DirtyAngel Posted November 20, 2015 Report Posted November 20, 2015 (edited) Just look at it this way Bronxie, he'll be easier to catch when he limps Edited November 20, 2015 by DirtyAngel ChrissyQuinn 1 Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 20, 2015 Author Report Posted November 20, 2015 Just look at it this way Bronxie, he'll be easier to catch when he limps lol that's horrible! Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 20, 2015 Report Posted November 20, 2015 beware angry Pixies ChrissyQuinn 1 Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 20, 2015 Author Report Posted November 20, 2015 beware angry Pixies Yup, that exactly. Quote
BronxWench Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 (edited) Wait, you're maiming my elf??? Edited November 21, 2015 by BronxWench Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Posted November 21, 2015 Wait, you're maiming my elf??? O.O... *Makes fire proof tent and hides in it* Yes! But it serves a purpose! Quote
BronxWench Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 Yes, it does. It makes you an appetizer. I don't want my pretty little psychopath to be maimed. Maim the sneaky Druid instead! Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Posted November 21, 2015 What if I maim both? Quote
BronxWench Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 As long as the Druid is worse off. Yorwrath's been through enough already, poor bastard. Besides, you don't want to make me cry., I'm a very unattractive crier. Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 RELEASE THE MOUNTAIN TROLL! ahhhh, what do you mean the butterflies ate the mountain troll?!? Fine, :sigh: release the butterflies... BronxWench and ChrissyQuinn 2 Quote
KoKoa_B Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 So... no one likes Islwyn but me...? *takes the druid and sallow elf with her* Fine... we'll be... somewhere with that heavy incense and intoxicating wine if you need us... So, I won't lie; the last chapter felt somewhat of a filler but I actually enjoyed reading about Val and Yorwrath sparring. He proved a great point; he's the one with the most experience with a sword. And sorry, BW but I also enjoyed that stabbing! Not like it really hurt him, though... The "unicorn" was indeed a surprise unicorn, like you told us in SB! Hmm... did we take a little something from The Last Unicorn...? I loved that movie! Anyway; this is great stuff and you guys are hilarious! BronxWench and ChrissyQuinn 2 Quote
Tahn Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 Wait...it might be the lack of sleep talking, but what the hell just happened? ChrissyQuinn 1 Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Posted November 21, 2015 (edited) Well tahn, someone died Edited November 21, 2015 by ChrissyQuinn KoKoa_B 1 Quote
BronxWench Posted November 21, 2015 Report Posted November 21, 2015 KoKoa, I didn't mind Val stabbing Yorwrath's arm to get him to let go. That was nothing. It's the potential maiming that has me twitchy, because I can't see Yorwrath being able to go on and remain sane if he's rendered useless. Contrary to the SB silliness last night, he's a creature of physical prowess, a swordsman and warrior. Take away his ability to defend those he loves, like Aneurin, and those to whom he's loyal, like his people, and he has nothing. Not even the promise made by Caoilfionn that he will share Valentina with Aneurin and Islwyn would be enough. He'd be without purpose, and that's the kind of maiming that's far worse than any physical wound. And there's a strong streak of nobility in Yorwrath. He knew what would happen if he shed a tear for his wife when Aeron killed her, but he did it anyway. He's willing to die for his brother. And he had the chance to make trouble at the claiming, and didn't, nor did he touch Valentina when he slept beside her and his brother. So, if anything, he's becoming more of a tragic figure than a villain, although I wouldn't say the same thing about Islwyn, who hides his motivation far too well for me to trust him. Sadly, he's the underdog I'm rooting for, and I have the worst feeling that I'll be crying in the next chapter or so. KoKoa_B 1 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 22, 2015 Report Posted November 22, 2015 Elves are such wussies, see now if you had a pixie, you wouldn't have had a problem with goblins...just saying... Quote
Guest Dailara Posted November 22, 2015 Report Posted November 22, 2015 What does mi hefyd mean ?Was it explained but I somehow missed it ? Quote
BronxWench Posted November 22, 2015 Report Posted November 22, 2015 What does mi hefyd mean ?Was it explained but I somehow missed it ? It's Welsh for "me, too." Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 22, 2015 Report Posted November 22, 2015 uh oh...now Yorwrath and Val have to fight to the death to see who gets to kill Islwyn Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 22, 2015 Author Report Posted November 22, 2015 BW is right Also what he says to her earlier when he throws her back behind Grwn "gwaedlyd gwirion dy'ne" is him calling her a bloody stupid human. I put those two phrases in without explanation because next chapter she finally gets to learn some "elven" phrases Also welcome to the mad house dailara KoKoa_B 1 Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 24, 2015 Author Report Posted November 24, 2015 I plan on updating tonight ... at sometime. Quote
Tahn Posted November 24, 2015 Report Posted November 24, 2015 Well tahn, someone died Yep, just what I thought happened. But as a Dragon, I refuse to give up the faith that he's alive. REFUSE!!! ChrissyQuinn 1 Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 24, 2015 Author Report Posted November 24, 2015 Yep, just what I thought happened. But as a Dragon, I refuse to give up the faith that he's alive. REFUSE!!! It's okay You're entitled to your belief mwhaha. Quote
BronxWench Posted November 24, 2015 Report Posted November 24, 2015 Chapter 10 Anyone who was not already aware of what an unattractive crier I am is surely aware of it now. I've been sniffling on and off all day, having made the mistake of reading this chapter far too early. Having said all that, the relationship between Valentina and Yorwrath has gotten even more complicated, and I'm not at all sure how I feel about that. On the one hand, they are developing a grudging respect, which is good, but I still have such a sinking feeling about Yorwrath's future. I know Valentina will do what she can, but it may not be enough, and he's far from safe. For a supposed villain, he's gotten too damned interesting, and I'm going to worry. And the obligatory cliffhanger, which will hopefully be Aneurin and Caiolfionn riding to the rescue, Islwyn be damned. Duplicitous druid... And now I'll go off and cry a little more, just because. ChrissyQuinn 1 Quote
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