Praetor's Discussion Thread

[Praetor]

     New chapter of Spellbound.  I don’t know why these are coming easier to me but I am starting to fear I am compromising quality for upload rate.  This is one of my longer chapters and has one of the highest concentrate lemon in a chapter.  It’s also dabbles in spectator sex and dom/sub, something I usually avoid.  Let me know what you think.  Still looking at Mad Love, Omniharem  or another Spellbound for the next upload.

[Strange_idea]

Another Idea for the big hero six story, inslired by this chapter: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12504210/148/

And the hentai coming 'spiderman aunt cumming'.

What if baymax had a 'gynoid' mode.for sex ed and release? Hiro's hyper-hormonal tate after the accident could cause baymax to reformat itself to this mode and give hiro his first time… but only makes things worse because new baymax is WAY to casual about offering release or sexual facts and acts with the same matter of fact tone as the old baymax's medical commentary (such as waking him up by gently.releicing his morningwood or entering the shower in the middle of him releasing tension to offer help). Hiro, despite being in a hormone nightmare, is still trying to have get over it and go back to his life, so he really doesn't appreciate it, or baymax commenting on his attractions. Which has the side effect of putting such thoughts in the minds of the girls around him. She's less there for sex and more to get everone hot an bothered and encourage antics. This is actually deliberate, as gynoid baymax is trying to find consentual parters for hiro and possibly encourage a relationship. Which ties nicely into honey and gogo's scheme.

Plus, it would lead to hiro riding around the city of a busty robo-girl.

 

Something like these:

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRqMQvkMl0nJ10Ad2_oUgndkiY9RSHi2DsxbMkT5TFqEMuErZHDIw

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQkR_JSp0yp8FQ9QBP-BPXZGb109OJfIA0e3jZy-jvoeGfj62R_

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRUkIoKumqW7MrlnPogBlQufI_-2OfmKi7p17IHEr4aS85lWB5shw

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/16163019/

 

But mostly like this i think, just baymax themed. https://www.deviantart.com/laughingvulcan/art/You-wanna-try-out-our-tank-345522703

Edited August 7, 2018 by Strange_idea

[Guest Sad]

Charmcaster/Gwen/sunny for omniharem then turbine/rojos gang then Elena/Eunice then frightwig then like a orgy chapter with everybody

[Guest Sad]

Esther/Kai chapter

[Praetor]

     Great ideas, I will consider them as that story develops.  I was about halfway done with the next omniharem, a threesome with Sandra and Lily, but couldn’t decide on a tone so it needs to be edited for consistency.  I’ve prewritten a Charmcaster and Gwen sequence but nothing for Sunny yet.

[Jwsponky]

At the risk of being presumptuous, perhaps Gwen could stretch the truth, saying that intimacy with Ben has increased her mana reserves so Charmcaster and Sunny sleep with Ben to get a similar benefit? Or perhaps they just wanted to, but are appreciative of the ‘excuse’?

[Guest Sad]

Esther/Kai chapter could be camping in the woods or something 

Rojos Azul Amarillo and Ben could be sleeping from that last chapter and turbine tries and fails to rob them then they break her in like they did rojo 

Eunice/Elena idk robot stuff 

Frightwig could have a Halloween chapter

[Guest Sad]

For spellbound

Blackfire/Starfire Raven chapter

Argent/jinx/Raven goth kinky threesome

 

[Praetor]

     Got it.  Ben and Gwen are going to fight Charmcaster and go to a mirror world like in Doctor Strange, where they defeat her.  Gwen will attribute her victory to Ben’s cock and cum and take him in a public place but still out of sight, enticing Charmcaster to join her.  May have Sunny present already or work her in another chapter.  Before that, I am still on the Sandra/Lily chapter.  Trying to pick a tone, with them being flirty and seductive out the gate or if the mom has reservations that they need to dispel first.  I am trying not to write another Spellbound next since I am still waiting on feedback from the last chapter but I know it will likely be with Starfire, Black Fire and maybe Raven. 

[Strange_idea]

Okay. I read the chapter and it was mostly good, lot of great elements and I like the hint of a setup, but I feel having language dominate BB would have been more interesting....  Or at least wanting\planning\vowing too as she immediately undermined her reason for joining. Plus, using her mask for that was going a bit far I think... I know enough about luchador culture to know that getting unmasked is enough to end a career. What happened here is.... WAY beyond that. And since kayfabe is vital to any wrestler it's a little like a slap in the face from what's been a mostly considerate lover until now. I understand what you were going for, it's just very jarring and feels out of character for the characters they both were and are under your writing.

 

The descriptive writing, distinct transformation, unique if a little fast motive and especially the ring were all great to read though.

 

[Praetor]

     All very valid points.  I was thinking within the context of it being a simulation, Beast Boy not understanding the significance of the mask and kink value.  I was also trying to establish them as switches, being into both domination and submission in equal measure.

[Strange_idea]

I do understand, and that's fair. However, beast Boy did not come across as submissive. Maybe you could end it with her making one last dominant gesture which he submits too? Also maybe you could have her establish a little pride by not accepting the mask?

Still good otherwise though

Edited August 12, 2018 by Strange_idea

[Guest Random_Fanum]

Why not an idea.

if you’re tired of adding girls, why not do a miniarureorgy with the girls currently together. With Halloween on the way in a few months, I suggest a Halloween party with each girls in a slutty version of a costume.witn the main character going through them one by one.

since it is still small I suggest Spellbound, but you can use Omniharem if you want.

speaking of orgies have you made any progress on the ending of Lust and Pixie Duat

[Praetor]

     Woah, and blow clean past Labour Day and Columbus Day?  Can’t forget the Assumption of Mary and German Unity Day either.  My plan for Halloween is the Haunted House challenge Booblover laid out years ago but I lost the file and haven’t summoned up the will to rewrite any of it yet.  I was also considering a series inspired by the Nazi Zombies minigame from Call of Duty and various JayDee type horror land fics that would be more along the lines of Mad Love in terms of depravity and tone for Halloween but don’t know if there’s an audience for that.  I was also did a demo for the Booblover’s Resident Evil VR challenge for the Halloween season but it’s definitely a WIP right now. 

     I don’t tire of adding girls, if anything I tire of the leads because they’re the only ones that don’t change between chapters.  I got a few pages on Lust and Pixie Dust but I lost the outline I had for it so I have to figure out where I’ve been and where I am going on that one.  Orgies are the things I kind of dread as they approach because of how much effort has to go into them.  Interim orgies are something I always plan but never find time to write because they’re very taxing projects.  I was supposed to have one for Spellbound by now and have started on one for Naruko’s Pact.  I don’t know if I am going to add another girl for Spellbound or an orgy or at least threesome next.  May compromise and do Blackfire with Raven and Starfire in attendance.  I have also been inspired by the new Shazam trailer to take up a Booblover inspired challenge based on that hero so I can have that out and established by the time the movie actually drops.

[Guest Milky milky]

O you have a audience for the deprived right here!

[Strange_idea]

I've an idea! If you tire of the lead, then might I suggest some girl\girl chapters? A bit basic, I know, but you can take it further. Have the girls, and possibly beast Boy, experimenting with their powers in sex, or have flashback chapters to old loves and first times to bring in other male leads without breaking the premise, or have raven swap genders with herself and BB for an experiment. A bit of character development would also work, but I don't think that's what you are going for.

Edited August 14, 2018 by Strange_idea

[Praetor]

     Audience for the Deprived?  No, the Dark Souls novelization is something else.  The only thing more tedious than a harem story is same sex sex.  Mad respect for slash fiction writers, pronouns can get very confusing.  Also, the huge honking dicks are a defining characteristic of my fics, often times the protagonist is a secondary character and his or her monster cock is the real star.  I don’t know what I would do without them.  I usually work around the monotony by trying to inject character depth and emotional attachments to the plots so they’re not just interchangeable blank slates and each encounter feels unique but this is getting difficult as I write more fics that get longer.  The tv trope is Power Perversion Potential and something I seek out each time, I don’t get the point of writing superhero lemons if they don’t feature the powers in some way.  I was considering gender bends for one off encounters or something.  I want to start adding temporary futas tot he bigger harems as time goes on, either through magic or strap ons, but that’s pending.  In my Resident Evil demo, I am considering making it a more traditional erotic story where the male characters still get some action in and not just the hero, who still builds a harem over time, but we’ll see how that turns out.

     It’s mostly in the prewriting for other unreleased fics that I have a problem with redundant leads because Ben 10 is in like 4 of them and Omniharem is already my longest fic.  So I am looking for different heroes besides maybe using a younger teen Ben for one of them.  I know the challenges call for an 11 year old but that ventures deep into squick territory and I don’t know how popular straight shota considering how unpopular and illegal pedophilia is.  Which is why I am considering Link for a Soul Calibur harem fic since that’s coming out in a couple months too and he already crossed over with that game.  If anyone has any other boy heroes they think deserve a harem, or heck, futas need love too, just chime in with that.  I was also considering, almost as a troll move, writing some kind of harem story with a substantially older male lead as an inversion of my usual stuff.  Someone like Old Snake or Jay Garrick Flash.

[Strange_idea]

Would you be open to luffy? From one peice?

Or

Ranma

Pit, kid icarus

Jaune arc

Ash ketchum?

 

Any of these okay?

 

[Guest Random_Fan]

Maybe for the Shazaam challenge just age Billy up. Instead of a kid, he’a In college and visiting a museum for a project. The museum gets attacked by a magic villain who wants an artifact that is actually a piece of the rock of eternity. Billy selflessly, and somewhat recklessly, helps and the rock senses this, teleporting him to Shazam.

I like the Link/Soul Caliber idea

if you do Ranma, you could expand into the Street Fighter.

with Pit use either cap on babes or the girls of Smash Bros.

other ideas.

Danny Phantom – not enough stories

Ron Stoppable – main man needs it

spider-man – after all he’s gone through he deserves a harem.

Lincoln Loud – aged up of course

wolverine -same reason as Spider-Man 

 

 

[Praetor]

     I am averse to Luffy for many reasons.  He’s supposed to be an asexual hero but aside from that, I think he’s a lame character with an eye gouging design who is poorly drawn.  One Piece as a whole I find to be excessively long, aimless, over indulges in angst, asinine, and just not a good show.  Also, with shapeshifting abilities, there is no reason for him to always sport the massive muscled donkey dick my fics thrive on and he could adjust its size as desired.  Ranma is an odd one, I wouldn’t know how to factor in the whole gender swap thing except for changing it entirely to he fell into the Lake of the Drowned Horse, although crossing it over with Street Fighter is interesting because I was considering a Fighting Games harem story of some kind but can’t figure out how best to get them all in the same setting or a proper hero who can mesh with all the lore.  I don’t know anything about Kid Icarus or RWBY.  Ash is interesting but I don’t think a good fit for anything I am writing.

     Shazam is kind of done for me because he’s 15 in the latest rendition of his origins.  Which is young enough to appeal to the straight shota crowd but not in the squick area.  I also think there’s room for social commentary on sex among teens since it’s becoming a prevalent issue.  For point of fact, in Japan, the age of consent is technically as low as 14, because it’s tiered with the age of the partner until  a certain point.  The whole 18 or older absolute minimum is actually only legally enforced in the United States in California (of all places) and there’s a lot of Romeo and Juliet type clauses such as in Texas that blur the age of consent age lines.  Anyways, I am considering the Phantom harem story Booblover laid out earlier so there’s that.  I already have a barely started harem story with a dude named Ron and I didn’t watch Kim Possible so I don’t have the knowledge of the lore to make it involving, I also don’t know if there’s a lot of room for a harem without crossing it over.  I want to do something with Spider-Man since he’s one of my favourites but don’t know which route to take.  Wolverine I am not too keen on just because I don’t think I can make it interesting.  I don’t know anything about a Lincoln Loud.

[Strange_idea]

Wth ramna, since you've said you don't want to write same sex pairings, you could use his girl form toget around the main character getting repetetive. Have him either get groped or come close to getting haremised himself or maybe give her girl form an itch that needs scratching in secret, then juxtapose it against his 'man amongst men' philosophy. Based on the recent terry bogard designs, maybe ranma, terry and ryu have all gotten the curse and are in a tournament or competion. The prize is a cure, first prize cure for your female form, after that, cure for your male form. In the mean time they form harems of the girls from their respective series and, i dunno, win them back and fourth.

Possibly other men from the series also get the curse but are eliminated and stuck, becoming more prizes. Or that each loss makes the girl form more curvaceous and sensetive (allowing for the more curvaceous ramna you see in art) making it more likely they'll submit.

I disagree on one peice, finding it to be a great source of pathos, comdey, drama and bathos that thrives on setup and repeat delivery. Each character has a clear, stated goal as soon as they are introduced, with half of them getting special setup in advance, and the overall series goal is simple. Race to raftel, find 'one peice', have the greatest adventure ever and declare yourself pirate king. And the art style eveloved considerably as it went along, check out the highr definition luffy from the more rectent ones.. Besides, half these characters would need tweaking to work here, and we have a number of excuses why luffy would change his mind.

Plus, he's not a shapeshifter, he's a rubber man, which means he could start big and would be able to make it even bigger at a moments notice, handy for giant girls or just absurdly high libidos

I do respect it if you continue not to want to do it though.

I did not suggest phantom because of the age thing, but if he's on the table i have a few challenges with him if you'd like to take a look:

 

Edited August 16, 2018 by Strange_idea

[Snake_King]

Well, if want a Spider-Man challenge, I’ve got two, if you’re interested:

 

 

[Strange_idea]

I thought of some others, would you be open too:

Aang

Megaman

Fry, futurama

Link

Bob, reeboot

Ataru (for a more comedic one), uresei yatsura

Shulk, xenoblade

Ratchet, ratchet and clank

Adrien (miraculous ladybug).... aged up if nessecary

Goliath, gargoyles

Disney's alladdin

Disney's hercules

Mario

Major nelson, i dream of jeanie

Johnny, hotel transylvania with more monster girls

Kimihito kuruso, daily life with monster girls

 

Also, are you taking prominent wecomics as eligable?

 

I also have some groups of girls i'd like to see a harem for, but no real male in mind

 

Edited August 16, 2018 by Strange_idea

[Snake_King]

Honestly, I would like to see more harem fics with Aang, and I actually came up with a challenge for it as well, one with plenty of girls/women to choose from.
 

 

[Praetor]

     The Spider-Man Korra story is frankly too good a premise and well thought out idea to waste on erotica.  Doing so would limit the audience to adults looking for smut fiction while it could appeal to significantly larger population.  One challenge was issued based on the Spectacular Spider-man series that I liked but I am already overstretched.  I plan on doing the Booblover’s Avatar challenge in the distant future, which will cover Aang.  Megaman is interesting but I don’t have a sufficiently sci fi setting for him.  Fry could be interesting, he already got huge buffs from a gas station sandwhich before.  I want to do the Link/Soul Calibur crossover but I also want to do a more traditional Legend of Zelda erotic romp, possibly with harem.  Or at least a one chapter story with Urbosa or series of Gerudo Link accidentally trapping people.  Don’t know who half of those characters are.  Adrian is okay but for superhero cartoons, I thought about using a grown up She-Zow.  For those who missed the obscure Canadian/Australian cartoon that only got one season, it’s about a guy (even named Guy although it should realistically be pronounced closer to Gi) who finds a magic ring that belonged to his aunt.  Uttering the words of power (You Go Girl) grants him the power and costume of SheZow, who his aunt was the latest incarnation of.  So he’s a crossdressing superhero.  I was thinking of doing some kind of harem of magical girls like the Sailor Senshi or RWBY or something.

     If I do a monster girls type fic, the hero I am leaning towards would be an older Dipper Pines.  I didn’t care much for Alladdan- put the scimitars away people, it’s just an opinion.  Hercules could be good, but the setting would likely be ancient Greece or mythology, where I would rather just use an OC who is a demigod descendant of Priapus.  Google him if you don’t know, it’s amusing.  I’d rather use Luigi because he’s funnier and usually overshadowed by Mario.  Major Nelson?  That’s pretty niche.  The only reason I even know about that show is the porn parody with Lisa Ann and because I had a desk job a while ago and only three channels on the TV there, one of which was an old timer network that showed I Dream of Jeanne.  What webcomics are you thinking about?  What are the groups of women you had in mind?