Guest sneaky666 Posted November 4, 2014 Report Posted November 4, 2014 Resume : After sorting his Slytherin, the older students (son of Death Eaters, or father to illegal activities) decides to avenge Lord Voldemort, turning femharry in sex slave. At one point in the first year, he forces her to sign a slavery contract and prostitute to Hogwarts student. During the holidays, instead of returning to the Dursleys, they sent him to a brothel they just opened to make money. They also decided to add more girls to fill the brothel (Susan Bones, Daphne Greengrass, Fleur Delacour, Nymphadora Tonks, Katie Bell, Alicia Spinnet ...). Tag : M/F, M+/F, M+/F+, F/F gang-bang, orgy, genderbend, rape, prostitution, mind break, humiliation, exhibitionism, voyeurism, light torture, slave, (obligatory), mind control, drug, bestiality, inflation, big cock, lactation, big butt, big breast, watersport, impregnation, pregnant, birth, piercing, tattoo, sex magic, body transformation... (optional) No scat, guro, hard torture... Quote
Guest hellz swordsman Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Please for the love of gods someone write this Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 4, 2015 Report Posted August 4, 2015 This is beyond silly. How would Dumbledore not notice such a thing? Quote
Guest sneaky666 Posted August 4, 2015 Report Posted August 4, 2015 This is beyond silly. How would Dumbledore not notice such a thing? Several solution that involves bashing Dumbledore, a femharry easy to manipulate, an offering to dark family for the peace or protect the muggle (the dark family do not provide or will not vote for law against the muggle or muggleborn...). If you think there are possibilities. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 4, 2015 Report Posted August 4, 2015 Didn't Voldemort nearly secure immortality through a teacher in Harry's first year failing only by the intervention of the students? A fragment of his soul and basilisk also escaped his notice. He was kind of on top of the whole Sirius Black thing- or was he? He was sideswiped by impostor Moody and the Goblet of Fire. He also allowed himself to be manipulated by Umbridge and forced into resignation. Dumbledore is kind of an idiot when you think about it, at least as a school administrator. Heck, if anything he'd find out about Harry in the Brothel by visiting it. Ew, maybe that's why he doesn't say anything about it. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Ah, so you're brutally mauling the canon version of Dumbledore in order to make any of this actually viable. Still, it's not just Dumbledore's character that gets thrashed in the process, you're pretty much dumbing down everyone else for the sake of this smut going the way you want it. That doesn't make for a very appealing story, smut or no smut. Because really, this seems more like a bashing fic that's just using the smut to bash the characters to a whole new level. Quote
lissa Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Does it really matter if its not canon? The writer just has to put that its AU. It's called creative licence. If you don't think you would enjoy their story, you don't have to read it. It's honestly that simple. DemonGoddess and BronxWench 2 Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 Again, just because it's an alternative universe doesn't mean everyone's IQ drops by a 100 and no one has the spine to fight back. Write porn all you like, but stop mangling the HP setting and characters in the process. Make it actually make sense. Make it long-term. Make it a good story. Is asking for a good story really that much? Quote
No_1 Posted August 6, 2015 Report Posted August 6, 2015 (edited) Way to be a dick guest_guest_* Let me guess, you're the same guy who came across the Naruto SPH/Cuck topic to complain about some of the people there not speaking perfect English Edited August 6, 2015 by No_1 Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Let me guess, you're the same guy who came across the Naruto SPH/Cuck topic to complain about some of the people there not speaking perfect English. No, I wasn't in that thread or that portion of the forum at all, since Naruto isn't my thing, given I've never read the manga or watched the anime, so looking into its porn would be utterly pointless. And I certainly didn't bother anyone about their spelling or knowledge of English grammar, given that I'm not a native speaker myself either. Anyway, I see you made something similar here in the HP subsection, and I imagine it's more or less the same stuff for Naruto. Uninspired, really, and sadly what I've grown accustomed to seeing lately. I bet jojo is there too. It's always the same drivel, being twisted around to make it look like it's something new. Ah, well, I get that folks got their tastes they'd like to see catered too, there just seems to be an epidemic of the same crowd almost seemingly spamming the same things over and over, worded in barely different manner, intent on mangling the setting that I've come to enjoy and love for the very short thrill of seeing a character they dislike bashed over and over. Yes. Yes it is. Shush there, I found some amazing smutfics (Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen remains one of my absolute favorites, along with those Harry/Pansy "It's Just Sex" stories) here, I'm just hoping to see more of their like come again sometime soon. Quote
JayDee Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Looking at my stories, I've made Amelia Bones a rapist, Flitwick a necrophile, Luna a lesbian, McGonagall a student seducer, Harry a secret glory holer, Draco an enslaver and Hermione a dog fucker. And only the Flitwick thing has any kind of subtext in canon. Maybe.As such, I fear that I've done more than many to propogate the sort of terrible PWP stories that shit all over the HP characters, settting, and plots.In HP fanfic terms - I'm a monster. I do things in the setting that make no possible sense. My muse was so disgusted they packed up and went off around the world for eight months, and then came back and forced me to write a second person story. And even I wasn't able to work out how the "big butt, big breast" requirement could possibly work in a story that involves "femHarry" "in the first year" in a "brothel". It's like the OP is the only pedophile in the world who doesn't remember what the other 11 year olds looked like when they were a kid. Maybe the character could be played by one of the ladies linked in thebooblover's always entertaining and sometimes quite scary requests.Still, as long as readers and writers are happy I suppose the "Don't like, Don't read" mantra makes a lot of sense. I always like to suggest it for any stories likely to cause distress, although sadly I still have English majors emailing me in tears over my grammar and complete lack of understanding of the vocative comma, which I thought was a Brooklyn low-fi band. Possibly the best way to protest unliked requests is to make liked requests, or write liked stories, or support liked authors doing the proper-in-character-canon-compliant smut with concrit, or other comments. Positivity is more effective than negativity! Which is why I, as a negative asshole, never achive much of anything and instead just complain about stuff that pisses me off on the internet all the time. Like magusfang. That guy... *shakes fist* I kid... I kid... or do I? BronxWench 1 Quote
sneaky666 Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Looking at my stories, I've made Amelia Bones a rapist, Flitwick a necrophile, Luna a lesbian, McGonagall a student seducer, Harry a secret glory holer, Draco an enslaver and Hermione a dog fucker. And only the Flitwick thing has any kind of subtext in canon. Maybe. As such, I fear that I've done more than many to propogate the sort of terrible PWP stories that shit all over the HP characters, settting, and plots. In HP fanfic terms - I'm a monster. I do things in the setting that make no possible sense. My muse was so disgusted they packed up and went off around the world for eight months, and then came back and forced me to write a second person story. And even I wasn't able to work out how the "big butt, big breast" requirement could possibly work in a story that involves "femHarry" "in the first year" in a "brothel". It's like the OP is the only pedophile in the world who doesn't remember what the other 11 year olds looked like when they were a kid. Maybe the character could be played by one of the ladies linked in thebooblover's always entertaining and sometimes quite scary requests. Still, as long as readers and writers are happy I suppose the "Don't like, Don't read" mantra makes a lot of sense. I always like to suggest it for any stories likely to cause distress, although sadly I still have English majors emailing me in tears over my grammar and complete lack of understanding of the vocative comma, which I thought was a Brooklyn low-fi band. Possibly the best way to protest unliked requests is to make liked requests, or write liked stories, or support liked authors doing the proper-in-character-canon-compliant smut with concrit, or other comments. Positivity is more effective than negativity! Which is why I, as a negative asshole, never achive much of anything and instead just complain about stuff that pisses me off on the internet all the time. Like magusfang. That guy... *shakes fist* I kid... I kid... or do I? For the big butt and big breast, i talk when Harry have fifteen, or Tonk, or Fleur (and is optionnal). Before we can be increased the age of acceptance at Hogwart. And why you talk of bashing? There is no need, Dumbledore is a human, so he make error (read the book and reflect on the consistency of the scenario) and it's a PWP than i propose, not a complex story. Guest_Guest, You rails against this kind of fic, but it is thousands fic of happy sex, romance... i can understand you like that, myself if the fic is well written i like that (EuphemiaXLelouch or KanekiX Rize than i love), but PWP like that are very rare in comparaison, it's bad wanting porno sometimes? Like say JayDee, don't like, don't read And JayDee, i love Amelia Bones like a rapist, this a character too little use and your fic is very good and if you intersted in the request I would be really happy if you muse isn't too disgusted. Quote
JayDee Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Thank you! but sorry, 15 years and younger is too young for me to write or think about and even if they were a couple years older I don't think I could make it work. Still, I'm sure someone will take it for you BronxWench 1 Quote
sneaky666 Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Thank you! but sorry, 15 years and younger is too young for me to write or think about and even if they were a couple years older I don't think I could make it work. Still, I'm sure someone will take it for you Thank you for your encouragement and i hope you still write us good fic. Quote
Guest Guest Posted August 8, 2015 Report Posted August 8, 2015 Femdraco would be a more viable option though for this type of plot. After losing her father's protection because of his capture at the DoM, some older students decide they want to pay her back for her attitude during her first couple of years at Hogwarts. etc. Quote
Guest hellz swordsman Posted August 26, 2015 Report Posted August 26, 2015 Please God right the Harry potter one Quote
Guest hellz swordsman Posted June 27, 2016 Report Posted June 27, 2016 Will this story ever be written? Quote
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