Guest Guest Posted May 19, 2015 Report Share Posted May 19, 2015 Hey, I know this isn't exactly what the topic is, but the story was partially inspired by some of the stories started from this challenge, so some people might like reading it. It's pretty good thus far. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11257082/1/Icha-Icha-Escort Did you write this story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hellhound Posted May 19, 2015 Report Share Posted May 19, 2015 Did you write this story? Me? Nah, I'm not quite at that level of writing lemons. The ones I do tend to feel a tad...lacking. I just stumbled upon it and thought of this challenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 19, 2015 Report Share Posted May 19, 2015 Hey, I know this isn't exactly what the topic is, but the story was partially inspired by some of the stories started from this challenge, so some people might like reading it. It's pretty good thus far. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11257082/1/Icha-Icha-Escort Thanks for informing me of this story Hellhound, I appreciate it. Did you write this story? It is written by XXX-23, a fanfiction author that I actually specifically periodically check his stories due to him producing consistent pretty good quality lemons of ideas no one else has done about Naruko. Me? Nah, I'm not quite at that level of writing lemons. The ones I do tend to feel a tad...lacking. I just stumbled upon it and thought of this challenge. I wasn't really expecting you to be XXX-23 though it could have been possible. As for thinking of this challenge XXX-23 says that he was inspired by a story that basically inspired this challenge in the first place and the second story he mentions actually was born on this challenge thread so that would make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark Annon Posted May 21, 2015 Report Share Posted May 21, 2015 This works extremely well for the slut Kushina story though it's not exactly her fucking a young man https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10706980/1/Monkey-Fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest A Posted May 22, 2015 Report Share Posted May 22, 2015 Someones made a new chapter on Milf Sensei. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105416&chapter=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 22, 2015 Report Share Posted May 22, 2015 Someones made a new chapter on Milf Sensei. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600105416&chapter=3 Oops, I thought it was JordoZ who did it but instead it was Natsumi Uzuki though she(?) is called XXX-23 on fanfiction.net. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 22, 2015 Report Share Posted May 22, 2015 Hope it carries on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Soulvanguard Posted May 24, 2015 Report Share Posted May 24, 2015 Wow, tons of nice ideas and stories for Kushina here makes me Also rather impressed with quality of writing by Jordoz, just really exceptional:) Well anyway somewhat new around here in these parts and I know this is technically not right area for doing so but I was wondering if any of you know of anyone willing to take a stab at a somewhat dark lemon challenge in regards to Fate Stay Night series. I tried posting it up as new forum topic Fate Stay Night Dark Lemon challenge featuring Rin, but while I had many views not so much replys (sigh). Is there a better way I might go around trying to find someone to take a stab at it or does anyone know or anyone who might be interested. Please let me know I would appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 24, 2015 Report Share Posted May 24, 2015 Wow, tons of nice ideas and stories for Kushina here makes me Also rather impressed with quality of writing by Jordoz, just really exceptional:) Well anyway somewhat new around here in these parts and I know this is technically not right area for doing so but I was wondering if any of you know of anyone willing to take a stab at a somewhat dark lemon challenge in regards to Fate Stay Night series. I tried posting it up as new forum topic Fate Stay Night Dark Lemon challenge featuring Rin, but while I had many views not so much replys (sigh). Is there a better way I might go around trying to find someone to take a stab at it or does anyone know or anyone who might be interested. Please let me know I would appreciate it. I have seen your challenge within the Anime thread area and I feel I must point out two things (the first has already been mentioned in your challenge thread already). Unfortunately, people just don't really seem to be doing any Fate/Stay Night or Nasuverse stories here.The second is that even if they did is that it takes weeks on average for an prospective author to take up the challenge and there have been challenges that have lain dormant for about a year before someone decides to do one too (I have actually seen it happen). Now if you want people to have more interest in your challenge you could do what I did and post links to pictures of the various characters to inspire people to write what you want. I am saddened that their are few Nasuverese lemon fictions because I enjoy them and as people on this thread know I also have tendency to enjoy NTR so I would be interested in reading someone writing your challenge (though I don't like the idea of the character sharing the girls with other guys it just seems off to me when I read stuff like that). I have made a challenge that has had zero replies in the Anime section called "Sekirei Netorare" so it isn't like I do not know how you feel either Soulvanguard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Soulvanguard Posted May 24, 2015 Report Share Posted May 24, 2015 (Sigh) I had a feeling it might be something along those lines. Your idea with Sekirei Netorare sounds pretty nice as well. Anyway thanks for the advice, I guess all I can do is cast my net and hope to real in a few fish so to speak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neon Posted May 24, 2015 Report Share Posted May 24, 2015 Ok I'm just gonna throw some ideas around: It seems as though a potential stumbling block of this fic is the fact that Minato or Naruto can't find out about Kushina's promiscuity because if they do those kids are dead meat, but what if Minato actually approved of Kushina's behaviour? Maybe he realises hes too busy with work and cannot satisfy Kushina how he wants to and feels his wife deserves some pleasure in her life. It might suit Minato's laidback personality and it allows Kushina/those kids to do what they want freely without the fear of getting caught. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordoZ Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 So SasuKushi fan posted another lemon earlier. And I find myself disappointed again. He's picked three characters in a row that just don't make good main characters for sex fics. Hell, out of the three of Sasuke, Mizuki and Kabuto only Mizuki doesn't come off as so asexual. The sex was abrupt, plain and just gosh disappointing. There was Kushina thinking about how she wanted rough, hard sex but I only saw plain old boring sex nothing about rough or anything in there. Just another mediocre piece that falls woefully short of what we need. He needs better dialogue, more description, pace it out a bit more and make better build ups. He definitely needs a decent beta or atleast a sounding board who won't just tell him everything he wants to hear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 I just read some of that story, why does SasuKushiFan use the most unappealing guys possible? Ergh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 Such a shame you don't enjoy your own writing JordoZ, because I guarantee everyone else in this thread does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neon Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 @ JordoZ I've noticed in your stories and in the OP that you like Kushina wearing slutty outfits, is that something that most kunoichi do in your universe or is Kushina one of the few that does it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 I just read some of that story, why does SasuKushiFan use the most unappealing guys possible? Ergh. I agree. His stories have potential though he invariably gets the male characters wrong. This most recent one was the worst I do not believe Kabuto can even conceive of actually being in any sort of relationship except possibly with Orochimaru. even then though it would not matter to someone I do not belive can even comprehend physical pleasure based on both canon and fanon. Such a shame you don't enjoy your own writing JordoZ, because I guarantee everyone else in this thread does. Agreed, though I understand him since I have a similar issue with my own writing even if it is nowhere even remotely as good. @ JordoZ I've noticed in your stories and in the OP that you like Kushina wearing slutty outfits, is that something that most kunoichi do in your universe or is Kushina one of the few that does it? I do not know about JordoZ but I believe all of the kunoichi should dress somewhat similarly. For a kunoichi distracting your opponents in battle cann only be a good thing allowing them to be killed (even if their enemies know that is what they are doing provocatively dressed beautiful women are still provocatively-dressed beautiful women and men are still men and can't not be distracted even if only subconciously). Also it would draw too much attention to Kushina if she was the only one in my opinion dressing like that. However even if the other kunoichi dress similarly it doesn't mean that they are sluts it just means that they are using their appearances to their own advantage. So SasuKushi fan posted another lemon earlier. And I find myself disappointed again. He's picked three characters in a row that just don't make good main characters for sex fics. Hell, out of the three of Sasuke, Mizuki and Kabuto only Mizuki doesn't come off as so asexual. The sex was abrupt, plain and just gosh disappointing. There was Kushina thinking about how she wanted rough, hard sex but I only saw plain old boring sex nothing about rough or anything in there. Just another mediocre piece that falls woefully short of what we need. He needs better dialogue, more description, pace it out a bit more and make better build ups. He definitely needs a decent beta or atleast a sounding board who won't just tell him everything he wants to hear. Agreed on all accounts. Sasuke was heavily out of character (even though this is fanfiction) and the relationship between him and Kushina was too rushed in my opinion. In the Jokuro stories it may be quick but it doesn't feel rushed at all to me. Mizuki was the best of the three in that I do not really believe it was rushed all that much and it does seem like something he would jump at if the oppurtunity was available. Kabuto...no, just no words pretty much fail at describing this situation. Kabuto shows absolutely no inclination for physical pleasures at all in canon the only thing he even somewhat enjoys is mental ones. Besides Kabuto would not put his position as a spy at risk by pulling such a freaking stupid stunt on the Hokage's wife (waaaaayyyy too much risk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 27, 2015 Report Share Posted May 27, 2015 I want more discussion on this, even if fics aren't being made yet its good to throw around ideas and scenarios. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordoZ Posted May 28, 2015 Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2709152 - Everytime I see this gif, I think of a student defeating his sensei and the prize being whatever he 'wants' if he beats her, and after defeating her here he drags her up by the hair dick reading to be forced down her throat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 28, 2015 Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2709152 - Everytime I see this gif, I think of a student defeating his sensei and the prize being whatever he 'wants' if he beats her, and after defeating her here he drags her up by the hair dick reading to be forced down her throat. You get all that from just that little gif? lol I guess if she had three students one would be pulling her out of the water by her hair, the second one would be forcibly pulling down her trousers and the third would rip open her top, all against her will. Then she gets a dick forced in her mouth, a dick forced in her ass and a dick forced in her pussy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 28, 2015 Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 Wonder how genin would be able to beat Kushina though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 28, 2015 Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 Wonder how genin would be able to beat Kushina though. Cunning mostly. Have the genin set up the field beforehand and cheating outrageously. Also the genin could be a genius in something Kushina was weak to like genjutsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 28, 2015 Report Share Posted May 28, 2015 I wonder what kind of scenario could be made from Kushina having sex with a group of teens she doesn't know, with her students it would make sense because she knows them and would develop a relationship with them. But her fucking kids thats shes never met from another village for example is equally as hot. Then she goes back home to her husband and son after having her pussy rammed by teens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted May 29, 2015 Report Share Posted May 29, 2015 I want to see Kushina get banged by a kid in a scenario like this. https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/3438530 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sneaky666 Posted June 1, 2015 Report Share Posted June 1, 2015 Hello, I was working on my fic. Chapter 4 of "the Kitsune and the Dragon" (very fun to write and long (27.000 words and it's missing a lemon and a scene with Sona)) and a interlude) 4 chapter of a new fic very dark A one-shot very dark, disgusting, where team 7 is captured by Gatô at Nami. And among all this, I wanted to start the second chapter of "The unforgettable mission of Kushina". I wrote draft, but i don't know the position of the character. I have two idea, Kushina trap an innocent Natsumi for her to join the harem of Guro. Or a slutty Natsumi fall in love with Guro, she dominates her mother and acts as a obedient whore with Guro. Opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted June 1, 2015 Report Share Posted June 1, 2015 Hello, I was working on my fic. Chapter 4 of "the Kitsune and the Dragon" (very fun to write and long (27.000 words and it's missing a lemon and a scene with Sona)) and a interlude) 4 chapter of a new fic very dark A one-shot very dark, disgusting, where team 7 is captured by Gatô at Nami. And among all this, I wanted to start the second chapter of "The unforgettable mission of Kushina". I wrote draft, but i don't know the position of the character. I have two idea, Kushina trap an innocent Natsumi for her to join the harem of Guro. Or a slutty Natsumi fall in love with Guro, she dominates her mother and acts as a obedient whore with Guro. Opinion? The second idea sounds pretty good. Corrupting an innocent girl has been done many times, but it's rare to see the tables turned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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