Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I have just read though your stories and I've got some questions about them: Has Kushina fucked Naruto in the past in any of them, or are they strictly no-incest stories? What would Kushina's relationship be like with her family after shes been fucked by loads of kids/teens? Also what outfits would you like to see Kushina in? Pics would be good. These questions are more for if the story becomes a long term thing with multiple chapters instead of just a oneshot.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 As for the Hinata thing....well maybe something along the lines of Naruto is already cheating on Hinata, their whirlwind romance burned out for him and he sort of just lost his passion for her, which leads to Hinata feeling lonely with Naruto at work constantly and unknown to her giving her sister or Tenten or Ino or something a pounding. Making her fall back into her docile ways which makes it easy for the sons friends to coerce her into bed.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 As for the Hinata thing....well maybe something along the lines of Naruto is already cheating on Hinata, their whirlwind romance burned out for him and he sort of just lost his passion for her, which leads to Hinata feeling lonely with Naruto at work constantly and unknown to her giving her sister or Tenten or Ino or something a pounding. Making her fall back into her docile ways which makes it easy for the sons friends to coerce her into bed. That sounds cool, if you could post some ideas in that thread it would be great. I wonder what Hinata's personality would have to be like in the story to get her to do that.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Yeah, there was no incest in them. I'd think her relationship with them would be more distant, her excuse being something like she's training her 'apprentice'. http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs28/f/2008/058/e/5/Kushina_by_jehanaruto.jpg - This could be one, an outfit from her teens except now she's much more volutpuous, the shorts clinging to her full rear and zipper being zipped down to show her deep well of cleavage. Maybe some thong straps riding up her hips added in for emphasis. http://thumbnail.image.rakuten.co.jp/@0_mall/yu-pi-/cabinet/03294964/03296495/cosplay/img59499421.jpg - Possible a very short Kimono like this, except much more revealing due to Kushina's more volutptuous body. Heck, even tight spandex shorts and a plain Jonin vest that can't zip up all the way due to her large breasts. I personally would prefer it if she wore sexy lacy underwear aswell, the bra for instance barely being able to contain her big tits.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Could you give pics on the underwear? If Kushina had thong straps showing she really would look like a slut lol, I wonder what her family would think of her dressing like that. Could you show pics of what you want her body to look like aswell? In the hotspring story Kushina mentions "She was eternally grateful her son had inherited her genes when it came to that particular area of his body." So shes at least seen his cock. Has she ever had incest thoughts about Naruto or would she find that kind of thing gross in these stories?
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 You used this pic http://fc06.devianta..._jehanaruto.jpg for the story with Jokuro, Ringo and Zongo didn't you?
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I was going for more Naruto going through basically his teenage rebellion phase and having a mother everyone wants to fuck wouldn't help at all. So in these sets he'd distanced himself from his parents a bit and Kushina returned to active Kunoichi duty. And the thong strap thing would be more like when she's alone with her student or something to tease him more. http://fc06.devianta..._jehanaruto.jpg for the story with Jokuro, Ringo and Zongo didn't you? Err, this ink just redirects me to this page.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Body kinda like this - http://s13.postimg.org/jdzmchmev/image_p17357q2ru11621jnh1mmul441liiccd7e72e91717.jpg Although, an ass like this would be good aswell to go with those tits. http://static.brazzers.com/scenes/8280/preview/img/11.jpg
Guest Guest Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Whoops, I think this should work. http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs28/f/2008/058/e/5/Kushina_by_jehanaruto.jpg So concerning Naruto, he knows everyone wants to fuck his mother? I suppose hes embarrased by her. Has he ever met any of her students in your stories, if so how do they interact? Does he ever think shes banging them? Man I wish someone would draw Kushina the way you visualise her, she'd be smoking hot.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Naruto's kinda like 15-16 in my head for these stories, while the students are around 12-14 so different clicks really. And met in passing, nothing more really because Minato has his hokage work, Naruto has his 'konoha 12' and kushina has her student/s. It's their own things to keep them occupied, nothing really to do with them. And yeah, that's pic I used.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 What was the interaction between the students and Naruto even if it was just in passing? Do Kushina's students have any opinion of Naruto? Does Kushina ever wonder why Naruto is acting so rebellious and distancing himself from her? Does she still love her husband and son or is she closer with her students? These are questions specifically pertaining to your stories btw.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Not really, the only know he's strong as hell. Just passing greetings. Kushina has a good idea, the way her students leer and grope her are dead give aways. They're basically netorare stories, so while Kushina loves them, the sex-slave only does what her master wants after she's fucked completely stupid. You got a good idea of what you want to do with what you're writing?
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I have got some really good ideas and have put a lot of them down already. I'm still curious to ask about your stories though if you don't mind, I feel that if I wanted to make something that had a lot of chapters I'd really want as much info as possible to set the scene. Right now I'm kind of more interested in the relationship between Kushina and Naruto because if it does get that far (which I'm pretty sure it will) they will have to interact at some point. I kind of want to know how you would write a scene between them say after Kushina getting home from a mission (probably after being fucked by her students no doubt). Would Naruto be suspicious of her cheating or would he be completely oblivious. Also since Naruto is really strong in your story would her students be worried if he found out that they're banging his mom? If it went on for a long time I'd want to develop the characters and their relationships/interactions with each other.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Seeing as Naruto is my favourite character in the manga, I'd preferably have him off banging the likes of Ino/Hinata/Tenten/Sakura/Satsuki(Fem Sasuke) and the like or make it Naruko and eventually have her join in on the sex. If I settled on Naruko I'd have the student be an orphan and she could act kind of like a teasing older sister.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Naruto is my favourite character aswell and I personally prefer him in the story compared to Naruko. In fact, I'd say its almost a must that hes in the story for me to write/read it. I guess cos you can kind of put yourself in Naruto's position in the story but not really in Kushina's or the students/Naruko's. I know its only meant to be smut but I like the little details, I think they enrich the story, and if the story is long those details seem more important. Naruto fucking other girls would be fun, but since Kushina is the main character I wonder what a Naruto/Kushina interaction would look like. Also I wouldn't just want to have her fucking her students but random young teens aswell. As you said in the OP "playfully flirt with a few young teens who flirt with her when she's outside the village after completing a mission and have things get out of hand before she knows it." Could you elaborate on this scenario aswell.
Guest TheWarlockofChaos Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I like all of the bolded, the casino one doesn't interest me as much but the others do. Could you expand on them please, if you paint the picture for me I think I can get a better feel of what to write. I generally consider myself to be a fairly competent writer, but I'm not to good at creating scenarios. Okay, so those are the one you like? Very well then I shall do my best, A. I am good at coming up with Ideas but not writing them so don't feel bad about it okay. They could be simple enough. It isn't a far stretch from canon to say Kushina was a prankster and really competitive.So she could find it amusing to tease teens that are practically drooling over her. Or hell, with a Genin team she could lose a bet which leads to fucking. The noble one, basically if they're high up enough in the government Kushin would be forced to obey them. (Mind you, in real serious fanfiction that would be completely wrong because the daimyo really do have little power in the villages, not to mention they're easy targets for assassination.) Actually, according to the few things we hear and see about her is that she was Most definetely both a prankster and competitive (in entering the academy she refused to be outdone and pummeled those who made fun of her and Naruto was compared to her by the adults when it came to pranking. I agree with JordoZ about her teasing teens while on a mission for the first two things you bolded A, would be a good way for said teen(s) to get her in the sack or wherever they decide to do the deed. The noble one, is one I like better though JordoZ is right that in most circumstances it wouldn't work. There is a way to avoid that though: you could have the nobles be more responsible for Konoha's money or supply of necessary supplies and threaten Kushina with not supplying Konoha to the point that they would starve. I'd generally go the route where Kushina is repressed, due to her husband being too soft with her in bed and only average sized. Not really slutty in the sense that she'd blow anyone who wanted her, but enough that she has no qualms about teasing teenagers practically drooling over her. I like to see build up before the sex starts, some examples can be found on page 2 of this thread where I posted some un-finished lemons of my own. It would be best kept secret since her husband is the hokage and would probably butcher whoever was banging her. A cheating fic because again Minato would murder whoever was banging his wife. You can add Naruko if you want, if not just mention them in passing to clear up that she is a milf. Sexy-outfits are a must, is all that really comes to mind fully. If you however do go the NTR route you would need to make the Male protagonist a genius in the ninja arts or posses a serious level bloodline in order for them to survive against Minato. Another and far more easier way would be for Kushina to assassinate Minato herself after she is completely and helplessly devoted to her "Master". For the first bolded sentence: This could be in Konoha (In which case it could be a canon character such as Kiba and Sasuke or an OC for people Naruto's age to people such as Asuma, Mizuki, or Jiraiya) or she felt the need to relax after a mission and goes to an onsen on her way back. The teen flirts with her and she is sexually frustrated along with him being really good at seducing her so she accepts and has the fucking of her life For the second scenario: It is pretty much how it sounds: A group of cocky, fit well-hung teens see an absolute MILF of a kunoichi and decide to see if they can fuck her and a sexually frustrated Kushina is flattered and accepts. For the third scenario: This one has already been built up upon for the most part. What we have is a incredibly lecherous, highly-skilled, well-hung young shinobi usually an OC (if you do not want to imagine an OC pick somebody likely to want to fuck Kushina such as Kiba or Sasuke). Kiba is considered to be a massive horndog willing to go and fuck any hot female and Sasuke seems to fit the profile of someone to fuck Naruto's mother in order to prove his Uchiha superiority over his rival .JordoZ has several scenarios for this very idea on page 2 if you want even more.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Hmm. For instance. while she's staying at a hotel coming back from a mission in the hall she passes by a teens and hears him say something like, "Damn, check the tits and ass on that babe." cuz he says it loudly and boldly Kushina turns and winks replying "Oh you like them, here i'll give you a much better show." then continues on walking, making sure to strut, swinging her ass from side to side as she walked. Then later on she could meet up with him again and he boldly speaks up with, "Hey baby, you gonna give me an even better show this time?" Followed by teasing dialogue by her and possibly a wager of some kind that the kid wins to get her in bed with him.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 In reply to warlock, I don't really like Sasuke or Kiba for lemons. Sasuke is far to emo-like and asexual, he literally cares nothing for girls in canon, And Kiba? Well, he's the butt monkey of the konoha 11, him doing it just makes it lose its luster for me.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 You'd probably be better thinking up the flirting yourself or with help from warlock here, I absolutely suck at it.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I like that scenario a lot. I'd also like to hear about the arrogant noble one aswell, again I'm terrrible at scenarios. I definitely won't do Sasuke or Kiba (especially Sasuke), it will be an OC for sure, or how would you feel about a character like Chojuro or Omoi banging Kushina, since Chojuro likes Mei he'd probably like Kushina aswell. Since it'll probably be a long story I'd like to make Kushina a more psychological/deeper character aswell. Like what is Kushina's psychology in your stories? I'd still like to read your interpretation of a Naruto/Kushina interaction aswell lol.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Also if either of you have any more ideas for this they'd be appreciated. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59800-milf-hinata-gets-banged-by-her-sons-friends/?p=372793
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 I asked for Oc's to be honest because I've seen literally like all canon male's and find them lacking. The Oc's though can be specifically tailored for the situation. What do you mean by psychology? Personality wise, I make her bored. Her husband is always working, he son is constantly training to take her husbands position, her sex life is terrible and she's an S-class kunoichi so missions are boring aswell. She's a bit too old for pranks now, so after heading to the market once in her kunoichi gear, she notices one teen practically drooling over her body and decides to tease him, finding amusing out of his reactions. Do you know what kind of story you're going with? What kind of Kushina your going with and how the first chapter is going to go, the first time she cheats on her husband and is fucked silly by a well hung teen?
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Well what goes on in her mind, does she ever feel any guilt about fucking kids the same age or younger than her son? I assume that this isn't really normal behaviour in your stories? In your stories is Kushina one of the sluttiest women in the ninja world? What if others found out? I'm sure her students mothers wouldn't be too pleased to find out the Hokage wife is banging their sons. What I'm looking for are hidden depths to Kushina's character, it might seem a bit heavy for a lemon but if I'm going to make a story like this I'd rather go all out than just make it mindless smut.
JordoZ Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Mostly, Kushina gets a taboo thrill. She's cheating on her husband, with her student who's even younger than her son/daughter.And nh, Kushina isn't generally a slut, she's only been with Minato before and she's tired of his constant soft-core crap. Minato always makes love, Kushina wants to fuck. Her teasing is both due to her prankster mentality and the thrill she gets when she knows that the student she teases or teens she teases will quite probably head home and start jacking off to her. The student as I said before, I always make an orphan so that they can grow up without parental guidance and thus be dawn into lust and debauchery early on without any trouble.
Guest A Posted May 9, 2015 Report Posted May 9, 2015 Its stuff like that that I find interesting, what are the characters feelings towards the situation. Also how do the student(s) feel knowing their having sex with the Hokage's wife and the mother of an extremely powerful Naruto. In your stories if her students met Naruto after they had been banging Kushina how would they interact with each other? (Obviously Naruto wouldn't know his mom had just been banged by them)
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