.  What would be the powers Matt has, aside from having a big dick?

[thebooblover]

2 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Sounds like a good set-up to me.  What would be the powers Matt has, aside from having a big dick?

I was thinking he could be like a mini-Superman (with Super strength, flying, resiliency, super speed, x-ray vision, super hearing, etc...)

[Snake_King]

3 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

I was thinking he could be like a mini-Superman (with Super strength, flying, resiliency, super speed, x-ray vision, super hearing, etc...)

Though obviously without the Kryptonite weakness.

Well, it seems you have your story set up, but who would be the harem?  Would they be characters from DC or OCs?

[thebooblover]

2 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Well, it seems you have your story set up, but who would be the harem?  Would they be characters from DC or OCs?

They would be characters from Batman Beyond.

[Snake_King]

2 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

They would be characters from Batman Beyond.

Like Max Gibson and other female characters? 

Would Terry still have Dana or would you have Matt steal her away from him and leave Terry alone?  Just asking because I want to be sure and I’m not big on cheating.

[thebooblover]

14 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Like Max Gibson and other female characters? 

 

Yes

14 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Would Terry still have Dana or would you have Matt steal her away from him and leave Terry alone?  Just asking because I want to be sure and I’m not big on cheating.

I would have Dana and Terry having broken up before the events of the story, but they would still be friends.

[Snake_King]

1 hour ago, thebooblover said:

I would have Dana and Terry having broken up before the events of the story, but they would still be friends.

 

Well, that’s good to know.  And I’m assuming that Terry would have a non-active role in this story?

Also, would the female characters become buxom and curvaceous due to Matt’s amulet or remain as is?

[thebooblover]

40 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Well, that’s good to know.  And I’m assuming that Terry would have a non-active role in this story?

 

What’d you mean?

43 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

Also, would the female characters become buxom and curvaceous due to Matt’s amulet or remain as is?

They would become buxom and cuvaceous due to the amulet.

[Snake_King]

37 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

What’d you mean?

 

I mean will Terry appear in it or not?

[thebooblover]

19 minutes ago, Snake_King said:

I mean will Terry appear in it or not?

He will appear

[Snake_King]

55 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

He will appear

Will he do anything or just be someone in the background?

[thebooblover]

11 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Will he do anything or just be someone in the background?

He will be someone in the background, but he will know about Matt being a superhero.

[Snake_King]

2 hours ago, thebooblover said:

He will be someone in the background, but he will know about Matt being a superhero.

Alright then.

[Rexfan12345]

What's up everyone?

[Snake_King]

14 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

What's up everyone?

Not much, you?

[Hide_My_Sins]

14 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

What's up everyone?

Still alive, still working on things.

[Rexfan12345]

That's good to hear and I'm doing good, just thought I'd drop by

[Hide_My_Sins]

Been watching an old anime called Galaxy Express 999. You could seriously make a shota story out of that.