Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

[Snake_King]

On ‎6‎/‎30‎/‎2017 at 8:59 PM, Praetor said:

     Bam.  It’s chapter 10.  It ultimately depends on what you feel like fapping to that day.  As the joke in Ted 2 goes, sometimes I want to watch the tongue go the other way.

I checked the link out, but saw multiple stories.  I looked at the chapter 10s of all of them, but none of them had the scene you described where those 2 guys are helped out by a half-breed succubus.  Although, the chapter 10 of the “Why Girls Love Horses” story was rather heartwarming.

[Praetor]

     I was pointing out Why Girls Love Horses.  The thing with the succubus is something I’m writing for an erotic fantasy epic under development, so it doesn’t exist yet.  On the topic, the Cockweasel stories on Literotica are also fun stories with an undersized lead.

[Snake_King]

28 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

I get you, I'm not much of a fan of Father and daughter realtionships either, but I thought I would make a exception for Ben, but I'm cool with anything you have in mind. I think a female Devlin would be at least less incest even though she is now part of the family.

Well, I suppose that if were me, I’d have Ben 10,000 be in a harem with more grown up versions of the various ladies he met over the multiple series due to some weird alien law that makes it so that he has to.  Perhaps add a subplot where Kenny gets into a harem of his own with his sister, female cousin, and a bunch of OCs.  At least that’s one idea.

[Snake_King]

4 minutes ago, Praetor said:

     I was pointing out Why Girls Love Horses.  The thing with the succubus is something I’m writing for an erotic fantasy epic under development, so it doesn’t exist yet.  On the topic, the Cockweasel stories on Literotica are also fun stories with an undersized lead.

Ah, I see.  Sorry for the misunderstanding.

[Snake_King]

Hey guys.  Got another crazy idea to discuss, if you’re all up for it.  And this is something that could be applied to any of the shows and movies we’ve discussed doing fics for.

Now, we’ve discussed the prospect of bimbofication in some stories, RexFan12345’s challenge being among those that come to mind, or at least the girls in our stories undergoing some kind of process where they become sexier, curvier, and in some cases dumber as well as slaves/submissives to the main lead.  However, one common thing among those types of stories is the girls getting that way because they stumbled onto some alien device or mystical mumbo jumbo that turns them into that by accident, or because the main guy/lead willingly turns them into that, or in general because of some outside force that makes that happen to them.

So, that got me thinking; what about a story where the girl knowingly and willingly has that done to herself?  No accident or trickery involved.  A story where she undergoes the bimbofication process or “sexy slave/submissive” process of her own free will and choice.

What do you guys think?

[Praetor]

     Why would a woman deliberately make herself a gratuitous sexual object and dumber?  Is Hermione just tired of being seen as a bookish snob and wants to be seen as a ‘real woman’ or does The Last Dragonbourne think that being a bimbo will net her more power and influence in a medieval world than having a lame shouting power will??  I just don’t see it happening.

[Snake_King]

You’re right.  It’s not something that would likely happen.  It was just a thought that had crossed my mind, wondering what might happen if that sort of thing took place.

The only possible reason that I could think of was maybe it was a temporary thing that she could come back from, and only do it with the man she’s with.  Just sort of a sexual role she walks in and out of in her private life.

[thebooblover]

So… Is anyone familiar with Batman Beyond?

Or with Tarot: Witch of the Black Rose?

[Snake_King]

3 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

So… Is anyone familiar with Batman Beyond?

Or with Tarot: Witch of the Black Rose?

I’m familiar with the former, but have only ever heard of the latter.  Why do you ask?  You got a crossover story in mind or something?

[thebooblover]

1 hour ago, Snake_King said:

I’m familiar with the former, but have only ever heard of the latter.  Why do you ask?  You got a crossover story in mind or something?

I have an idea for a Batman Beyond fic, and for a Harry Potter/Tarot crossover

[Snake_King]

Let's hear them then.

[thebooblover]

5 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Let's hear them then.

My idea for the Batman Beyond fic is that Terry’s younger brother Matt somehow gaining superpowers (either through an amulet given to him, or by coming in contact with a meteor), becoming well-endowed and getting a harem.

The idea for the Harry Potter/Tarot crossover fic is that Tarot and her sister Raven Hex are also the sisters of Harry’s mother Lily, and after she dies and Harry is sent to live with the Dursleys, they decide to keep an eye on him by moving next to them, both to make sure that he’s treated well, and because they’re planning to teach him about sex when he’s old enough, as part of the prophecy that states he will defeat Voldemort also states he will have a harem.

[Snake_King]

Sorry for the late response.

As for the Batman Beyond Fic, I think I lean more towards the mystical amulet rather than the meteor, as we’re kind of past the days were radiation can act as a metaphorical pixy dust that gives you superpowers.  Although, it does beg the question; upon wearing this amulet, would Matt only have his newly enormous schlong and harem-gaining abilities as long as he wears it, or would those things become a part of him permanently?

As for the HP/Tarot crossover, I’m okay with Tarot and her sister Raven Hex being Harry’s long-lost aunts as well as them keeping an eye on him so that he’s treated well.  However, I’m not so sure about the prophecy bit, as I tend to avoid things involving prophecies and future-telling.  The reason for that can best be explained in a scene from HP book 6, Half-Blood Prince. 

In that scene, Harry and Dumbledore are discussing how to defeat Voldemort, and Harry brings up the prophecy that Trelawney made of him and old Voldey one too many times before Dumbledore sets him straight; prophecies, even genuine ones given by genuine future-seers are still bullshit, because they are, at best, unreliable, and at worst, as was the case in that situation, they are self-fulfilling.  If Voldemort hadn’t heard the prophecy in the first place, he wouldn’t have felt the need to track down Harry and try to kill him and his family, and thus Harry wouldn’t have gotten his scar and would still have his parents, and both Harry and Voldemort wouldn’t have been on their path towards having to kill one another.

So, yeah, I’m not too big on prophecies myself because they tend to play out the same way a grand majority of the time.

[Snake_King]

Also, who would be in these harems?

[Guest Richie]

Has anyone got any smut fanfics that have girls with large tits and phat asses.

I've already read all of preators' work

Thanks

[Snake_King]

As to your question, Richie, I’m currently working on one for RexFan12345 involving Ben 10 and the characters of Avatar: The Last Airbender, though it’s a slow work in progress.

[Snake_King]

Hey guys, I found something that intrigued me recently.  It’s called the 7 Basic Plots, and it pretty much outlines all stories into 7 simple categories:

1. Overcoming the Monster – Hero learns of a great evil threatening the land, and sets out to destroy it.
2. Rags to Riches – Surrounded by dark forces who suppress and ridicule him, the Hero slowly blossoms into a mature figure who ultimately gets riches, a kingdom, and the perfect mate.
3. The Quest – Hero learns of a great MacGuffin that he desperately wants or needs to find, and sets out to find it, often with companions.
4. Voyage & Return – Hero heads off into a magic land with crazy rules, ultimately triumphs over the madness and returns home far more mature than when he set out.
5. Comedy – Hero and Heroine are destined to get together, but a dark force is preventing them from doing so; the story conspires to make the dark force repent, and suddenly the Hero and Heroine are free to get together. This is part of a cascade of effects that shows everyone for who they really are, and allows two or more other relationships to correctly form.
6. Tragedy – The flip side of the Overcoming the Monster plot. Our protagonist character is the Villain, but we get to watch him slowly spiral down into darkness before he's finally defeated, freeing the land from his evil influence.
7. Rebirth – As with the Tragedy plot, but our protagonist manages to realize his error before it's too late, and becomes good again to avoid inevitable defeat.

A lot of stories contain one or more of these plots, but they can each tell a story of their own.  Which ones do you guys like or prefer above the others?  Do you think it’s right to try and simplify stories like this?

[Guest Richie]

2 hours ago, Snake_King said:

Hey guys, I found something that intrigued me recently.  It’s called the 7 Basic Plots, and it pretty much outlines all stories into 7 simple categories:

1. Overcoming the Monster – Hero learns of a great evil threatening the land, and sets out to destroy it.
2. Rags to Riches – Surrounded by dark forces who suppress and ridicule him, the Hero slowly blossoms into a mature figure who ultimately gets riches, a kingdom, and the perfect mate.
3. The Quest – Hero learns of a great MacGuffin that he desperately wants or needs to find, and sets out to find it, often with companions.
4. Voyage & Return – Hero heads off into a magic land with crazy rules, ultimately triumphs over the madness and returns home far more mature than when he set out.
5. Comedy – Hero and Heroine are destined to get together, but a dark force is preventing them from doing so; the story conspires to make the dark force repent, and suddenly the Hero and Heroine are free to get together. This is part of a cascade of effects that shows everyone for who they really are, and allows two or more other relationships to correctly form.
6. Tragedy – The flip side of the Overcoming the Monster plot. Our protagonist character is the Villain, but we get to watch him slowly spiral down into darkness before he's finally defeated, freeing the land from his evil influence.
7. Rebirth – As with the Tragedy plot, but our protagonist manages to realize his error before it's too late, and becomes good again to avoid inevitable defeat.

A lot of stories contain one or more of these plots, but they can each tell a story of their own.  Which ones do you guys like or prefer above the others?  Do you think it’s right to try and simplify stories like this?

I personally like rags to riches because for me its the most interesting to read

[thebooblover]

On 18/07/2017 at 10:53 AM, Snake_King said:

As for the Batman Beyond Fic, I think I lean more towards the mystical amulet rather than the meteor, as we’re kind of past the days were radiation can act as a metaphorical pixy dust that gives you superpowers.  Although, it does beg the question; upon wearing this amulet, would Matt only have his newly enormous schlong and harem-gaining abilities as long as he wears it, or would those things become a part of him permanently?

It would become a part of him permanently.

On 18/07/2017 at 10:53 AM, Snake_King said:

As for the HP/Tarot crossover, I’m okay with Tarot and her sister Raven Hex being Harry’s long-lost aunts as well as them keeping an eye on him so that he’s treated well.  However, I’m not so sure about the prophecy bit, as I tend to avoid things involving prophecies and future-telling.  The reason for that can best be explained in a scene from HP book 6, Half-Blood Prince. 

In that scene, Harry and Dumbledore are discussing how to defeat Voldemort, and Harry brings up the prophecy that Trelawney made of him and old Voldey one too many times before Dumbledore sets him straight; prophecies, even genuine ones given by genuine future-seers are still bullshit, because they are, at best, unreliable, and at worst, as was the case in that situation, they are self-fulfilling.  If Voldemort hadn’t heard the prophecy in the first place, he wouldn’t have felt the need to track down Harry and try to kill him and his family, and thus Harry wouldn’t have gotten his scar and would still have his parents, and both Harry and Voldemort wouldn’t have been on their path towards having to kill one another.

How about this: instead of a prophecy, he goes through a magical puberty that makes him well-endowed. He also inherits a special spellbook from his mother that will help him with seducing women.

[Snake_King]

5 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

It would become a part of him permanently.

I can see that working, although if it becomes a part of him permanently, then there’d really be no reason for him to keep the amulet would it?  Unless a bit of drama would have him trying to keep it hidden so that it doesn’t fall into the wrong hands.  After all, if that did fall into a bad dude’s hands, he’d use it to steal women left and right.  That would actually make it more of a story instead of just fapping material.  As they say, “Porn with a Plot.”

8 minutes ago, thebooblover said:

How about this: instead of a prophecy, he goes through a magical puberty that makes him well-endowed. He also inherits a special spellbook from his mother that will help him with seducing women.

Magical puberty can work, from what I can imagine.  However, one might question why Harry’s mother had a spell book that would help him seduce women.  Did she, Tarrot and Raven have a secret plan for having Harry to start a harem, and if so, for what reason?  How about, instead of the book being an inheritance from his mother, Harry, Tarrot and Raven go on an adventure where they find it in a dark wizard’s lair and discover it.  From there, they take it with them to discern what it does, and with the help of Ginny and Hermione, they discover what it does to girls and women and Harry has a good time with it, while trying to keep it hidden as well as keep himself from being tempted to use it for the wrong reasons.  That sound good?

[thebooblover]

On 05/08/2017 at 8:06 PM, Snake_King said:

I can see that working, although if it becomes a part of him permanently, then there’d really be no reason for him to keep the amulet would it?  Unless a bit of drama would have him trying to keep it hidden so that it doesn’t fall into the wrong hands.  After all, if that did fall into a bad dude’s hands, he’d use it to steal women left and right.  That would actually make it more of a story instead of just fapping material.  As they say, “Porn with a Plot.”

I was gonna suggest that maybe while those two are permanent, his powers wouldn’t be so he would need to keep the amulet to have them, but that probably wouldn’t make sense, so this idea is better.

On 05/08/2017 at 8:06 PM, Snake_King said:

Magical puberty can work, from what I can imagine.  However, one might question why Harry’s mother had a spell book that would help him seduce women.  Did she, Tarrot and Raven have a secret plan for having Harry to start a harem, and if so, for what reason?  How about, instead of the book being an inheritance from his mother, Harry, Tarrot and Raven go on an adventure where they find it in a dark wizard’s lair and discover it.  From there, they take it with them to discern what it does, and with the help of Ginny and Hermione, they discover what it does to girls and women and Harry has a good time with it, while trying to keep it hidden as well as keep himself from being tempted to use it for the wrong reasons.  That sound good?

Sounds good.

[thebooblover]

On 05/08/2017 at 8:06 PM, Snake_King said:

However, one might question why Harry’s mother had a spell book that would help him seduce women.  Did she, Tarrot and Raven have a secret plan for having Harry to start a harem, and if so, for what reason? 

Maybe because if he gets one, he will somehow obtain the power to bring Lily back to life? Is that good?

[Snake_King]

Not sure about that. It would imply that Lily somehow knew that her death was coming and made preparations for when that happened. Although, that kind of undoes a couple of things from canon:

1. As Dumbledore said, no spell can bring back the dead.
2. Lily willingly gave her life for her son with no expectations for survival or coming back. This act triggered some ancient magic that protected Harry from Voldemort’s magic. Harry doing the same thing in “Deathly Hallows” (with the comeback brought on by the resurrection stone) caused the same magic to activate and protect all of Harry’s friends and loved ones, which is why Voldemort’s and the Death Eater’s spells had less of an effect on the good guys during the Battle of Hogwarts.

 I think the idea of them finding the spell book and experimenting with it makes more sense, but that's just me.

[Rexfan12345]

So any progress on that Ben 10 x Avatar harem fic? Also, do you like to hear a idea? 

[Snake_King]

2 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

So any progress on that Ben 10 x Avatar harem fic? Also, do you like to hear a idea? 

I’ve made a little progress on the first lemon, specifically at the point where Ben takes Fem!Aang and Katara’s virginities (I’m not overlooking that, unlike some people).

And sure, what’s the idea?