Sniper014 Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Okey I know that you and I are good with weapons, but to snap off 20 rounds without adjusting for windage is great. A great outcome to the match is that they tie each other. As to the Senator, would be neat if he met an accident in prison. They happen every day. Bury Kara's dad and mom so deep in hell that they never are seen or heard from again. Now, what is the status of Sarah and Charles telling Max about the Shadow Group. Is that going to be a lead in to the next book. Keep up the great story telling and will be waiting for the next release. Rescue25 1 Quote
jelad Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 (edited) you can't break up any of Max's children (Jazz, Tali, Cat or Jan). that's just not right. also I say go for the everlasting pain not a easy death for Kara's parents or the senator. Edited April 3, 2015 by jelad Rescue25 and COJimmyV 2 Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 I agree with reducing the amount of CHARACTERS, not just the girls in the Harem. Leaning towards fatally rather than them just leaving. Once there in Max's army, there's only one way out, death. You just can't be associated with that and expect the enemy to leave you alone when you don't want to fight anymore. And Magus if you really want to make your story believable, sometimes the good guys die too. But there are exceptions, like killing off one of Max's daughters. You just don't do that. And it'd be nice if the original six don't get PERMANENTLY killed hint, hint.Again people who can't be killed because they were mentioned in the future: Max, Amy, and Nadi. And Alice and May since they're androids....unless they nuke the house and destroy all the mainframes. Then destroy their bodies. So really the only members of the original six who can be killed are Emma and Marge. Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Oh and I hope Jazz wins, if not, let it be a tie. Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 (edited) Okey I know that you and I are good with weapons, but to snap off 20 rounds without adjusting for windage is great. A great outcome to the match is that they tie each other. As to the Senator, would be neat if he met an accident in prison. They happen every day. Bury Kara's dad and mom so deep in hell that they never are seen or heard from again. Now, what is the status of Sarah and Charles telling Max about the Shadow Group. Is that going to be a lead in to the next book. Keep up the great story telling and will be waiting for the next release. Snapping of twenty rounds in a minute using kentucky windage at 1000 yds and zapping your target is god like...took a little artistic liscence there Edited April 3, 2015 by magusfang Rescue25 1 Quote
Guest majormarioc Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 I cant find it going back and rereading it but I swear first couple times I read it that at the sheriff's funeral jazz was happy she had her eyes replaced so they were cool ones just like her daddy did you change that or was I reading it wrong because robot eyes would change how she aims quite a bit Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 No, she wished she had cool eyes like her daddy...she was sniping and wanted better vision Quote
Guest majormarioc Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 No, she wished she had cool eyes like her daddy...she was sniping and wanted better vision Lol thanks but I think she would love the upgrade especially if she looses Maby will bug max about it for a while till he says yes Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 Lol thanks but I think she would love the upgrade especially if she looses Maby will bug max about it for a while till he says yes And if it was up to him, she'd get em too! But there's a house full of women and I'm sure they would have some say, meaning all the say, in it. That's how it works in the real world. I am king of my castle and I can do whatever they say I want to COJimmyV, Rescue25 and darthel0101 3 Quote
Guest crazychickhull Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Give Kara's mum and dad to Evan's mum for a week to make up for what she's done win win both ways. Quote
Hundybuns Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Give Kara's mum and dad to Evan's mum for a week to make up for what she's done win win both ways. I like that idea. As for not killing the original six, I heartily agree. Rescue25 1 Quote
Samara Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 last chapter was great.. I have a hunch that in the next book max is going to gain a complete android body for himself.. hopefully after fulfilling his girls' requests obviously.. ( i meant babies off course) what is you thoughts about this magus ? pray tell.. I like that idea. As for not killing the original six, I heartily agree. hopefully no one dies though.. Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 last chapter was great.. I have a hunch that in the next book max is going to gain a complete android body for himself.. hopefully after fulfilling his girls' requests obviously.. ( i meant babies off course) what is you thoughts about this magus ? pray tell.. hopefully no one dies though.. perhaps....some interesting things coming out of the pods perhaps Samara and COJimmyV 2 Quote
angeldust Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Now think if Jazz dies, being Max's girl while Tali is Emma's, All of Hell would rain down on the perpetrators. I also believe that unknown to Max & the others that Tali, Jazz & Cat have been training the girls in the Sims just encase they are ever attacked at home again. Most will be like highly trained soldiers with a twin's special tactical squad of highly efficient shooters that could be dispatched like SEALS, RECON, SAS/SBS, JTF2; well you get the idea. Also Cat has trained those capable to be Medics. Weapon wise Jazz&Tali, with Cat's help, have created weapons adjusted to the users need & Cat has had Mfg Lab come up with great medical supplies above anything currently in use. Legion, not wanting to be left out, has had the nanites study the Mainframe to grow in knowledge too. All are keeping this close to their chests and pledge Jeeves and Albert to secrecy explaining that they would only deploy under special circumstances. All the girls have participated along with Han and some other of the adoptees as they all love their Master & family and have sworn to make sure no one hurts them ever again. Yeah; I know that I'm running amok but that is something that My writer's mind went to when they were attacked. The first time they all show up with gear in tact The Elders scream No, but they are in no position to actually refuse this special help and are amazed when the 'Posse' prove to be on the level of at least Amy. When this happens, yes they do lose some. From that point on Hans, Rick & Tat take over providing weekly training levels. Steal what you want fangface just remember make it serious and funny too. Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 are you gonna update today? Probably tommorow late, working on opening the pool today...haven't got much writing done. Samara and COJimmyV 2 Quote
Samara Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Probably tommorow late, working on opening the pool today...haven't got much writing done. great.. Quote
Rescue25 Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Probably tommorow late, working on opening the pool today...haven't got much writing done. In other words 2-3 days. B Quote
magusfang Posted April 3, 2015 Author Report Posted April 3, 2015 In other words 2-3 days. B That hurts man...but yeah Quote
Hundybuns Posted April 3, 2015 Report Posted April 3, 2015 Just like the army, HURRY UP and WAIT. Take your time we will still be here. Rescue25 1 Quote
angeldust Posted April 4, 2015 Report Posted April 4, 2015 It's an Easter Egg rather than an Easter Present, you've got to hunt for it. Going for 60+ again huh? Quote
Guest jrdz14 Posted April 4, 2015 Report Posted April 4, 2015 what hapoened with the man that was supposed to be his dad? Quote
magusfang Posted April 4, 2015 Author Report Posted April 4, 2015 what hapoened with the man that was supposed to be his dad? He was actually a terrorist and he's in jail. He was why Sarah and Charles came and they will take him into custody and back to Washinton D.C. once cat says its safe for her to travel. Remember the police seargant said if she didn't hurry up and get better, he might just shoot him. The guy pretending to be his father was actually a rogue CIA agent named Umstead. Quote
Rescue25 Posted April 4, 2015 Report Posted April 4, 2015 That hurts man...but yeah Been reading your stuff too long. B It's an Easter Egg rather than an Easter Present, you've got to hunt for it. Going for 60+ again huh? Damn sure hope so! B Quote
Sniper014 Posted April 5, 2015 Report Posted April 5, 2015 (edited) Magus You and your family have a Happy Easter. The love of my life wanted the Fifty Anniverisary of the Sound of Music for Easter and I got it for her with a dozen roses. She got teary eye because she said that she did not get anything for me and I told her she gave me her hand and soul in marriage 34 yrs ago and in July it will be 35 yrs. Edited April 5, 2015 by Sniper014 Samara 1 Quote
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