Guest Guest Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Here something I wrote for another challenge you might be abole to use it for this if you wont it. Naruko's breasts were exposed as her top was bunched on her stomach while her skirtwas lifted up and her panties pulled down past her butt cheeks. The woman moaned loudly as Raikage alternated between spanking and kneading her firm cheeks like dough Kushina watched the pair and licked their lips as Naruko joined her in pleasing the Raikage. Kushina watched with pride as her own daughter had revealed herself to be a slutNaruko and was now in love with Raikage And as Naruko moaned under the ministrations of Raikage, an idea popped inside Kushina's head. "Mother," Naruko panted as she flipped over and saw her own mother kneel beside her head. Pleasure shot through Naruko's body as Kushina kissed Raikage and began to tongue wrestle him.With a huge smile on her face, the blonde lifted her left leg and bent her knee, allowingRaikage's left hand better access to her soppy cunt. "We both serve you now, Raikage sama. And you are our master, let us please you,"Kushina panted as Raikage broke off the kiss and began to suckle on her tits while the Uzumaki ranher hands across his back and shoulders. "Very well," Raikage agreed as he laid on his back. Without hesitation, Naruko laid onthe ground, planted her heaving breasts against Raikage's legs before wrapping her ruby red lipsaround the head of Raikage's cock. The blonde then flicked her tongue at the head in rapidsuccession before wrapping her lips around it and slurping the member with her tongue. A groanescaped Raikage's lips as Naruko began to dutifully bob her head up and down, slidingRaikage's member in and out of her mouth. What she lacked in technique and skill, Naruko made up with zeal and speed. While Naruko pleasured Raikage, Kushina was on all fours beside her daughter.The woman was moaning and bucking her hips backwards as Raikage pumped his fingers in and outof her stretched and dripping sex. However, the woman did turn her head to the side and watched her daughter bob her head erratically on Raikage's dick. Just after a few glances,Kushina knew she had an daunting task before her. She had to train Naruko to be a great cocksucker like herself. That way, both she and her daughter could share the Raikage's bed and most importantly, please him.Thus, Kushina reluctantly pulled herself away from Raikage's fingers and knelt down beside her daughter."Watch me carefully," Kushina spoke as she pulled Naruko's head off of Raikage's member. "Yes mother," Naruko panted as she licked her lips and watched her mother grip the baseof Raikage's member with her right hand as she slipped her lips around his member. She then slowly slid her lips all the way down to the base while her hand continued to slowly caress andpump the base of his member. Then Kushina pulled her head up back to the tip of Raikage's member, where she quickly bobbed her head a few centimeters up and down each time in rapidsuccession, concentrating on the head, even tilting her own head to make sure that pressure wasbeing applied to all sides of Raikage's member so that he could receive maximum pleasure. Naruko watched and licked her lips and saw the pleasure on Raikage's face. Soon, Naruko was wishing that she were as skilled as her mother. The blonde then made a decision to request thatKushina train her for her new role. And when she heard Raikage moan in pleasure as Kushina continued to pleasure the first couple of inches of Raikage's member, bobbing her head slowlyup and down, filling the room with very audible slurping sounds, Naruko began to pump her own fingers in and out of her sex, hoping that she would be as skilled as her mother when it came topleasuring Raikage. "On your back and spread your legs, you worthless tramp," Kushina ordered Naruko once Raikage's member had reached full erection. Naruko did as her mother commanded, knowingthat she would be the recipient of her mother's work. "Take her, master. Take my slutty daughter. Claim her like you claimed me," Kushina moaned "Take me, master. Take me," Naruko moaned as the Raikage rose up and rammed his member into Naruko 's quivering cunt. The blonde screamed as she pulled herself up so that shewas seated on the floor with her legs spread. Her arms were behind to keep her balance as Raikage slipped his hands under her legs and gripped her buttocks for support while he pumpedhis member in and out of Naruko . "Fuck the slut! Fuck her hard!" Kushina spoke as she pressed her tits against Raikage'sback and began to trail her hands up and down his manly chest. She planted small wet kisses onhis neck and even nibbled on his ear while whispering her wishes for her own daughter into hisear, bringing a smile to Raikage's already happy face. And here some two other ideas that never whent any where Uzumaki Kushina,still steky and sore from the night befor awoke carful not to wake the somewhat obest Kumo ambassador the fire lord saw fit to grant her to for the night in a prvite deal help fortify the bonds betwen their viliges Uzumaki Kushina, couldn't help but smile proudly as she Naruko's watched head bobbing on the lap of the fat fire ambassador as she disocesd a deal that would put Uzumaki clan to a better use than killing tools well for its daughters anyway. If someone wonts to use them.
Guest Guest Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 On the last to they where orgentl made for my Kushina rode to hakaga challenge so if you wont to use them can you please post it there as well. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59572-kushinas-roed-to-hokage-outline/on a side not dont post a challenge if you have been working for 13 hours straght
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 To tell you the truth, I'm terrible at lemons. I didn't realise how bad I was until I started writing, I find build up so much easier, I'm bad at describing things aswell. My imagination level is zero lol.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 @JordoZ Could you write just the start of the scene that I'm going to write, just to get me started? It would only have to be a few sentences or a paragraph I think I could take over from there. Also could you post a pic of what kind of thongs you want Kushina to wear?
Guest A Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Also what do you think of this filler kid? I know you said you wanted OCs but he is obscure enough to pass as an OC I think, I could imagine a kid who looks like this banging Kushina. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Suiu
JordoZ Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 http://i.walmartimages.com/i/p/00/64/60/07/06/0064600706854_500X500.jpg - Like this only different colors, or hell the underwear in the pics I sent before will do.And it would be bes just to stick to Oc's since you can make their personalities fit what you need. __________ Kushina Uzumaki was scowling. It had nothing to do with failing her mission, nor did she lose a fight. As she trekked into the hotel a days journey away from Konoha, her scowl was caused by he aching burn in her loins. She was horny as hell. Her husband was too soft in bed and never had enough time to actually even have sex, as disappointing as it was these days. She could still feel he rough demanding grope that young teen she had met earlier had given her ass and the leer he gave her. Despite her annoying, Kushina managed a small smirk, the kid had no idea how close he had come to owning her all night long.A shame for both her and him. __________ That's all I can think off at the moment, since this is your story not mine.
Guest A Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Well I've written part of the story down, tell me what you think. __________ Kushina’s pussy was aching with anticipation, on one hand she was somewhat nervous about what she was going to do but on the other she wanted it so badly. “Hey babe, how about we take these clothes off?” Shiro said, not waiting for an answer as he removed her orange jacket, revealing her giant breasts in her black lace bra. Ryota meanwhile starts to pull down her short, tight spandex shorts revealing her black lace thong, swallowed by her giant ass. “Woah” he said to himself, “what an ass” as he uses both of his hands to grab onto the large posterior. Shiro now having removed her bra starts to fondle her massive tits, Kushina starts to moan at her breasts and ass being played with. “You like this babe?” Shiro said. Kushina only moans in response, her face blushing. “I bet you’ll like this even more.” He pulls her into a deep kiss, their tongues wrestling with each other. Ryota meanwhile has pulled her thong down. ‘I can’t wait for this, I wanna fuck this busty bitch’ he thinks to himself. He then pulls out his 10 inch cock and goes full force inside her. Kushina and Shiro’s kiss ended abruptly as Kushina is absolutely shocked by the impact, it came out of nowhere. It felt like electricity was coursing though her body as the massive cock fucked her. Shiro then pulled out his cock, an even bigger 12 inches. “Here, why don’t you have a taste of my cock as well, Kushina?” He then proceeded to ram his cock right to the back of Kushina’s throat; tears were forming in her eyes. She thought she was going to be suffocated by his monstrous cock. “God damn your pussy is so tight” Ryota said. “Loosen it up a bit, its starting to hurt.” “Deep throat it you slut, fucking pack it in your mouth.” Shiro said, as his hand pushed hard on the back of her head. Kushina honestly thought she was going to die from this. Not only was she being suffocated by the massive cock in her mouth, but the cock in her pussy made her feel like she was being broken in two. “Ahh here it comes!” Ryota said as he came inside her at full force. Thankfully for Kushina, Shiro also came from her mouth. After they both released her she dropped to the floor. “Let’s get this bitch on the bed; I’m not finished with her yet.” Shiro said. __________ Yeah I know its crappy, I think I'll improve as time goes on.
JordoZ Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Well, it's rushed looking with no build up. The description is lacking as hell. There's like nothing to indicate pleasure for Kushina, and the fucking lasts like two or three lines before they came. All in all, it could use alot of work.
Guest A Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 I'm shitty at lemons and the problem was I didn't know how to build it up, I didn't know how to get them in the hotel room so I just started the story with them fucking. I think I'm pretty good at building up non-sex scenes but other than that I have no imagination.
JordoZ Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Well, while waiting for a room one of the guys could come up to her and compliment her on how sexy her outfit is. And from there, Kushina could start teasing them about it and take it from there.
Guest A Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 And then after that they'd immediately go in to their room for sex?
Guest A Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Also I assume that everyone Kushina has sex with would do it in the raw, would you want Kushina to get pregnant or not?
Guest Guest Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 you know the longevity of the Uzumaki clan can be something that wealthy nobals would like to breed into there bloodlines so how abut a mission to be inpregnated by yhe fire lord or his son?
Guest Guest Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Pretty sure Minato or Naruto would kill anyone who impregnated Kushina though.
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 Pretty sure Minato or Naruto would kill anyone who impregnated Kushina though. That is only if they found out. Kushina is a Uzumaki seal master so she could put a seal on herself that would make her children look like her (basically she would change their appearance while within the womb). If she did this Minato and Naruto would not suspect anything because as far they would know those kids simply took after their mom more than Minato and all the while the father would be different.
Guest Guest Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 who says they have to know or better yet after Minato death a trmatised and broken Kushina could be sent a repsentive from the capatol with orders to return with him baby Naruto could go with them to be raised to be loyal servent to the Fire Lord or a femNaruto could be raied to be a futher concubine.
Guest Guest Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 beside you could just say that ninja are raised sense birth to follow the will of there superers and depending on how sadistic you wont to wright this there mission could be to watch and make sure no one interferes.
Guest Guest Posted May 10, 2015 Report Posted May 10, 2015 I don't think something that AU would really work for this type of story, its better if its just like canon except with Kushina married to Minato and having Naruto as her rebellious 15/16 year old son. The only difference would be her slutting it around with teens and kids. I agree with what A said aswell, I'd like to see a mini scenario with Kushina being the worlds most embarrasing mother to Naruto in public. Do you think you could write a mini story like that JordoZ?
Guest NON Posted May 11, 2015 Report Posted May 11, 2015 Its a shame you don't like your own writing JordoZ, because everyone else does. lol
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 11, 2015 Report Posted May 11, 2015 Its a shame you don't like your own writing JordoZ, because everyone else does. lol Agreed NON, in fact I mentioned something similar to what you just said to him on the first thread I think(?). However, as I also mentioned in my next post when he explained it to me I sympathize because I am similar in not being able to enjoy my own writing. I can come up with good ideas (or at least I think they are and evidently quite a few people agree to some extent), I have pretty good grammer, and I almost always spell things correctly (I won my school's spelling bee in sixth grade) but even with all of this my writing doesn't flow to me unless it is a short story and my lemons are even worse. Admittedly, though I have seen worse by other people but like JordoZ I derive no pleasure from my own writing though my own imagination can.
Guest sneaky666 Posted May 14, 2015 Report Posted May 14, 2015 TheWarlockofChaos, To answer your question on Chapter 2 of 'The unforgettable escort mission of Kushina', I have not written a single word, but I'm almost the entire progress of the chapter in my mind and on my notes. And as you have guessed in your review, Kuroka, Grayfia, Yasaka, Serafall ... will be the harem that will be huge. For now I am concentrating on this fic I have the history leading up after Riser. I already wrote Chapter 2 in French and I am now writing Chapter 3. Of those, good night gentlemen.
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 14, 2015 Report Posted May 14, 2015 TheWarlockofChaos, To answer your question on Chapter 2 of 'The unforgettable escort mission of Kushina', I have not written a single word, but I'm almost the entire progress of the chapter in my mind and on my notes. And as you have guessed in your review, Kuroka, Grayfia, Yasaka, Serafall ... will be the harem that will be huge. For now I am concentrating on this fic I have the history leading up after Riser. I already wrote Chapter 2 in French and I am now writing Chapter 3. Of those, good night gentlemen. Thanks for answering Sneaky666. It is nice to hear that you know where you want to go on the second chapter. Also it is nice to hear that I was right about some of the girls in Issei's harem for "Kitsune and the Dragon" I look forward to seeing what you do.
Guest Helper Posted May 17, 2015 Report Posted May 17, 2015 Hey A, maybe this fanfic might give you the inpiration, especially chapter 2 and 3 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11144057/1/An-Uzumaki-Vacation I hope that this doenst go against some rule....
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 17, 2015 Report Posted May 17, 2015 Hey A, maybe this fanfic might give you the inpiration, especially chapter 2 and 3 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11144057/1/An-Uzumaki-Vacation I hope that this doenst go against some rule.... I agree, this story really would help him with the scenario he is looking for. I had already read this story but it did not occur to me that it possessed what A needed rill you linked to it great idea, Helper. P.S. I don't think it is against the rules to link to a story on another site since I have seen it before without being cracked down upon (this may just be a case of the mods being kind to us though). However it is against the rules to attempt to give someone your own copy of a story that has been deleted which this has not been.
Guest Hellhound Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 Hey, I know this isn't exactly what the topic is, but the story was partially inspired by some of the stories started from this challenge, so some people might like reading it. It's pretty good thus far. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11257082/1/Icha-Icha-Escort
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