angeldust Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 (edited) Unfortunately the way magus has painted Rick that would be counter to his attitude in life. Having Mike see Rick as a father is not so far fetched though, it seems Rick like Mrs Smith takes a personal interest in his students and their well being. I also can see Mike, Evan, and Rick wanting to learn fighting techniques but then again maybe Rick was Special Forces during his enlistment time, based on his age he was around during the mandatory draft, which could add to the groups abilities. I hope that the funeral is for one of the following: Evan, Mike's parent(s), Hans, Cat or Pete. Evan/Cat would cause the group to rethink their vengeance and be more black ops like, Mikes Parents would enable him to move in and become best bud to Max while Pete would send his mother over the edge blaming Max. Of course it could be Jeeves too. Another aspect that needs expanding upon is how the group dynamics has affected Mike's, Leia's & Jenna's circle of friends and their relationships. After all since being brought in it seems like they have left those friends at the wayside. Ah well we will see when we see. Oh and what's holding up those new chapters? I thought you had insomnia or something. Edited October 5, 2014 by angeldust Quote
Hundybuns Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 One thing I really love about your stories Magnus is the way it brings people to discuss them. I know I have given my opinions from time to time but your stories are so good that we ( I mean your loyal readers) have to discuss them. I hope you don't go by Angeldust's suggestion that you kill Cat. I kjnow she is only new to the story but she fits in with the twins so good. As for the new chapters take your time and do your usual excellent job on both Girls and Northstar. Quote
magusfang Posted October 5, 2014 Author Report Posted October 5, 2014 Poor Cat, she'll be ok; remember when everyone was calling for Becca's hide! No Cat is here to stay, it was time for the twins to have a little sister to teach how to be evil! As for the different characters interaction...don't worry, I have plans for some headbuttong....he he he Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 Poor Cat, she'll be ok; remember when everyone was calling for Becca's hide! No Cat is here to stay, it was time for the twins to have a little sister to teach how to be evil! As for the different characters interaction...don't worry, I have plans for some headbuttong....he he he As I have said before you are an excellent writer as evidenced by the discussion you bring out of your fans. And of course the eternal question - when is the next chapter. "If it doesn't start with a 4 and end with a 5 i don't want it! (I will make and exception for a 44 though!)" I would agree EXCEPT when physical size of the piece would dictate something much smaller but still reasonably effective. B Quote
magusfang Posted October 5, 2014 Author Report Posted October 5, 2014 That's my toy, nice and light, does kick a bit though Quote
Sniper014 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 Really people. You mean after reading all the chapters in the series BITG and Northstar and this one GITG you are upset about the girls making out with each other and the young girls that have been rescued by Max and the girls to get upset because they come onto Max and Rick and any other members in the family or house. Get off it. Remember these children have been conditioned to be used by adults for their pleasure. I have not seen any of the adults in these stories go after the girls or children first. In fact they tell the girls that it is not right and that the girls do not have to do this at all. in fact it was Suzy that told Rick to go ahead treat Tess with kindness. Remember Suzy, Becca, Cat, Jazz and Taji and Nadi were all abused by their captives and Max and the family have treated them with love and showing them nothing but love. If you are trying to get Magus in trouble with this site to have him banned by doing a witch hunt on him i suggest that you stop know was banned from one nameless site do to the holier than thou people. Remember this is and Adult site that only allows people 18 year and older on it. We are all adults and I for one like to stories on this site. Sure hate to see Magus banned from this site because now people don't like his writing or you really never read all his stories and are just reviewing this one to start trouble. Magus keep up the good work and I will be waiting for the newer chapters as they are released. The only problem is that I read them so fast that I start reading more stories on this site and other sites waiting for your next chapters. None on the nameless site though. Hundybuns 1 Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 That's my toy, nice and light, does kick a bit though Reminds me of our T shirt exchange. Real question: when do we get the next chapter> B Quote
magusfang Posted October 5, 2014 Author Report Posted October 5, 2014 Working on it, but remember its Sunday and I get sidetracked on Sunday... Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 Sniper, you need to calm down, whats with accusing me and others of trying to get Magus banned? We are just stating our opinions on what we liked and disliked, Magus, i would think likes these types of comments to see if his fans like the direction of the story, like when he was going to have a free for all orgy with all the teens in BITG, but people spoke out against and he changed it. I for one have been with Magus since he first posted Ch.1 of BITG, then followed him here when he got banned from the other site. I love his stories, so i wouldnt want him banned. I was just stating my opinion, like everybody else. So calm your tits, no one wants Magus banned from this site. Quote
Guest futalov10 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 I would agree that having people talk about and debate your stories is a mark of a great writer.. I would say Rick is ex special forces becouse he did not bat an eye at the carnage that max brought while others where dumb struck. I would like to see max put Hans in a soulless 6 year-old girl husk. keep him in a pod on a small stand alone server that only he can get access to leave him in the hands of some very capable demons to reenact all the hells max has been privy to. With instructions to stop messing with him and let fill love and family then take it away and start all over agean. Then stick in a closet and put a sine on the door that says do not open untill hell has froozen over. and walk a way. Quote
magusfang Posted October 5, 2014 Author Report Posted October 5, 2014 (edited) I asked DG and she stated that their really isn't an age ban, I belive someone said something about zygote on zygote action LOL I do try not to show sex with the very young, just sort of hint at it. But that being said, teens and adults sex does show up in the stories, though I try to keep it pretty vanilla. A lot of the stories I've read here make mine look like a sunday school lecture I would agree that having people talk about and debate your stories is a mark of a great writer.. I would say Rick is ex special forces becouse he did not bat an eye at the carnage that max brought while others where dumb struck. I would like to see max put Hans in a soulless 6 year-old girl husk. keep him in a pod on a small stand alone server that only he can get access to leave him in the hands of some very capable demons to reenact all the hells max has been privy to. With instructions to stop messing with him and let fill love and family then take it away and start all over agean. Then stick in a closet and put a sine on the door that says do not open untill hell has froozen over. and walk a way. Ah so don't hold back any... Edited October 5, 2014 by magusfang Quote
magusfang Posted October 5, 2014 Author Report Posted October 5, 2014 (edited) Oh, just read something; I was gonna make Rick just ex-military, but I'm liking the ex-special forces...makes him available immidiately, no time in the sim...or maybe just a little to knock the rust off... Or better yet, Max takes him in the sim and Rick kicks his ass! I could have fun with that! Edited October 5, 2014 by magusfang COJimmyV 1 Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 I wouldnt say totally kick Max's ass, but maybe put up a good fight. I mean Max is also trained in various fighting styles and techniques, I would assume he also downloaded special forces training through his chip. Plus the extra strength from his mechanical arms and legs. It would be a nice fight to read about, thats for sure! Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted October 5, 2014 Report Posted October 5, 2014 Working on it, but remember its Sunday and I get sidetracked on Sunday... OK I'll repeat myself (not doublepost-damn security thing!) '"damn the football - full keyboard ahead!" B Quote
Sniper014 Posted October 6, 2014 Report Posted October 6, 2014 Sniper, you need to calm down, whats with accusing me and others of trying to get Magus banned? We are just stating our opinions on what we liked and disliked, Magus, i would think likes these types of comments to see if his fans like the direction of the story, like when he was going to have a free for all orgy with all the teens in BITG, but people spoke out against and he changed it. I for one have been with Magus since he first posted Ch.1 of BITG, then followed him here when he got banned from the other site. I love his stories, so i wouldnt want him banned. I was just stating my opinion, like everybody else. So calm your tits, no one wants Magus banned from this site. Sorry, it just that I never saw anything until today about the feelings about the girls activity. I have been with him also since the first chapter of BITG. I just looked and it says that I joined here on 14 August. Seems that the pages prior to 12 August did not appear on my computer. Finally got them all back and reread them and did notice that some people did voice their feelings about the way the story was going. Again I am sorry if I came off wrong. It was statements like that that got him and other writers banned from the other site and I just did not want to see it happen to him here. Again I am sorry if I offended anyone with my remarks. I really enjoy the stories that he writes and like I told him I am looking forward to more chapters. Quote
COJimmyV Posted October 6, 2014 Report Posted October 6, 2014 Kinda hoping the funeral will be for the Sheriff. Just hoping his replacement is more of a help to Max than a hindrance. I also hope something is done about bitchy Miss Crawford. She either needs to get laid or have Max save her life so she changes her tune. Otherwise, Rick needs to can her. While she kinda provides antagonistic comic relief, she's annoying as Hell and certainly doesn't belong in a school. Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted October 6, 2014 Report Posted October 6, 2014 If they do have a replacement for the sheriff i hope its that one cop who saved Max from the five guys in that jail scene. I think it was the same cop who told him he was a hero after the dog attack, not sure though, cant remember. He's kinda young but hey, who knows.. Quote
magusfang Posted October 6, 2014 Author Report Posted October 6, 2014 So, just realized I named two characters damn near the same, gets kinda confusing. So when you read the wedding scene just remember Han is a little boy and Hans is a crusty old priest! so: Crusty old Monk = Hans Little boy = Han Quote
angeldust Posted October 6, 2014 Report Posted October 6, 2014 Just make sure that Hans keeps his hands off of Han. Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted October 6, 2014 Report Posted October 6, 2014 Just make sure that Hans keeps his hands off of Han. Try saying that 6 times fast! B Quote
magusfang Posted October 7, 2014 Author Report Posted October 7, 2014 So was going to call the chapter A Wedding And A Funeral but I'm at 9000+ words and I just finished the Wedding lol; may have to change the tittle Quote
COJimmyV Posted October 7, 2014 Report Posted October 7, 2014 (edited) NOOOOOO....the longer the chapter, the better! Edited October 7, 2014 by COJimmyV Quote
Guest Rescue25 Posted October 7, 2014 Report Posted October 7, 2014 NOOOOOO....the longer the chapter, the better! I agree as long as the next 9000 doesn't take another week. B Quote
Guest futalov10 Posted October 7, 2014 Report Posted October 7, 2014 What if the twins and cat painted the punisher skull on the front of max,s breastplate an halos on the upper left breast of there's and Wight angle wings on the back. Big daddy the punished and his little garden angles. lol ok I know it is a little corny. but it dose kinda fit. Quote
angeldust Posted October 7, 2014 Report Posted October 7, 2014 Nah then you'd have Disney's lawyers showing up with a Mickey Mouse lawsuit about trade mark infringement. What he needs is "If you think I'm a Bad Ass you should meet my daughters" Remember their body armour is Star Wars Storm Troopers issue ... oops there's those pesky lawyers again. I hope we see Carol again soon, I liked her character. Quote
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